Office Nok-Jhok!!---A Saavan poem...

Posted: 13 years ago
Dear all
Once again, Am writing some lines about our beloved Saavan..If its nice and apppealing, I wld appreciate all ur good comments..Even if its dull and trite, plz comment good things plz😳 
 
 
 
OFFICE NOK-JHOK
 
The office staff began the humdrum
Making the hours and money flow.
 
We are both here and now dear
But to romance and love forever.
 
Serious and sincere, calm and collected
You seem to be poised and presented.
 
But with me around to disturb and irritate
How can we both ever concentrate.
 
Its office Nok-Jhok working overtime
Entangling and webbing us everytime.
 
Geethu and Maris  always unleash their creativity
As Saavan  we accept their adoration in all humility
Edited by maris08 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely as always, Maris! :D
Posted: 13 years ago
very creatively written, Maris!!! 👏
Posted: 13 years ago
WoW Maris Very Well Written...Great and Superb....👍🏼
Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful, Maris!!!👏👏
Posted: 13 years ago
Wo-ho Maris! Very well written!
Posted: 13 years ago
Maris - I don't know how you do it!!  Very talented.
Posted: 13 years ago
Wowie!!! Lovely Maris! Brings back memories as Shravan teased Saachi in the office 😳
Posted: 13 years ago
Again a beautiful poem from you maris!!!!

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