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-pyaar mein kabhi kabhi-

Part 2

rano-chal Geet beta, tujhse khoob saari baten karni hai...
geet-chalo mamma main aati hoon!!!

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rano is waiting for geet in her room. Geet enters moments later.

geet- Haan mamma...chalo batao...kya hua itne din yahaan pe. Maan ka koi letter ya call aaya.Kaise hai woh? Yahaan kab aayega?
rano- Sabr rakh..abhi aayii aur shuru ho gayi.mujhe to laga tha ki sheher ke bahar padhne ke baad tere bolne mein kuch kami aayegi pur nahi...tu to tu hi rahegi (pats her)
geet pats herself as if she has done something great! mamma..please batao na koi message aaya ki nahi...itne saalo se usne ek bhi letter nahi likha...main to yeh bhi nahi jaanti ki gadha dikhta kaisa hoga...
rano- Geet, uska koi phone nahi aaya, ab to maaji( Maan's daadi) ka bhi phone nahi aata tera haal-chal poochne ke liye...aur tu bata wahan sub kaisa hai...kaun kaun dost hai...koi yahaan se hai ki nahi..tu khush to hai na?
geet- oh mamma, tum to aise pooch rahi ho jaise main college se nahi sasural se aa rahi hoon!!!Embarrassed
geet gets one light slap and goes to sleep. In her room, her memories with Maan were far more vivid than her college.Here in her room, she had herphotos with him,his toys, one of his old slippers.At her hostel room in BHU, her friend rashmi had dominated the room with Ranbir Kapoor and Imran Khan posters which seemed yukk in Geet's opinion!
She missed her one-time buddy alot here more than she did in BHU. She would be in her hometown for next 2 months and that was more than she could bear. Tears were rolling down her cheeks as her mom's words echoed in her mind 'Geet, uska koi phone nahi aaya'
babaji aisa koi karta hai kya bhala? mujhse promise kiya tha ki nahi ki letter likhega...ek baar milega na to mooh tod doongi...haan!

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Khurana Mansion (Delhi) next morning

daadi- nakul..kahaan ho.
nakul- ji kahiye
daadi- nakul, Maan bete kahan hai...gym mein...achcha hum jaake baat karte hai...aap jayee

daadima reaches the gym area where Maan is practising his martial arts

Maan

daadi- Maan beta, aapse kuch baat karni thi?
she was talking to a handsome young man of 21, who was Geet's Maan only in name because he had turned to a very quiet fellow because of his dad's early death and had a cold and hard exterior... The reason why he hadn't called or communicated Geet was because of his father's untimely death which left him as the MD of Khurana construction at the age of 20, when he was still studying. He had to manage the company and his studies even which had made him of very subtle nature, who never wanted to mingle with girls because he considered him as distraction in his life. He would have almost forgotten geet if he daadima hadn't mentioned her everytime she talked about Handa family.
maan- kahiye na daadi ma, kya hua?
daadi- Maan beta, aap na nahi kahenge. Aapko yaad hai Karan, aapka dost?
maan- haan daadima, kya hua karan ko?
daadi- beta Karan ki shaadi ho rahi hai Arohi se? aur aapko humare saath chalna padega..hum pooch nahi rahen hai,bata rahe hai aapko, Adi office ka kaam sambhal lenge. Aaj aap office nahi jayenge aur shaam ko wahaan jaane ki tayaari karenge. Chaliye jaake fresh ho lijiye..
maan- lekin daadi ma...main kais..
daadi- humne kaha na maan pooch nahi rahe hai... bata rahe hai aapko!
maan- daadima ne bhi kahan phasa diya




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Nice start but y maan stop writting her???

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Originally posted by aditiwalia56

Nice start but y maan stop writting her???

 Have a reading of part 2 you will know!! neways he didn't have any time because he had to manage the company and his studies so...
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hey thanks dear for dis lovely update n for d pm............

geet is very cute bt i wonder hw maan will behave wid her wen dey meet at dat wedding............
update soon

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nyc part
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Great part...!
Continue soon..

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loved it...

add me in ur pm list...........Embarrassed

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