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khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged

thanks 4 da pm n update...loved the convo between Maan n GeetTongue 

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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
wat did u plan for us yaar...
cant wait to know...
next update quick...plzzz

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Very nice update, par jaldi se inki shaadi karado.

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continue soon

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when are you updating

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please update soooun

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when are you updating

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                                              Part 17

5 years later'

Geet had completed her studies and was now planning for PG course'but before that her family was planning to marry her to Maan so that he can accompany her to her follow-up course' They were engaged a month before and their marriage was in 4-days time'
Location- Geet's Room
Geet sat on her bed indulged in akdu's thoughts! She looks really gloomy'reason! Arey bhai! Maan hasn't called her since past 1 hour'.long time'isn't it'well it is for our love birds atlease
15 minutes later-
Her phone rings and she hurriedly picks up the call'
Geet- Hello Maan! Kahaan the aap'pichle ek ghante mein na koi message'na hi koi phone? What's wrong with you! Main yahaan baith ke bore ho rahi thi and you didn't feel the need to call?
Maan giggled- saans to le lo meri jaan!
Geet gasped and then giggled herself- lekin main phir bhi naraaz hoon!
Maan- theek hai'phir main baad mein phone karoonga'jab tumhara gussa thanda ho jaye'
Geet- arey nahi nahi! Aap bhi Maan!
Maan smiled'Geet- arey waah'aapki smile to badi changi hai?
Maan smiled again while Daadima eavesdropped to peer into their conversation'
Geet- Aap kya kar rahe hain?
Maan- tumse baat!
Geet- hey babaji! Uske alaava kya kar rahe hain'
Maan- tumhari photo dekh raha tha!
Geet blushed- haye! Main to mar jaanwa!
Maan smiled yet again- Geet!
Geet- Maan!
Maan- I love you so much!
Geet- I love you too Maan!
Daadima laughed which made Maan aware of her presence'
Maan- Geet'daadima! I'll call you later'bye!
Geet became sad- haan! Bye-shye!
Meanwhile Rano entered her room calling her'
Rano- oye Geet! Chal'gurudware jaana hai!
Geet- ji mamma'aap chalo'main do minute mein aayii!
Rano- jaldi aa'sab intezaar kar rahe hain!
Geet- ji mamma'
Geet hurriedly changed her dress and wore a Patiala suit which Maan had gifted her' She ran downstairns with lightning fast speed and accompanied her family to the Gurudwara!
Location- Khurana Mansion
Daadima- kisse baat kar rahe the Maan?
Maan blushed- kisi se bhi to nahi!
Daadi- aap Geet se baat kar rahe the na?
Maan turned pink- Daadima!
Daadi- aap sharma kyun rahe hain'woh aapki hone waali patni hain'aap unse baat to kar hi sakte hain na!
Maan was shocked- ji!
Daadima- humne'aapko unse milne se mana kiya hai'baat karne se thodi!
She patted Maan and left the room' Maan smiled alone at her thoughts and took out Geet's photo album'
This was the photo he had seen for the first time' at Karan's wedding! He was going through the photos when suddenly Annie peeked in!
Anvesha- Maan bhai!
Maan- Annie!
He got up and hugged her and then Agastya- Annie and Arjun's son! You must be wondering as to how Annie got married earlier than Maan' that's because she conceived Agastya before marriage and so they made Annie and Arjun marry!
Arjun came in and hugged Maan- Maan bhai! Mubarak ho! Aapko aur Geet ko bhi'aap humara taraf se use congratulate kar dijiye ga!
Maan smiled and nodded'
Annie- chaliye na bhai! Bahar sab aapka intezaar kar rahe hain' dance-shance ki tayyari ho rahi hai!
Maan- nahi Annie! Dance'yeh sab mere bas ki baat nahi hai!
Annie shot an angry glare and Maan- bhai!
Maan- achcha baba! Chalo!
Annie hugged him- that's like my bhai!
She kissed him and they proceeded to the hall'but before that Arjun pulled Annie
Arjun- tumne Maan bhai ko to kiss kar diya! Ab apne pati dev ko bhi oblige kar do!
Annie- dhatt!
Arjun held her closer-  please na!
Annie- Arjun'please'baad mein!
Arjun- nahi! I wont let you!
Annie sighed and then caressed his lips and immediately ran away blushing'Arjun gasped- haye!!!
Location- Hall- Khurana Mansion
Maan saw that his entire house had been decorated with flowers and lightings and Romeo, Adi and Manisha burned the dance floor with their moves'as soon as they saw Maan, they stopped'
Maan didn't give an angry glare'instead he joined them to shake a leg'
Handa Haweli
The preparations for Geet's marriage were almost done and both Geet and Rano took part with moist eyes' 

At night, Geet called Maan again but it was engaged...she sighed and dropped on the bed and slept!...

-Prev PART 16-
-Next PART 18-

Hope you enjoyed the Update!

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 18 May 2011 at 6:06am

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