Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 74)

pickachu IF-Stunnerz
pickachu
pickachu

Joined: 26 October 2009
Posts: 27731

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 6:02pm | IP Logged

                           FF:Revenge from the lover

                                             Part 12

 

Geet woke when she heard a knock on the door.She opened the door and saw nakul.

 

Nakul:Ma'am rahul saab aap se milna chahte hain.Woh necha drawing room main hain.

 

He went away.Geet didnot know who was rahul.But she went to drawing room.


 

Rahul:Hi geet bhabi! Main rahul hoon.Mere baba maan sir ka baba ka saath kaam karte tha.Mujhe dev sir ke maut ka afsoos hai.Mujhe inka bare main aik zaruri baat kar ne hai per mujhe samijh nahi aa raha ka main yeh baat aap se kaise karoon.

Geet(With tears in eyes):Please agar zaruri baat hai tu aap kha dein.

Rahul(Looking down):Aap shayad mere baat ka yakeen na karein per dev sir ka murder hua hai.

Geet(Shocked):Kya?Per yeh kaise ho sakta hai in ka tu accident hua hai.

Rahul:Nahi inka accident hua nahi tha karwaya gaya tha.Actually main police officer hoon.Maine investigate kiya hai tu mujhe pata chala hai ka kisse ne dev sir ke car ka breaks fail kar deye tha.Bohat pata karne ka baad mujhe iss banday ka naam pata chal gaya hai.Lekin inke pohanch bohat oper hai iss liye main kuch nahi kar sakta hoon.

Geet:Aap mujhe iss banda ka naam baatyein main maan se baat karte hoon.

Rahul:Please maan sir ko mat baataye ga kyuki inhone ne hi dev sir ka murder kiya hai.

Geet(Shocked):Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta.

Rahul:I'm sorry per aisa hua hai.Maan sir ne dev sir ka murder kiya hai.Per mujhe samijh nahi aa raha inhone dev sir ko kyu maarwaya hai.

 

Rahul's mobile rang.He attended the call and then said geet to takecare of herself and gave her number so that she could call him if she needed any help.Then he went away.Geet was still in shock.She went to her room and sat on her bed.

 

Geet(Thinking):Maan aisa nahi kar sakte......Per Inhone dev ko jail bhejwaya tha.........Kahin inhone ne mujh se shadi karna ka liye tu yeh sab nahi kiya.Tu kya maan ne sach main dev ko maara hai??Woh ab tak jo kar rahe tha woh sab drama tha kya??

 

She went to sleep while thinking this.

 

******************************************************************************************************

She saw a man's back who was sitting on his knees.She could hear his sobs.Suddenly she heard her mother calling her.She turned around and found her mother.She ran to her mother and hugged her.

 

Geet(Crying):Maa aap mujhe akele chor kar kyu chale gayein.Maa yahan mera koi apna nahi hai.

Usha(Wiped her tears):Nahi beta main tumhi akela chor kar nahi gaye.Tumhare pas main kisse ko chor kar gaye hoon.Jo tumhara bohat khayal rakhe ga (She pointed towards that person) Jao beta woh tumhara intezaar kar raha hai.Woh tumse bohat pyar karta hai.Aur main yeh bhi jante hoon ka tum bhi iss se pyar karte ho per yeh tum khud nahi jante.Iss ne tumhare waja se bohat dard saha hai.Ab isse aur dard mat dena.Ab daar mat karo iss ka pas jao jitne tumhi iss ke zarurat hai itne isse bhi tumhare zarurat hai.

Geet(In low voice):Dev

 

Geet was going to that person but something was stopping her.She went to him slowly and about to reach him.When he pushed her.She looked at him.She could not see his face but she saw blood and realised that person saved her while he hurted himself.She hugged that person and shocked to see his face.

 

Geet(Shouted):Maan!!!!!!!!!!

 

She woke up with a jerk and saw maan in the room.

 

Maan(Worried):geet tum theek tu hona?

Geet(Quickly went to him and checked him from head to toe):Aap theek hona maan??Aap ko tu kuch nahi hua na??

Maan(Confused):Main theek hoon geet mujhe lagta hai tumhi koi bura sapna aaya hai.Tumhi aaram ke zarurat hai.Tum late jao.

 

Maan went to the study room.Geet went to the kitchen fro drinking water.She saw nakul making a coffee.

 

Geet:Yeh aap kis ka liye coffee bana rahe hain?

Nakul:Maan sir ka liye.

Geet:Main inhe de dete hoon.

 

Geet was about to enter in study room when she heard maan talking on the phone.

 

Maan(Angrily):Maine kaha na mujhe woh place chahiye tu chahiye.Main nahi janta tum jo bhi karo mujhe woh zamin lena hai.Tum yeh tu jante ho ka Maan singh khurana ko jo cheez chahiye hote hai woh isse paa kar hi rahta hai.Acha mujhe aik aur call aa rahe hai.Main tumse baad main baat karta hoon.

 

Maan attended the other call.He was talking in low voice to that person.Geet tried to listen.She heard his voice when he spoke a little louder.

 

Maan:Theek hai per mera ghar main se kisse ko nahi pata chalna chahiye iss bare main especially geet ko.Ok bye!

 

Maan turned around and shocked to see geet.

 

Maan(Looked afraid):Geet tum yahan kab aaye?

Geet:Main abhi aaye hoon aap ko coffee dena.

Maan(Smiled):Thank u geet....(Thought something)..Geet agar tum bura na mano tu mera kamre main so jao.

Geet:Hmmm

 

Geet went outside the room.

 

Geet(Thinking):Tu maan ne dev ko maara hai mujhe paane ka liye...Aap iss haad tak gir jao ga maine kabhi nahi socha tha.Ab main aap ko iss ke saza dalwa kar hi rahoon ge.

 

 

Precap:Maneet moments!

                  +

 

How to take revenge from the husband!

 

 

Share ur ideas.U can also request!



Edited by pickachu - 17 April 2011 at 6:07pm

The following 93 member(s) liked the above post:

snehag10laila889inlwgeetpayal906sree12krishna.zarlishkhangeetkamaanasmi123bhakbhartifanavantika_singhbdasTinkJiamans22shreya satishnamitasinprathyusmilingmaaneetfan123holyangelhansasmasakadafiMoon002rostMaanKiGeet..mamatha.pinku33pari_DDsanam1234uimaasthaavani_9.Regal.richiiiiihuny.thebestabina03am_sweet_paris-o-m-m-i-emardesanjuleeNav2010Hina.khanxxxsrikrithidoosheekamaansi007amzu32butterfly.tanucyum321raj_202Cutee999JayaRambeern-SmexySmile-gangesegb-shamima-Shimmerr_wallflower_kiran_ratiTinkerBellaambbihamrk-1Krishnaluv94paponecon-Veritaserum-ramaheshsanu3108sonu4everksasipunjabi.princesmaaniqra-afsha-namita25CrazzyBusysweet scorpiomitzi11swetha10--Ratna--sona-raishah10cant.be.assed...hinal..rsroopaliSabmeratu.saanjh116n6s6k6i6r6a6n6preethiachsweety22sun-naaaaaaaaakahkashansakinaTyroRageOfAnAngelfelicitysmoak.JanakivallavkhwaishfanDownhill

pickachu IF-Stunnerz
pickachu
pickachu

Joined: 26 October 2009
Posts: 27731

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
Note:

Thanxx for ur wonderful comments.
I have replied everyone individually.
I hope u guys like this part.
I know there was no maneet moment in this part.
But in next part i will try to put maneet moments.
Share ur ideas about how to take revenge from the husband!
By the way rahul's character was in character sketch!


Edited by pickachu - 17 April 2011 at 6:06pm

The following 7 member(s) liked the above post:

sanjulee-shamima-ramaheshchsweety22Tyrofelicitysmoak.khwaishfan

cant.be.assed. IF-Sizzlerz
cant.be.assed.
cant.be.assed.

Joined: 27 January 2010
Posts: 16698

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
res =D
*edited*
great part!
i gt a bad feelin bout rahul.. if hes maans friend then y wud he grass him up...
i wonder who maan was tlkin to...
do continue soon x


Edited by zARqaa_X - 17 April 2011 at 6:15pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

pickachu

rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz
rsroopali
rsroopali

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 15210

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
was awesomeeeeeee
n wt amisunderstanding
hw can geet just asume such things
n waiting 2 see wt happens next
n y is rahul sooooo sure maan has got dev murdered

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

pickachu

ruhakhan IF-Dazzler
ruhakhan
ruhakhan

Joined: 10 July 2010
Posts: 4273

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
Hey who is dis stupid rahul and how can he accuse maan for dev accident geet bhi na she doesn't trust maan a bit i just hope she realise this soon dat maan can never do such thing do update soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

pickachu

raman1921 Senior Member
raman1921
raman1921

Joined: 24 August 2010
Posts: 636

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
Geet is MU mann he can never do such thing geet will regret later when she comes to kniow what dev did he is the one behind her mom accident i hope she uses her brain and find out b4 she blames mann fell bad for mann he has to pay for smthng he did not do. Please yaar MU ko lamba mat khichna.

Raman

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

pickachu

chsweety22 IF-Sizzlerz
chsweety22
chsweety22

Joined: 01 October 2010
Posts: 12999

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
awesome update
looking forward to read moe

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

pickachu

-Veritaserum- IF-Rockerz
-Veritaserum-
-Veritaserum-

Joined: 08 November 2010
Posts: 9518

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
Superb part.... loved it

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

pickachu

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Bin Tere....II - PG 110 @ 09/04/11

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 115 116

Author: Amour_Reet   Replies: 922   Views: 231861

Amour_Reet 922 231861 08 September 2013 at 11:53am by angelic-eyes
Deewane Dil(Continued)

2

Author: ankitajain94   Replies: 14   Views: 4787

ankitajain94 14 4787 01 September 2010 at 4:11pm by kweetrockstar
FF:Janam Samjha Karo continued....

2 3 4 5 6

Author: -Preru-   Replies: 42   Views: 6426

-Preru- 42 6426 27 June 2008 at 10:17am by dhruviarmaanfan
Ek Khoobsurats Rissta?<<Never continued?

Author: Bolly*_Crazed   Replies: 3   Views: 1052

Bolly*_Crazed 3 1052 15 July 2007 at 4:29pm by Bolly*_Crazed
My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: Aisha_86   Replies: 210   Views: 26549

Aisha_86 210 26549 07 March 2007 at 2:45pm by sabrinaa.

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index