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ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 55)

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
Hey ur ff is good bechara maan and stupid dev and innocent geet do update soon

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
Hey ur ff is good bechara maan stupid dev and innocent geet do update soon
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awesome update...............continue soon.............dying to know more about this story.....................
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Originally posted by ruhakhan

Hey ur ff is good bechara maan and stupid dev and innocent geet do update soon




Thanxx for liking my ffSmile!!
I will try to update soon!
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Originally posted by doosheeka

awesome update...............continue soon.............dying to know more about this story.....................



Thanxx for commenting dear!
I will try to update soon!
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
hey fatima....sorry for ur uncle dear....Unhappy

lovely update...

cant wait to know maan's condition....

update soon....
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

hey fatima....sorry for ur uncle dear....Unhappy

lovely update...

cant wait to know maan's condition....

update soon....


Thanxx for liking the part!
I will try to update soonn!

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:22pm | IP Logged

                FF:Revenge from the lover

                               Part 10

 

Everyone was shocked.

 

Madhavi(Shocked):Maan aap yeh kya kha rahein hain?Humare samijh main kuch nahi aa raha.

Maan:Main theek kha raha hoon chachi.Dev ne usha ma'am ka katal (murder) kiya hai.

Geet(Angrily looking at maan):Main jante hoon meray pati mere maa ka khoon nahi kar sakte.Inspecator sahab aap dev ko chor de jiye.

Police officer:Dev ko sirf maan sir hi chorwa sakte hain.

 

Policemen took dev away.

 

Savitri devi(Angrily):Maan aap abhi ja kar dev ko chorwa kar la aayein.

Maan:Sorry dadi maa main yeh nahi kar sakta.

 

Maan went to his room.Geet followed him.

 

Geet(Angrily):Aap aisa dev ka saath kaise kar sakte hain?Main jante hoon dev aisa nahi kar sakte.

Maan(Softly):Geet ne iss ne aisa kiya hai.

Geet(Controlling her anger):Aap ko misunderstanding hui hai mere maa ke natural death hui hai aur dev tu meeting ka liye america gaye hua tha woh aaj hi wapis aaye

hain.Aur woh kyu mere maa ka khoon karein ge?

Maan(Gripped her shoulder):Geet iss liye kyuki usha ma'am ne iss ke sare baatein sun lein (Feeling sorry) I'm really very sorry geet mere waja se tumhare saath yeh sab ho raha hai.Dev mujh se badla lena ka liye tumhi use kar raha hai.

Geet:Bhala woh aap ka badla mujh se kyu lein ge?

Maan:Iss liye geet kyuki main tumse bohat pyar karta hoon aur woh yeh janta hai iss liye mujhe dard dena ka liye woh tumhi dard de raha hai.

Geet(Angrily pushed him away):Tu yeh baat thi dev ko arrest karwane ka pecha.Maine aap jaisa gira hua insaan nahi dekha jo apne khushi ka liye apna bhai aur mere marre hui maa ko use kar raha hai.Maine tu aapko acha insaan samijha tha jisne mere zindagi main koi problem create nahi ke per aap aisay ghatya insaan nicklo ga yeh maine kabhi nahi socha tha.

Maan(Tried not to show his hurt):Tum theek khate ho geet main bohat gira hua insaan hoon.Iss liye main dev ko chorwa doon ga per mere aik condition hai.

Geet:Woh kya?

Maan:Main dev ko raha karwa doon ga agar tum isse divorce de ka mujh se shadi kar lo.

 

Geet tightly slapped maan on his cheek.

 

Geet(Angrily):Sharam nahi aate aapko mera aaga aise condition rakhte hua.Mujhe aapke help ke koi zarurat nahi hai.Main apne dev ko khud chorwa loon ge.

 

Geet angrily went away.Maan was standing still for few minutes.Then he looked at the door from where geet left.Slap of geet didnot hurt him much on the cheek but his heart was injured badly.

 

Maan(Wiped his tears):I'm sorry geet mujhe pata hai maine tumhi bohat hurt kiya hai.Main yeh bhi janta hoon ka tum mere baat ka kabhi yakeen nahi karo ge iss liye maine yeh condition rakhe ta ke main tumhi becha sakoon.Main tumhare khushi ka liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon geet.

 

Next day,In the evening,Maan came back from the office.He was the type of person who didnot mix personal and professional lives.He was in his room,when someone knocked the door.

 

Maan:Come in.

 

He was expecting nakul but he was shocked to see geet.He looked at her eyes.They were swollen.He felt hurt.Never ever he wanted his geet to be in pain and now he knew she was in pain because of him.He couldnot look at her eyes and started to look down.

 

Maan(softly):Kya hua geet?

Geet:Mujhe aap se baat karne hai.

Maan:Kaho.

Geet:Aap mujh se kitna pyar karte hain?

Maan(Went to her):Khud se zayada.Balke sab se zayada.

Geet(Fell on his feet and started to cry):Aap jeet gaye main haar gaye.Sirf aap hi hain jo dev ko becha sakte hain.Please mujh se mere khushian mat cheenay.Pleaseeee

Maan(Quickly gripped her shoulders and made her stand):Aisa mat karo geet.Main yeh sab tumhare khushi ka liye kar raha hoon.

Geet(Crying and pushed his hands away):Aap galat samijh rahein hain mere khushi aap main nahi mera pati dev main hai (Folded her hands) Main aaj aap se kuch mang rahe hoon..

Maan(Gripped her hands):Nahi geet aisa mat karo.Please main tumhi aisa nahi dhek sakta.

Geet:Aaj aap ko apna pyar sabat(Prove) karna hoga.Pyar yeh bhi hai ka jis se aap pyar karte hain iss ka pyar main khush hona.Aur aap jo mujh se pyar karna ka dafa karte hain tu phir isse prove karein.Aap abhi mera saath chal kar dev ko chorwaein.

Maan(Looked at her red eyes):.........Theek hai geet agar tumhare khushi dev main hai ......(Looked away controlling his pain) tu main tumhare khushi main khush hoon.Hum dev ko chorwa kar la aate hain.

Geet(Smiled with teary eyes):Thank u.Thank u soo much!Tu chalein main mom aur dadi maa ko bata kar aate hoon per hum chalte hain.

 

Geet quickly told savitri devi and madhavi and then maan and geet went to police station.Dev was released.Maan gave him angrily look.Geet ran to him and hugged him.

 

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata

tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

 

Maan slowly went away while he was hearing giggling of geet and laughing of dev from the back.

 

is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan

ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan

 

His heart could not bear more pain.He quickly went outside.It was raining.Instead of going to car.He started walking.He wanted to be alone because he didnot want anyone to see that he was crying.

 

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata

tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

 

He found the lonely place near police station.He started to cry.He knew that for geet's happiness which would be for a short time.He destroyed her life.

 

kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka

na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka

dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein

saansein saansein tooti bandishein

 

He looked up on the sky.

 

Maan(Tears started to flow from his eyes):I'm sorry.I'm really sorry ma'am.Main apna wada nahi nibha sakha.Per main kya karoon main geet ko apne samne roota hua nahi dekh sakta.Main apne pyar ka aaga haar gaya.I'm sorryyyyyy.

 

 

koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko

koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko

aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein

tooti footi sab farmaaishein

 

Maan:Per main aap se wada karta hoon ka main geet ko kuch nahi hone doon ga.Agar dev main iss ke khushi hai tu main dev ko badlne ke koshish karoon ga.Main iss se kahoon ga woh jo badla lena chahta hai woh mujh se le le per geet ko kuch na khahe.Agar mujhe geet ke khushi ka liye iss ke nafrat bhi sahne phare tu main woh bhi karoon ga.

 

kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai

kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain

 

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ho o o pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata

tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

 

 

Precap:Someone was dead.

Who??

Maybe someone would be married.

Who??



This is the vm of the song ya rabba.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YtDkMjv4r-g



Credit goes to the vm maker!

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