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ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 40)

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
well written....ClapClapClapClapClapClapadd me to ur pm list plzzz....

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:25pm | IP Logged

                           FF:Revenge from the lover

                                          Part 8

 

Geet had come back from her honeymoon.Her mother,Usha came for meeting her.

 

Usha:Kaise ho beta?

Geet:Main theek hoon maa.Aap ke tabiyaat kaise hai??

Usha:Theek hai beta.Tumhi khush dhekh kar mujhe bohat khushi hui hai.Ghar main sab kaise hain??Aur dev kahan hai??

Geet:Sab bohat ache hain.Dadi maa aur mom mujhe aap ke kami mahsoos nahi honay dete.Aur dev tu bohat ache hain.Woh business meeting se america gaye hua hai.Aaj wapis aayein ge.

Usha:Aur maan kaise hai??Mere iss se mulakat nahi hui tumhi pata hai main jab school main parhate thi tu maan mera student tha.Bohat hi pyara bacha tha.Maine iss shadi ka liye haan iss liye ki thi kyuki main savitri jee ko tab se jante thi.Bohat shareef aur respected family hai inke.Maan ke shadi ho gaye hai kya?

Geet:Nahi maa.

Usha:Acha isse mere taraf se pochna.Main abhi chalte hoon.Woh mere dost hai na sonali,woh kal dubai se aaye hai.Main iss se milne ja rahe hoon jis hotel main woh rah rahe hai.Acha beta apna khayal rakhna.

Geet:Acha maa.Aap bhi apna khayal rakye ga.

 

Usha after meeting SD and madhavi went to the hotel.She saw dev with a girl who was wearing very revealing dress.First she thought that maybe he was here for some meeting.But then she started following him.She saw that dev took that girl in his room.She noticed that he had not locked the door.She slightly opened the door.She was surprised to see that dev was making out with that girl.Suddenly dev's mobile rang,He asked the girl to go to the washroom while he attended the phone call.

 

Dev:Hi !! what's up??

Dev(After listening to the other side,he got angry):Kya hai yaar aap main maan se badla lene ka liye joru ka gulam ban jao.Iss maan ke waja se main bachpan se tang hoon.Maa aur dadi har waqt isse appreciate karte rahte hain.

Dev(After listening to the caller):Main per bhi isse maaf kar deta agar iss din iss ne mere sare friends ke samne mujhe thapad na mare hote.Maine bas itna hi kiya tha ka aik ladke ko kiss karna chahta tha aur woh mann nahi rahe thi.Tu maine isse thapad mara aur maan pata nahi wahan kaise pochancha.Aur mera friends se samne mere itne insult hui.Iss maan ko main nahi choron ga.Tumhi pata hai woh bechara aaj kal kaise devdas ban gaya hai.Poor guy geet se bohat pyar karta hai na aur main isse jealous karne ka liye geet ka saath iss ka samne romance karta hoon.Pata hai mera tu plan hai ka main apne SR iss ke ankhion ke samne karoon ga aur iss ke baad maan bhi maar jaye ga aur geet ko bhi kisse tara maar doon ga.I hate being a married man.

Dev(After listening to the other side):Acha tum apna kaam karo bye!

 

He turned around and found a shocked usha.He tried to talk to her but she ran away.He didnot know what to do.He called back the caller.

 

Dev(Panicked):Geet ke maa ne sab kuch sun liya hai.Ab main kya karoon.Agar geet ya maan ko pata chal gaya tu???(Carefully listened the other side) Ok do ur work.

 

Usha ran and ran.She was very shocked.She was sad that because of her decision her daughter life had destroyed but then little maan image had come to her mind.He was so sweet ,cute and sincere.She was sure that he would be same.Now she was on a road, she wanted to go to her daughter to tell her the truth before its too late.A car hit her.She fell down.She stood up but the car was about to hit her again.When someone saved her.She tried to look at her saviour face.The face looked familliar to her.

 

Maan(His forehead was bleeding):Ma'am main aap ko hospital le kar jata hoon.

Usha(Smiled weakly):Maan main geet ke maa hoon main tumhi ........(unconscious)

 

Maan took her to the hospital.

 

Maan(Thinking):Usha ma'am geet ke maa hain.Tu mujhe geet ko inform karna chahiye......Per mera mobile charged nahi hai.Chalo reception se khata hoon ke ghar call kar ke bata dein.

 

 

Geet heard the phone call.She started to cry and went to the hospital.She asked from the nurse about her mother's condition.

 

Nurse:Aap ke mother ab khatre se bahar hain.Mr.Khurana inhe time per le aayein hain warna pata nahi kya hota.Hum ne inhe injection diya hai inhe jab hosh aaye ga tu hum aap ko inform kar dein ge.Aap ko ab ghar jana chahiye.

 

Geet saw dev.She quickly went to him and hugged him.

 

Geet(Crying):Thank u thank u soooo much.Aap ne mere maa ko bachaya.Aap bohat ache hain.I loveee u.I lovee u too much.

Dev(Cupped her face and kissed her tears):Its ok geet I love u too.Chalo ab hum ghar chalte hain.

 

Dev took geet to the car.She was crying.He kissed her on the forehead and her tears again.

 

Dev:Please jaan don't cry i love u i can't see u crying.

Geet(Wiped her tears):Thank u dev.I love u too (Hugged him)

 

Rain had started ,Maan was looking at them from the distance.

ishq leta hai kaise imtihaan

ishq me jiyu ,ishq me maroo

ishq hi mera bhagwan

 

When she was asking from the reception while crying,he was there he was about to go and tell her that her mother was fine but he saw geet ran to dev and told him that she loved him.

haii rabba tu hi meri jaan tu hi jahaan

tu hi meri manzil

 

Maan was burning in pain.

tere ishq me main qurbaan

 

 

He didnot know how much he wanted her to say these words to him.

ishq mein deewangi ki had se guzar jau

tere pyaar me aaj main jee kar mar jau

 

Now he heard these words from her mouth but for someone else.Maan tried to smile.

ishq mein jalte hain hum raat din haaaaan

ye mera dil na maane tere bin

 

But he couldnot smile.His tears mixed with rain drops.

sama rahi hai ye jism-o-jaan mein

chali jayegi jaan is imtihaan mein

ab mujhko hai malum ki tu hi mera junoon

ab tu hi mera rab-zindagi tujh se hi mera sakoon

 

Maan composed himself.He wiped his tears and decided to be happy for geet and dev.Atleast they found their love.

ishq leta hai kaise imtihaan

ishq mein jiyu ,ishq me maroo

ishq hi mera bhagwan

haii rabba tu hi meri jaan tu hi jahhan

tu hi meri manzil tere ishq me main qurbaan

 

 

Precap:Maan promised usha.

For what??



Maneet vm on the song.

Here is the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fyX_IKx4Mwk

Credit goes to the vm maker!

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
Thanxxxxxxxx for commenting on previous part!!
I have updated the next part.
I hope u guys like it.
If u have any question regarding the ff.U can pm me.
Please leave ur comments on this part too.



Love,
Fatima

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
lovely update Fatima......

My prediction for the future is that geet mom may die telling maan all that she heard from dev's mouth and she may ask his promise to protect geet from dev..........

may be now dev will tell geet that maan was responsible for the accident so geet may develop hatred towards maan........


Edited by puth - 27 March 2011 at 5:37pm

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:32pm | IP Logged
res
OMGGG
Awesome update
loved it
Fabulous part
ughh kamina dev..Hate him OMG
Awhh poor maan
I cant see him like this:((
cant wait for next part
cont soon
thank ya



Edited by maangeetcrazy - 27 March 2011 at 5:59pm

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
devil always devil
oh hate him core
so geet thinks dev
save her mom
now get the tittle
meaning
super awesome
update pls
cont soonnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear
loved it
uff hate dev for hating maan...
update soon

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
great part
glad someone knows dev's truth
hopefully usha tells maan
con't soon!

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