ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it so dev is the evil here n not maan
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LOVELY UPDATE...๐Ÿ‘
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destroying geets life coz he hates maan...
is dev ko jalidi se maaro....
n maaneet ko jaldi se milao....
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Awe poor maan and ergh how disgusting dev is really hate him for causing the drift between maaneet and putting maan through pain and good usha heard but that jerk dev caused her to go hospital and poor maan going through the pain of his love saying that she lives someone else anyways great update and can't wait to read more ๐Ÿ˜Š
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                             FF:Revenge from the lover

                                          Part 9

 

Maan went near Usha's room and sat on the bench.The scene of geet confessing love for dev was flashing infront of maan's eyes.He tightly closed his eyes trying to forget it.He thought to go to Usha's room.When he entered in her room.He saw that usha was awake.She was saying something to the nurse.The nurse came to maan.

 

Maan:Is she alright?

Nurse:Aik dham inka BP fall karne lag gaya hain.Hum jo kar sakte tha.Hum ne woh kiya hai.I'm sorry sir per ab inke pas zayada waqt nahi hai.Inhone kaha hai ke woh apne beti se milna chahte hain.Main inhe call karne ja rahe hoon.

 

Maan was about to go to the doctor when usha called him.He went to her and sat on the chair.

 

Usha:Maan beta! Main tumse kuch khana chahate hoon....

 

Usha told him everything about dev.Maan was shocked.

 

Usha:Beta please tum mere baat ka yakeen karo.Main jante hoon tum dev ko apna bhai maante ho.Per beta main sach kha rahe hoon....

Maan(Wiped her tears from his hand):Main aap pe yakeen karta hoon ma'am aap hi tu humasha khate thi ke jhoot mat bolo aur aap bhi tu sach bolte thi.Tu main kis tara yeh yakeen na karoon ka aap sach bol rahe hain (Controlled his tears) Per ma'am aap mujhe maaf kar dein.Mere waja se aap ke beti ke zindagi kharab hogaye.Main khud ko maaf nahi kar sakta.

Usha:Nahi beta iss main tumhare galti nahi hai.Tum bas kisse tara geet ko dev se dor le jao....Tum geet ko ..divorce dela do...Per phir geet kaise rahe ge??Main jante hoon mere pas waqt bohat kam hai.Woh kis tara pore zindagi akele guzare ge.Mere beti ne bachpan se sirf dard hi saha hai...Kya iss ke kismat main koi khushi nahi hai..

Maan(Looked down):I'm sorry.I'm really very sorry yeh sab geet ke saath mere waja se ho raha hai.

Usha:Nahi beta tum maafi mat mang go.Per mujhe fikar iss baat ke hai ka geet ka mere baad kon saath de ga...Kon iss se shadi kare ga....Maan beta kya tum... geet se shadi karo ga??

Maan(Shockingly looked at her):Main..main kaise geet se shadi kar sakta hoon?

Usha:Beta mere marne ka baad aur dev se divorce ke baad geet akele ho jaye ge.Aur iss waqt main tumhare sawa kisse per bharosa nahi kar sakte.Beta please tum mere beti se shadi kar lene...Mujhe pata hai sirf tum hi isse khush rak sakte ho kyuki tum iss se bohat pyar karte ho (She folded her hands infrnt of him) Please beta mere geet ko apna lena yeh mere akre(Last) khwaish hai.

Maan(Gripped her hands and kissed them):Nahi ma'am aap aisa mat karein.Aap tu mere maa ke tara hain....Theek hai main aap se wada karta hoon main geet se shadi karoon ga.Main geet ko dev ka baad apnao ga.Main isse har khushi dene ke pore koshish karoon ga...

 

Maan looked at usha.Her eyes were close.He called doctor.Doctor checked her.Geet entered in the room.

 

Doctor:I'm sorry she is no more.

Geet(Shouted):Maa.....(Hugged her mother and kissed her forehead)Maa ankiyan kholo maa.Dekho apke geet apke samne hai.Maa aap ne mujh se baat karne thi na (Cried) Tu aap bolte kyu nahi hain.Papa tu bachpan main mujhe chor gaye tha.Aap ne kaha tha aap mere saath humasha rahein ge...Tu aap mujhe chor kar nahi jaa sakte.

 

Maan couldnot see geet in pain.He gripped her shoulders.Geet turned and hugged him.

 

Geet(Sobbed):Maan maa se kaho na woh mujh se baat karein...Woh bolte kyu nahi hain...Woh mujhe akele chor kar nahi jaa sakte.

Maan(Hugged her tightly):Geet tum akele nahi ho.

 

He wanted to say that he was there for her but then he stopped himself.He told her that her mother would always watch her and she would be there for her.Geet felt peace in maan's strong arms.They came back to the home.Maan arranged for the funeral.Dadi maa and madhavi were consoling geet.Maan controlled his anger when dev came.After sometime,dev went upstairs.Maan was going to his room when he heard a sound from dev's room.He came to dev's room.

 

Dev(Talking on the phone):Well done! U have done a great job.Kisse ko pata nahi chala ka iss budiya ko marwaya gaya hai.Chalo jaan chote sasu maa se.

 

Maan was about to go and hit him but he controlled his anger and decided something else.When everyone went to their homes.Police came.

 

Savitri devi:Yeh police yahan kiya kar rahe hai??

Police man:Dev singh khurana kahan hain?

Madhavi(Pointed at dev):Woh mera beta dev hai.Per aap ko iss se kiya kaam hai?

Police man(Went to dev):You are under arrest for the murder of usha handa.

Geet(Shocked):Yeh aap kiya kha rahe hain.Yeh mere pati hain aur main jante hoon ka yeh mere maa ko nahi maar sakte.Aap ko kis ne kaha hai ke inho ne mere maa ka murder kiya hai?

Maan(Came from upstairs):Maine!

 

 

 

Precap:Maan promised geet to release dev from jail on one condition.Geet was shocked to hear the condition.

What was the condition???





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Edited by pickachu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm really sorry for the late update.
Actually my uncle died so i could not update.
I hope u guys like this part.
Thanxxx for ur wonderful comments on previous part.
Please leave ur comments on this part too.
Keep guessing the condition and will geet accept this condition?
Can someone please make a banner for this FF?



Love,
Fatima

Edited by pickachu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it !!!!
i am excited wt condition....
it must be not to marry dev
dev๐Ÿ˜ก
 
sorry for ur uncle dear๐Ÿ˜”


Edited by ramahesh - 13 years ago