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ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 20)

bhanu_rekhag IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
i think its payal or jhumka ...
i know its a general guess any one do

but any other thing ur wish

BTW awesome update

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namitasin Senior Member

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Wow luved it ,i think that thing may b geet's payal. Update soon.

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-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Liked both the updates
Geet n Maan moments were sweet
Maan tih sahi mein behaves lik teenager in frnt of Geet hehehehehe
Adi n Pinky are sweet
Loved Adi n Maan's relation

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged

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felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
awesome updates
loved them all
me loving the ff
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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CrazzyBusy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
awesome udpate dear
loved it
becha maan tu pura se hi pyar main pagal ho gaya hai uff adi iski help karo yaar ise pahle ki yeh pure se hi pagal ho jaye
update soon

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pickachu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 5:16pm | IP Logged

                              FF:Revenge from the lover

                                             Part 4


Next day,Maan wake up when alaram clock rang.


Maan:Aaj woh per mere khawab main aaye.Per jab main isse milta hoon tu mujhe sab bhool jata hai.Per main bhi kya karoon itne saal maine isse khawabon main dhekha hai.Jab woh samne aate hai tu yakeen hi nahi hota ka woh real main hai yeh main daydreaming kar raha hoon.Anyways maan uth ja tujhe 9:45 am per office pohchana hai per 1:00 pm per adi ke wedding per bhi jana hai na.Adi ke wedding matlab geet bhi wahan hoge.


When he remembered about geet he smiled and went to the washroom.He came back from the washroom.He remembered about the previous night scene.He searched for his kurta.


Maan(Thinking):Mera kurta kahan gaya?


Then he remembered.


Maan(Thinking):Oh no!!kahan Nakul tu laundry le kar nahi chala gaya.


He ran downstairs.


Maan:Nakul mera kurta kahan hai?

Nakul:Sahab kurtay per daag tha iss liye main woh wash karne laga hoon.

Maan:Wapis do mera kurta iss per koi daag nahi hai.

Nakul:Per sahab..


Maan quickly took his kurta when savitri devi(SD) came.


SD:Maan beta aap yahan kya kar rahein hain?

Maan(Quickly):Woh dadi maa main.....apna kurta lene aaya tha.Acha ab main chalta hoon mujhe office ka liye tayaar bhi hona hai.

Dadi maa:Acha aap jayein.


Maan thanked God in his heart and ran to his room.He came downstairs for the breakfast.He saw Madhavi there too.


Madhavi:kya baat hai aap aaj bohat khush lag rahein hain??

Maan:Bas woh ... mera friend ke shadi hai.


Dadimaa:Beta hum jo special schools main donations dete hain.In main se aik school ne aapko aur mujhe invite kiya hai koi function hai children ka.

Maan:Sorry dadimaa main tu nahi aa sakta adi ke shadi hai aap aur chachi chale jayein ga.

Dadi maa:Ok beta as u wish.Madhavi r u free today?

Madhavi:Haan main free hoon main aap ke saath chale jao ge.

Maan(Quickly):Ok i have to leave now.


He quickly went towards the door when he collided with dev.


Maan:I'm sorry dude woh maine tumhi jaldi main nahi dhekha.

Dev:Its ok bro.


Maan went away.Dev just looked at him while leaving.At 2:00 pm,Maan reached at adi's wedding.He was cursing himself because the reason behind his late entry was his clothes selection.First time,He took that much time for selecting something to wear.He was glad to see geet infront of him.She was talking to some girl.She was looking too pretty in light red dress.He went to her in a trance.Geet looked at him.


Geet:Maan right?


Geet:You know what mujhe lagta hai iss shadi se pehle hum kahan mile hain.

Maan(Tried to ignore this question):Haan kal mehndi per miley tha.

Geet:Haan per iss se pehle hum kabhi milein hain (She looked at the watch) Oh no! i have to go.

Maan:Aap ko kahan jana hai main aap ko drop kar deta hoon.

Geet(Quickly):Its ok main chale jao ge.Bye


She ran away.Maan saw her one payal fell.He picked it up.


Maan(Smiled):Sorry geet,Yeh payal tu main apne pas rakhoon ga apne iss begar wash kiye hua kurta ka saat.




Precap:Dadi maa and madhavi met geet.Maan wanted to propose geet.


Edited by pickachu - 22 March 2011 at 5:17pm

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pickachu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
Many of u guessed right!that was payal!!

BTW thanxx for commenting and liking previous part.I hope u guys like this part.

Sorry for not giving much maneet scenes.Don't worry u will get full doze of maneet scenes in revenge sequence.
Please leave ur comments on this part too.


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