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ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 134)

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
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pickachu IF-Stunnerz

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                             FF:Revenge from the lover

                                            Part 17


After hearing geet and pinky's conversation,his heart was burning with pain.He was there for taking geet home because adi was not at home.Now he didnot know what to do.He started the car and drove the car aimlessly on the road while tears were falling from his eyes.


Maan(Saying to himself while crying):Kyu????Kyu mere saath aisa hota hai ka main jis se pyar karta hoon ya tu woh mujh se dor ho jata hai ya mujh se pyar nahi karta??Bachpan se yahe hota raha hai mere saath.Main apne parents se itna pyar karta tha lekin inhone mujh se kabhi pyar nahi kiya.


He remembered the one incident from his past.




Maan ran to his parent's room.He was six years old.He was so excited because he had won the painting competition.He entered in his parent's room.He didnot notice that his parents were fighting with eachother.


Maan(Excited):Mama papa dekho na.Maine painting competition main first prize liya hai.Maine family picture banaye thi.


His father slapped him on his face.Maan was not expecting this and his forehead hit on the table and started to bleed.


Maan's father(Shouted):Tumari maa ne tumhi koi manners nahi sakhaye hain.Tumhi nahi pata ka do bare logon ka bech chotay nahi bolte.Aur tum competition hi jeete rahna.Parhna mat.Maine socha tha mera beta mera sahara bane ga per nahi akhir tum main iss avantika ka bhi tu khoon hai.


With this he left the room.Maan came to his mother expecting her to soothe his pain.But she shouted at him.


Maan's mother(Shouted):Sirf tumhare waja se main iss ghar main rah rahe hoon.Tumhare waja se mere sare zindagi tabah hogaye.


His mother also left the room.




Maan(Sobbing):Phir bhi main koshish karta raha ka woh mujh se pyar kar leen.Lekin aik accident main papa,mama aur chachu (Dev's father) ke death ho gaye.Main tu dadi aur madhavi chachi se bhi pyar karta hoon.Per woh dono bhi mujh se dor hogaye.Dev ko maine humasha apna bhai mana lekin iss ne mujhe dard dene ka liye geet ko istamaal kiya.Aur geet woh mujhe humasha galat samijhte hai...Per I deserve it... kyuki maine dev ka katal kiya.Mere waja se aaj dev iss duniya main nahi hai...Per mujhe kya pata tha ka dev ko main jis car main bhej raha hoon kisse ne iss ke breaks fail kar diye hain...Mujhe kis cheez ke saza mil rahe hai???


Suddenly a truck came infront of his car,He tried to turn the car but the car hit on the tree.His forehead was bleeding 

But he didnot care.He came out of the car.He was walking on the road when he saw a night club.He went in the night club.He had never drunk in his life but for soothing his pain,he started to drink.He felt a hand on his shoulder.He turned to find sameera.


Sameera:Maan tum club main kya kar raha ho?Jahan tak main tumhi jante hoon tumhi drink karna aur club jana bilkul pasand nahi hai.

Maan(Drunk):Yeah you are right.I should go home.


He was walking towards the door.When he couldnot balance himself.sameera helped him and took him to home.Geet opened the door.She didnot look at maan.


geet(Angrily):Yeh bhi koi time hai ghar aane ka.Main kitna pareshan ho gaye thi.Aap ko pata hai na ghar per koi nahi hai.


Then she looked at maan and sameera.Sameera took maan to his room.


Sameera:Sorry woh maan ne pee hui thi iss liye maine socha isse ghar drop kar doon.Acha main chalte hoon.Takecare of him.Bye!


Sameera went to her home.Geet saw maan sleeping with a sad face.


Geet(Thinking angrily);Yeh tu drink bhi karte hain.Chi!! Inhone dev ka katal kiya aur pata nahi kitne ladkiyon ka saath...Aur per mujh se khate hain main tumse pyar karta hoon...Aur mera stupid dil inke baat pe pata nahi kyu yakeen karta hai.


She went out of the room.Started to walk on upper portion.She didnot know why she entered in the store room.She had never gone there.She switched on the light which started to blink and she closed the door in reflex.She was about to go out of the store.When her foot hit the table and something fall from it.She picked the thing and shocked to find her payal.


Geet(In shock):Yeh yahan kaise aaye?


Suddenly the light was off.She tried to open the door.But it was stuck.She was afraid from darkness.The first thing which came to her mind was maan.She called him while

banging the door.Maan opened his eyes.He felt like geet was in trouble.He searched for geet.When he heard the sound from store room.He immediately opened the door of store room and geet fall in his arms.




Geet drunk.




Maan was trying to control himself but then he gave up and kissed on her lips.

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged

Thanxxx for ur wonderful comments.
I have replied each one of U!
Sorry for this worse partAngry!
I still hope that u guys like this part!
Next part will be third last part!
I have added in my pm list who had requested!


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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Maan jus got pain in his life
Lil hope was Geet but thats also sumwhr im doubting
Lets c wats aage
Update soon

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
great part
geet drunk?! should be interesting
con't soon

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged

loved the update...

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
nice update 

poor Maan is in so much pain 

next update kab de rahee ho ?


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