ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update Fatima.....continue soon
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Awesome update.. luved maneet first meet.. awww maan's dream is so cute.. continue soon
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gr8 update
Awww Maan finally foin his *dream* girl
Interesting....
Cont soon Xx...
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Awesome update dear
loved the concept and the part was really nice
wow Maan found his dream girl
pzl add me to ur pm list and update soooooooooooooon
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Loved the prologue as well as the 1st part ... ðŸ˜ƒ
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amazing update loved part 1 what a great way to start a story continue soon and plzz add me to pm list
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nice concept.........
amazing part...........
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add me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz geet to took revenge frm maan intrestingggg...
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                                        FF:Revenge from the lover
                                                      Part 2

Maan was standing on the door of Adi's house.Adi opened the door.He was shocked to see excited maan in just his waist.

Adi(Worriedly):Tum theek tu ho??Tumhare shirt kahan hai??
Maan(Angrily):Shirt ka tu tum na hi pocho.Seriously i hate crows....
Adi:Acha tum andar aao.Main tumhi shirt deta hoon.

Maan came inside.He was excited to tell him about his dream girl.He wore adi's white shirt.

Maan(Excitedly):Main theek khata tha.Woh ladke real main hai jo mere sapno main aate hai....
Adi:Maan tum pagal ho.College se tumhi woh ladke khawabon main aate thi.Tumhare pe itne ladkiyan maarte thi.Per sahab ko tu bas inke 'dream girl' ke talash thi.
Maan:Haan haan yeh sab main janta hoon.Per woh mujhe aaj mile thi.

Maan told adi the whole incident.Maan's eyes were twinkling with happiness while telling him about her.Adi saw his eyes which were full of dreams,hopes and happiness.Adi wished in his heart about the happiness of his friend.He knew that maan suffered alot in his childhood because of the death of his parents whom he loved too much.Now he wanted his friend to be happy.

Adi:Acha agar ab maan baba ke prem kahani khatam ho gaye ho tu office chalein.Iss meeting ke baad mujhe apni shadi ke bhi tayaari karne hai.3 din baad mere shadi hai aur iss meeting ke waja se mujhe choti nahi mile.
Maan:Oh! I have forgot about the meeting.Lets go.Waise bhi meeting ke baad mujhe isse dhondna hai.

Adi shaked his head.They went for the meeting.Before entering,In the building.Maan looked at adi.

Maan:Now i'm ur boss and u r the accountant of my construction company.Remember discipline is very important.
Adi(Saluted maan):Yes sir!

Maan controlled his smile and entered in his company with an attitude.Adi smiled.He knew that maan never mixed personal and professional life.According to the bussiness world,He was angry man with alot of attitude but he was excellent in his work.But according to adi,He was very kind person with the heart of gold.

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Pinky was eating her burger while talking to geet on the phone.

Geet:Tumhare karoos boss ne tumhi aaj bhi nahi choti de.
Pinky:Yaar karoos tu mat kha.Woh bohat ache hain.Inhone adi aur mere shadi ke intazamat main bohat madad ke hai.
Geet(Rolled her eyes):Mujhe lagta hai tumhare boss ka naam in ke ghar walon ne sahee rakha hai DD.Dusht danav lagte hain mujhe.
Pinky:Aree nahi in ka asal naam DD nahi hai M..
Geet:Choro jo bhi naam ho inka mujhe yeh batao ka ...
Pinky:DD aa rahein hain.Main tumse baad main baat karte hoon.Bye.
Geet:Bye!




Precap:Maneet moments! 

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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
I know this part is not good.But next time,I will try to write nice part.This part is needed to show maan and adi's friend and pinky and geet's conversation was important.U will know the reason in the coming parts.


BTW loveeeee ur comments!!! Please leave ur comments on this part too.

Love,
Fatima