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GUNS AND ROSES thread 2 part 25 (Page 63)

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
nice part
loved it

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awesome update
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Maan ko uske sms k shortform nahi samaj aate
bechare ko gay bana diya Ravi ne lol, uski galti yeh hai ki wo apni wife se faithful hai though he hates her
lovely update
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wow atleast someone
playing cupid so they
can come one
wonderful update
pls cont soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
wow loved it so now geet is throwing attitude on maan

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 12:03am | IP Logged
 This part is dedicated to all those women who live on their own terms and yup don't regret itHug

PART 13Broken Heart

un hazaron ke naam mera salaam

Geet wanted to shut her thoughts of Maan..she was very confused was it because he didn't like her 'one she was unable to decide whether she loved him or he was a crush'second she was unsure of his marital status'third she was commitment phobic'..Geet was a messy bundle'her workfront was not doing much help to her she had stopped her late nights completely shut herself up and was doing a self analysis'.what had she done with herself'what had she achieved'.all she thought was she didn't do justice to her dreams'

   Geet had big dreams of being a journalist but she was getting nowhere'and this Sadoo Maan now she couldn't even ask him for the interview now'.

   Maan was not in Matribhoomi'he had his own game plan '.and yes Gee didn't feature anywhere'.Ravi tried to pop up the question but Maan silenced his efforts with an ACP glare'.Maan was in the coastal areas trying to locate the fisherman who had provided the boats and short cut maps to the attackers'.Ravi worried that soon Maan would get a cerebral or cardiac arrest'Maan was losing temper at the drop of a hat these days'.he again suspended a couple of officers'.the more complicated the case was becoming ACP MSK was becoming a bigger terror'..

     Maan phone beeped'.. Hello, Sir Sarat bol raha hu ap abhi Matribhoomi wapas aaye'.Cafe Leslie ke terrorist ka pata chal gaya hai'.

   Ravi ask the boys to move now we need to get back in two hours'.

   SSssirrr said a sub inspector 2hrsm is impossib'. Gupta tumhe salary kaam karne k lie milte hai so move your a** aj if we fail in this mission believe me you all are out of the force'.

  The caf Leslie criminal was hiding in a red light area'.aj saale cockroach ko maar ked um loonga thought Maan..No he would not arrest this guy he would shoot him'.they reached in two hours a 3.5 hours road covered in 2 hours who would risk ACP's wrath'.

   The mission motto was simple hound him surround him and kill him'..and yes they reached on time'this fellow had got a good deal of wealth for successfully killing innocents so he was enjoying himself in a woman's arms'.Maan kicked the door open and drgged him out'.le saale ye pistol pakad'.this guy who 3 weeks back had been a tiger killing people wet his pants he all too well knew the plan'.Maan was a sadist when it came to hardened criminals'he closed his eyes for a moment and remembered the pen camera footage bhag saale bhag he roared..this man ran for his life and then was shot dead'.a fake encounter which was witnessed by a number of people but who bothered? This was the suitable end for their betrayer'..

    Maan breathed relief but the devil within him was wide awake'he drove for pub hopping

     Ashiana Pub 12am- Geet and a few of her female colleagues were celebrating because their channel had topped the TRP charts'it was a Wednesday the pub not very crowded'..they sat sipping their drink when a group of boys entered the pub smashing tables and throwing out women'.they molested women and threatened them '..claiming to be custodians of Indian culture they used obscenities' the situation was going out of control because two bouncers fell short for 18 men'Geet and her friends ran out but a few were pulled by their hair'.oyye daru pee sakti hai to humare saath time bhi spend kar sakti hai'.

  Women were in tears it is then two constables regular patrol guys came to their rescue'Geet slipped out but one of the guys pulled her to the corner trying to kiss her'.and smash the guy was on the ground'how dare you touch her came the baritone'.Geet looked up to see the familiar form the knight who always was on time to save her'.he grabbed Geet and shoved her to his jeep'

   Maan vanished inside the pub'.with the police in time most of the guys were arrested'after having ensured that the women were also safe Maan came back to the jeep and dragged Geet out'what the hell are you upto hmm? Why is it that you are found at the most wrong place? Wo bhi akele? Geet looked at him dazed he had gripped her arms tightly'.main akele nehi thi I was with my colleagues'just shut up kabhi boy friend kabhi colleagues ultimately mujhe hi aana parta hai tumhe bachane k lie'he held her tightly against the car  do you want me to become your bodyguard Miss?.....Geet could see the taunt in his eyes''Mr.Khurana before you came these constables had arrived so I can make them my body guards? I am no VIP and can't effort your services so they'll come cheaper isn't it ? Geet think before you talk said Maan with gritted teeth'..Geet pushed him apko koi aur kaam nehi hai? Mere age peeche ghumne ki siva? She looked at his grip and looked back straight into his eyes leave me just leave apki chivalry ki mujhe koi zaroorat nehi hai'..Geet stop it before I lose my cool'.ye dhamki apke juniors ko dena ACP''Maan pulled her head nearer and pressed his lips to hers'he demanded an immediate entry into her mouth and explored her mouth to the farthest points'his frustration at work the alcohol and his baggage of dormant feelings had a toll on her lips'not that she didn't respond but she was very confused and anyways it was her first kiss'..he had almost lifted her of the ground and continued to kis her'how dare she say she didn't want her chivalry he was MSK he was brand a system in himself and how dare she question him'.how dare she not get it that his heart was fluttering for her'.after a good number of minutes he realized her eyes were water'he presumed she was short of breath and released her'..

  Get in..he said'.I don't want to go with you'Geet get in'she did'fasten your seat belt'.she did'he drove in silence and stopped right near her apartment'.Geet this is a warning no late nights when I am not around and I am not as  married as you think I am just a complicated person''

   She murmured Good Night and left


Precap: Geet's existentialist dilemma


 In February 2009 a shameful act shook the nation...a group of 17 men claiming to be custodians of Indian culture attacked women in a pub in Mangalore...Though 17 activists of Sri Ram Sena had been taken into custody in the Mangalore pub attack case, Ram Sena remains unapologetic about the attack and its founder P Muthalik termed the incident as a small thing..... They were protesting against a celebration of Valentine's day and saw the women's drinking act as a conspiracy to malign 'INDIAN' culture.....

   Now sharing a personal experience two years back I was to meet a friend for a drink I reached early and ordered a Vodka...and believe me this waiter refused to give me one until my male friend was only after a complaint to the manager that I got one.....

   Another sick info a so called happening pub in Kolkata a center of all the intellectual drinkers doesn't serve drinks to women unless they have male company...however firang women are served alcohol....


Edited by DILIBADAAT - 26 March 2011 at 12:05am

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged

wonderful part................loved it!!!!

gr8 update!!!!

preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Love the update............first abt the update............i was happy that he did kill this person rather than wasting ppl money on enquiry and court charges and celebrity treatment @ might b against law but i think this is some simple solution i support for these beasts who betray their country so no need to be a humanitarian with them.............sometimes i feel like to kill the human right activists who actually come fighting for these beasts with the force rather than they dont seem to care for the ppl who actually need them..............

uff their 1st kiss.........hey its 1st kiss for maan too maan's heart fluttering for his wife......glad to know that..........

well abt the pub incident i feel that some ppl who say they follow the culture hardcore they r just lying to themselves..........with the modernisation our culture has to have some changes...........sometimes i am confused wat they mean by culture itself............having woman under their dominance and treating them as slaves an just use them for pleasure is that wat they call tradition and culture.........well rather than categorizing their views as our culture they can term it as their views and perspective...............

that mangalore incident was one of the worst things ti happen to women.............this shows the security of our country.............. 

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