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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Amazing Update.
Aww don't get Sad , I am also FF writer so understand when I get low response.But then in initial days , you'll face such things.
So tell me what do you prefer more.
20 People commenting on your FF just saying 'Nice Update!!' OR 5 People commenting on your FF and giving full analysis for the FF?
Do change the title of it to FF so then people's attention can be caught.
And usually I don't read FF's but this FF seems interesting.

Okay now me commenting.LOLLOL
The Update was written in Simple words which made it seem so original.Sometimes , writing too Hi-Fi just does not suit and the piece of writing becomes artificial.But your update was very Simple and that's the thing which I liked the most about your writing.
Then , about Misha-Piya , I liked the scene alot where Piya calls Misha , Misha Di , after hearing that I was shocked.ShockedLOLLOLImagine Piya calling Misha , Misha Di in Pkyek.LOLLOL
The sisterly bond seems very sweet and fascinating.In pkyek they are just awesome but in your FF the bond of Piya-Misha seem more strong.
Then Shaurya-Panchi scene.
So awesome there is a proper character for Shaurya unlike in Pkyek.Ermm
I also liked the brother-sister bond of Shaurya-Panchi.
Panchi is just too sweet with her brother.
And as a FF Writer myself let me advice you , put the suspense in your FF , don't reveal it so soon as it will attract more readers.
Likewise , I want to know about Panchi's parents , so don't tell it so soon warna all suspense will be gone.

That's all.Update Soon Sis.Big smile


Edited by Princezz22 - 22 March 2011 at 9:55am

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
gr88888888 fab workkkkk

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Very nice work yaar....great update...ClapClap

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Nice part.. Misha is Piya's Di.. How sweet.. M not sure abt wat Shaurya is hiding from panchi bt watever it is.. hope he tells her soon.. Continue soon.. N u didnt disturb.. Pm me as n when u update d next part.. Thanx for d pm..lol..

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:06am | IP Logged
awesome update! Clap
do pm me 

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
do cont soon
thnx for the pm
 
love
sneha

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
nice update..!Smile
continue soon

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
just read ur ff. it's too good. plz continueDay Dreaming

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