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Guddu & Runjhun FF:U R MyWorld, My Love (C) - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: newfoundlove

great story
To tell u the truth though, i kept comparing this mahadevi to the one on tv, hoping she will beome more like this one!

Oh dear thats so sweet of you...but in the show i guess Mahadevi has a different role to play...i cherish sibling relations very much...thats why my Maha is a total support to her sister...happy yoknow that you liked it..love you๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

nidha meri jaaan ..
Wat an amazing surprise yaaar ...
Awwrsum prt ..
Ooo RJ checkin out her sher while hes working out ๐Ÿ˜‰ noughty sherni ...
Update sooon yaaar
Eagerlyyy waiting

Tehzeeb my most ardent and sweet supporter...really happy that you liked it...wellour sherni is sweet and nice...y not a lil naughty๐Ÿ˜‰...well the attraction isfrom both sides right...love you๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: sur001

NidNidh...meri jaan...dil khus kar diya...

Hamari sherni badi ho gayi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...mere aankhon me to khusi ke aansoo aa gaye๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜Š...Go Sherni get your hatta katta handsome but still jerk sher...
Totally loved it...you didnot let our wait down...dhamakedaar update...No comments on Mahadevi just prayer she gets some sense and becomes like the Mahadevi of your FF...
Yaar Doctor...haan...so when you gonna treat us as here all are suffering from Gunjhun Fever๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

Sur meri pyaari jaanu,...you are too sweet...haan humaro sherni badi ho gayi hain *wiping tears of happiness*...aur kyon nahi jab samne itne handsome,hot,sexy pati ho to usse nahi toh kise dekhenge...well my Mahadevi was mature from begining...but the show one is right now in dreamland lets hope she comes out soon..and her character grows...love you๐Ÿค—...Doctor Nidha checking your fever...Sur you have very high fever...i will suggest you take daily doses of GunJun from TV...and i will give you shots too...as much as possible...take some dose of Niyas ff as well...they will cure you superfast๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 19... Even while workingout his thoughts were lingering on Rhunjhun...she was slowly taking her place in Guddu shukla's mind and heart...her simplicity,shyness,but bold enough to answer back to him naturewas very much endearing...now she had an irritating habbit of visiting his dreams too...okay time to put a reign to this horse of thoughts Guddu beta he thought...he finished his workout and freshenedup ...he picked up a white shirt and denimjeans...when he was buttoning up his shirt he noticed two buttons missing...damn he so wanted to wear this today...well he can just wear anotherone...or better yet ask her to mend it...Guddu contemplated for a while and decided to ask her...he neede to go to Delhi..and this was his best shirt..."Rhunjhun" he called out to her coming out of the room...RJ came out of the room followed by Mahadevi...Guddu was surprised to find her...she was standing near the kitchen door looking sternly at him..."Ji aapne bulaya?"RJ asked...Mahadevi noticed the change in her sisters addressing...it was now respectful..."Han ...can you just mend thes buttons"he said pointing to his shirt...so he was also gentle with her hmmm Maha was quiet a bit surprised..."Ji mein karti hoon" RJ was about to go to get the needle and thread with buttons when she noticed him remobing his shirt..."No need for that...i can sew it while you are wearing it"she said before moving in...she came back with the things...Guddu moved closer to her...the top two buttons were missing...RJ started her work concentrating on the buttons...Guddu on the other hand was drinling in her heavenly smell...he wanted to run his hands thruogh her hair,feel their texture,play with them...OH GOD this girl manages to wreack havoc on all my sense Guddu thought...everytime she comes neari feel like crushing her against me and kiss her till shes out of breath...RJ's thoughts were no less conflicted...her head was close to his broad chest...what would it be like she thought to lie close to his heart hugging him...heavenly i guess...both of them remained still knowing full well that Mahadevi was intently watching them...RJ remembered the conversation she wasin with Maha when G called her...Earlier in kitchen..."So Di how is life here?...i can definitely see you are happier" Mahadevi asked...RJ was tongue tied momentarily...her sister it seems had mistaken her oggling at Guddu as somethingelse...but she couldn't ssy that she was sad...she was happy to be here...happier ever than before...but her relation with her husband was still the same...or was it?..."Di...earth to..." Maha said.."What oh yeah am happy"RJ said plastering a smile on her face...but +ahadevi hadn't missed the changein her sisters expression...she had almost a pained expressionon her face when in reveri...so G's and her sisters relation was still the same..."Di are you happy with him...i mean have you started a life with him?"Maha asked just to be sure..."No Maha...theres nothing between us"RJ said bluntly..."Am staying here to care gor Bauji...he has just gone through anoperation...he needs care for a few months...but now he is really better...i will soon leave this house"RJ said sadly...yes she had to go...had to move on...Guddu and her had no future together...they didn't love each otner...they respected each other ...she was indebted to him for her life...but sometimes she felt that he had done it for humanitys sake...she doubted it very much...she didm't want to be a bureden on him..."Di am not going to interfere in your life...but remember this Di ...follow your heart...be practical but not too much...listen to your heart once in a while...also remeber...we me,Amma and also now you Bauji loves you very ,much...wherever you goyou can never go away from our hearts...also i want you to keepin touch with me...i want to take you home...but that place never gave you anything but sadness...i am sure you'll be able to find a job and settle in...but please do callus if you need help...we can never forgive ouselves if anything happened to you"Maha hugged her sister tightly...Maha had clearly noticed the expressions on G's face...it seemed he was fighting hard to resist something...but what? was he attracted to her sister? she couldn't see RJ's face so didn't no what was going on there..."Lo ho gaya"Rj said moving away from G..."Thanx he said slightly smiling at her..."Di i better leave...Amma will be worried...i had told her where i was going...also i have a fest coming up in college...bit of organisition to do...families of students are being invited for an exhibition...so loads to manage"Maha said scurrying to take her bag..."But when did you start college?"RJ asked surprised"Oh yeah...since no rishtaas are getting confirmed Amma got papaji convinced on sending me too college atleast to finish this course"Maha smiled brightly "Good for you"Rj hugged her lil sis..."Di why don't you do something...you come along to the fest tomorrowwith Shukla Sir...Amma is coming ...also the others at home...though i really don't want them to...you can meet Amma Di"Maha said eagerly...RJ was doubtful...she didn't want to meet her M&M's..."But Bauji is not well and"..."Thats okay beta...you can go with Guddu...i'll ask him to take you"Dinanth who had come in said...Guddu who wad listening to this conversation from inside was surprised by his fathers answer..."Thats not needed Sir...i can pickup Di on my way"Maha said almost rudely this irked G...what was that girl thinking he was going to eat her Di...well he loved to irritate these sisters...he will carry RJ there if needed be..."Thats okay Mahadevi...i'll escort your sister to your college..."He smiled devilishly ..."Bauji i don't want to go really...you'll be alone here"RJ said hurriedly...Maha was looking daggers at G...who was smiling back...she didn't want them to fight..."Thats okay beta...afterall i have to learn to be alone...you are nt here forever na"he smiled sadly...Rj and G both looked hurt by the statement
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Posted: 13 years ago
PRECAP...G discovers truth behind his arrest -RJ leaves Shukla Niwaas-...so will G be able to get his lady love back?...guess on...and leave your valuable comments criticisms and hit the like button too...love ya all sweeties
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nidh...my angel...are you planning to drop me to heaven...in your fairly white chariot...It needs to much strength to read yours and Niya's FF and take breath...so...I guess I will have to follow your prescription coz if I will die then how will I comment on your beautiful update...Thanks for the prescription...

                       Lovely...Beautiful...awesome...fantastic ...fabulous...I will not add more as I am saving some words for their confession...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
So RJ has no problem in coming closer and mending the button...Why she didn't follow her heart and rested her head on his chest๐Ÿ˜ก...Maha would have left the place providing them some private moment for sure...๐Ÿ˜†...
Precap is just dhamkedaar...Ab Pandey logo ki b araat...Guddu nikalega aur humlog baraati ban ke dekhenge...ho sake to ee dono mai se ego ganwaa background me bajwaa dena...Tujhe bhula diya...ya...pyaar hai ya saja ae mere dil bata...If you'll want and we will pray...he will surely get her and this time...yaar...ek jadoo ki jhappi toh banti hai na...
Update sooonnn...
waitttiiinnnggg...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nidha yaar
Amazing prt yaar ...simpley faaab ..
Luv d precap ...hooope ths also happens in d show ...
Waiting for their confession
Update sooon pezzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear amazing work and the precap was great. Day by day u r making us more exicited. Great Job.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb!

Doctor, you have another patient to treat ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
Honeslty I'm running out of words to explain my feelings regarding your evergreen FF. Awesome,
Wonderful, Amazing, Beautfiul๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
Loved  the button scene, just way too cute ๐Ÿ‘loved the way u wrote their emotions
 
awww can't wait to hear them say I LOVE U๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
 
Update soon my sweet heart ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Š