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Raindrops - A Story || Last Chapter : Page 50 (Page 35)

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 9:44pm | IP Logged

Part 2 - I know I am so behind but hopefully will be able to catch up once exams are done! Embarrassed

First of all, seriously speaking, u r one of the best writers I've come acrossClap.... u have a way with words Clap..... Ur words make the reader feel the emotions of the characters. Beautiful!!! Clap

The first part where u describe Anna's feelings as she sits in her class was just so good. You were wonderful with portraying both Anna & Chris' newfound emotions.... Initial days of love...Day Dreaming

Ali-Saba part was a total opposite from Chris-Anna's. Their first meeting was intense and beautiful .....Gun falling out of his hands as he removed the hair from her face....it was a very nice symbolic way to show how his priorities changed that instance itself....Fear & Love - what a combo and portrayed beautifully!!

"Humne hamesha saath rehne ka vaada kiya tha na, to tum kaise mujhe chhodkar chale gaye - mere paas laut aao ya mujhe apne paas bula lo kyunki Ali ke bina Saba kuch nahi hai - uska koi vajoot nahi hai ...." - Crybeautiful line!!!

 

 



Edited by Ishita16 - 15 April 2011 at 9:45pm

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
edited on pg 35. Smile and pearl u haven't edited the title for chap 12. Smile

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Originally posted by -Mehak

edited on pg 35. Smile and pearl u haven't edited the title for chap 12. Smile

Thank you Di for reminding, I totally forgot ... :)

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Sorry for editing lateOuch, I was terribly stuck up...
and secondly, I was left numb after reading the Chapter

How cruel can this world be? How hard is it to let a person move out of darkness? Ali tried, he tried hard, but nobody let him. Instead, they smothered his heart and threw him into further darkness. Cruel heartless world.

Chris and Anna, what to say? Love falls prey to conspiracies again.

Hoping for a bright future

and exemplary writing Jaee...

God Bless You

~jiya~
 


Edited by jiya_angel - 16 April 2011 at 9:56am

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Posted: 16 April 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
nice one
continue soon

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Posted: 16 April 2011 at 3:38am | IP Logged
loved it but am feeling so bad love saba and ali

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Posted: 16 April 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
update was beautifelly written......

it was heart piercing  jaee.....ali and saba journey turning into terrible pain and sorrows.........cant see thm like this.......

ths world really cant see sum one happiness.........

and ana and chris i just dont understd if trust too mch thn y cant they just talk to eachother and resolve  ths missunderstanding.............

update soon dear.....................

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its BeautifullClap

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