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beautiful update...

loved da endongEdited by cutiepie12 - 13 years ago

haa..

Jaeee

I was so happy for Anna-Chris but after reading Ali-Saba's story all my happiness drowned

beautiful ending

Chris-Anna were lucky to be strong

but Ali-Saba were even more lucky as in heaven no one will separate them

each story had it's own beauty

do write more

Excellent part jaee...👏👏

Dnt know whether i should be happy or sad...The marriage ws blissful...Every word, every smiles just reached through my heart...And the vows...Cant praise enough as the words felt short...
But the death ws terrible...My hands wr trembling when they wr running to escape...They already suffered a lot...I never wanted this ending for them...Tears wr on the way in the ending part...U wrote sooo beautifully that i cudnt resist them to flow down...But as u said their love became eternal...
Even loved the 'colors of love'...Dnt know why but the Arabic thought touched me the most...Specially this two stages-ibadat and junoon...

Thnxx for this brilliant piece...Though i cudnt cmnt in every part but i've read all the parts and this ws really a wonderful journey...
God bless u dear...Write more...🤗

1 got love n their living happily

Really that Was so Beautiful story a perfect ending

These were such beautiful stories. Anna and Chris & Ali and Saba all had their shares of pain and separation, but in the end, their love triumphed and they became one, whether through marriage or through death. Their ultimate goals were to become one and that is what they achieved. 

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