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awesome update

Part 2 - I know I am so behind but hopefully will be able to catch up once exams are done! 😳

First of all, seriously speaking, u r one of the best writers I've come across👏.... u have a way with words 👏..... Ur words make the reader feel the emotions of the characters. Beautiful!!! 👏

The first part where u describe Anna's feelings as she sits in her class was just so good. You were wonderful with portraying both Anna & Chris' newfound emotions.... Initial days of love...😍

Ali-Saba part was a total opposite from Chris-Anna's. Their first meeting was intense and beautiful .....Gun falling out of his hands as he removed the hair from her face....it was a very nice symbolic way to show how his priorities changed that instance itself....Fear & Love - what a combo and portrayed beautifully!!

"Humne hamesha saath rehne ka vaada kiya tha na, to tum kaise mujhe chhodkar chale gaye - mere paas laut aao ya mujhe apne paas bula lo kyunki Ali ke bina Saba kuch nahi hai - uska koi vajoot nahi hai ...." - 😭beautiful line!!!

 

 

Edited by Ishita16 - 13 years ago

edited on pg 35. 😊 and pearl u haven't edited the title for chap 12. 😊

reserved Edited by jiya_angel - 13 years ago

nice one
continue soon

loved it but am feeling so bad love saba and ali

update was beautifelly written......

it was heart piercing  jaee.....ali and saba journey turning into terrible pain and sorrows.........cant see thm like this.......

ths world really cant see sum one happiness.........

and ana and chris i just dont understd if trust too mch thn y cant they just talk to eachother and resolve  ths missunderstanding.............

update soon dear.....................

Pain Pain n jus pain

Really Brilliant update Jaee

no words to say this update speechless dear

n beautifuly written

thanks for the pm