part... 4... beautiful...
wt a deadly contrast... of pain & joy @ d same tym...
*sigh* i'm luving it!
Originally posted by: -Mehakreserved
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*sigh*
it was indeed beautiful, not only beautiful, but it was heart-breaking, the present is heart-wrenching, but the past..*sigh*..her tears prick him.."chubtey hain mujhe"..beautiful, you cannot explain protection better than this..wonderful piece of writing, but somewhere i feel that this line is far more than a part of your FF.
chris and anna..what to say about them, i just fear about them, seeing the other two, i wish they don't go through that level of pain,..
Cont. soon..God Bless..
Originally posted by: ginny09bahuttttttt acha hai jaeeeeeeeeeeeee
but isme humare mayur kahan ayengebut stry is good :D
Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharmahey jaee!! firstly happy b'day!😃
anyways d update..gosh as d story is progrssin...i feel so bad fr saba n ali! man they r goin thru so much! seperation is d wrst thng ..n anna n chris awww i wish they nvr havto go thru wat d othr two are!!n m lovin d daily updates😆 thnx fr d pm!!😳
Originally posted by: jiya_angel
Dear jaee... once again Happy Birthday❤️about the update...well, its just too heartwrenching to see the pain Ali and Saba are going through... why is love so painful? "tumhaare aansun chubte hain mujhe" these words actually pricked my heart... how painful it is to know that the one you lived for does not live any more... but you have to live... It's a package, the tears only increase the worth of the smiles and Ali and Saba's love is indeed heartbreaking ...Chris and Anna were like a breath of fresh air... air that is filled with love...with happiness... but a reader fears, will they also see the same fate? Will their love will also be butchered like Ali and Saba?? I pray not... Chris and Anna have just started ... they have to struggle as well ....Thanks for the pm Thank you so much :)with luv~jiya~
Originally posted by: -madhvi-i read the entire thing in one go.....and loved it....amazing do update soon
Originally posted by: drfizaahmedits amazing jaee
too gud.....the way he said chubtey hain mjhyy...ahh was awesumit is a beautiful updaten the other couple.....sweet start.....
Originally posted by: kashndsel4evaawesome updateloved itcant wait 4 da next partcon soonthanks 4 da pmHAPPY BDAYWISH U ALL THE BESTHOPE U HAVE A NICE DAYMUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Originally posted by: DhanakZHay Jaee HAPPY BIRTHDAY
Great and so touching updateHope Ali and saba ,meet soonThanks for Pmcont soon
Originally posted by: princez_94Jaee. you left me speechless... A very beautiful update...
As lovely the past is the more heart breaking the present is. It's like having this beautiful dream, and then suddenly wake up and realise it was just a dream come true but not lasting forever... Dreams sometimes shatter and wound the hearts ...
Ali... I just remember one line fromthis serial... "Woh pyaar he kya jho aapki hifazat an kar saky"... I wouldn't say more than that... 😳 Wow that's a wonderful line ...
"Bikhar gaye ek pal mein sapne, dekhe the hazaaron jo teri nazar se ... Kaisa sitam ye is zamaane ka hai ki chheen liya jism se saaya ... Darmiyaan tere mere kaisi ye deewaarein hai ki ab aansuon ke alaawa kuch nahi raha mera yahaan ..."
It defined them both in a perfect manner.... 😳 Awesome Jaee...
Anna & Chris, their relationship is like a new rose, its' the most beautiul thing... But a rose has to die someday... Well, Anna and Chris will have to see the worst to enjoy the best ...
I'm short of adjectives.... A beautiful ff... I can't get enough of it, i read it 3 times still i can't get over it... 😍 It's so mesmerizing.... I'm addicted to ur ff... 😳 The contrast between both of the stories, u done it so superbly...Just awesome... 👏
Btw are these daily updates??? 😳 One thing that i didn't like was the lenght... A bit long please, i know it take a lot of time to write so beautifully but still... Feel so sad whenever the I'm done reading..
Uff... Can i hug for writing this... it sooo... wow... 🤗 Thank you so much Laiba, your comments really really are encouraging - thank you :)
-Laiba
Originally posted by: samiralovemayurtotally wonderful part Jaeen amazing storythnx for the pm
Originally posted by: Ishita16Happy Birthday!!!I haven't had a chance to read this ff of yours yet due to midterms..Now that they r done, Will try to read it this weekend.res...will update soon. 😊
Originally posted by: gopi06it is a beautiful update jaee
thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: roshneerakhalipyar.........ek sath jannat jahannam dono dikha dete hain.
Originally posted by: -afsha-Im jus loving Ali n Saba's past moments
Man they loved each other so muchWitout words they confessed itAnna n Chris present love stry was shweetChris is sweetheart
Originally posted by: mahakmevsuperbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
Originally posted by: Riddssheyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
love
Riddss
Originally posted by: drmaha"Tumhaare aansun chubte hain mujhe ..."
thses lines were heart wrenching jaee.........😭
full of pain.....loved it...........
Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-Happy B'day once again jaee...
part... 4... beautiful...
wt a deadly contrast... of pain & joy @ d same tym...
*sigh* i'm luving it!
Originally posted by: -Sajjal-Jaee, i have been keeping up with the story , the way you have shown the constrast so delicately between the couples is admirable. The way you flow from the imense pain to happiness is an art in itself. you have a distinct way of describe the pain and happiness that the one who is reading feels well connected to it.
Keep up the good work.
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