Jaee, I don't know what to say... Firstly I love all ur titles of ur ffs, they are unique... And i'm in love with this one too... Coming to the story or stories, i absolutely loved them, how 2 stories very different yet common...
Chapter 1
The first one seems like a really sad one, about betrayel, true love...betrayed by everyone... It's seem sreally intense...
for the other one, it seem like a fairytale come true, a romantic entry a dreamy world of Anna & Chris a very sweet start... π³
Cahpter 2
Itni dardanak kahani... they are not together still their hearts are connected, there eyes might betray them but there hearts can they only know one thing... If one is alive then the other must also be... π³
There first meet was very strange one, not at all a normal one...But a very nice one, it looked like their hearts connected at the first sight... The last lines said by Saba was π... Beautiful Jaee....
Saba & Ali two starngers met under strange circumstances, not a word exchanged just the volume of their eyes spoke... And a year later everything is changed...both of them hoping that the breath their breathing every second would be the last so that they could re-unite... But the world is cruel...2 lovers not destined to meet as of yet...
The past flashbacks are really sweet, how he so strong that he can protect her from the worlds evil eyes but still loose hi senses by once looking into her eyes...π³
And on the other side Anna-Chris so lost in each other, not caring about the world around them... such sweet love... the way he runs after her just to give her a rose was really cute....π³
The most beautiful stories i ever read... Really beautifully written, u describe the emotions so well from a happilly in love couple to a dardanak couple who world parted...π Jaee this is truly one of ur best piece of writing...π³
Out of the both I feel more connected to Saba & Ali... Not to be very biased on the very start but it something about them... I read both but how u described the characters of Saba & Ali... just wow...π
I'm already in love with this...This beautiful Jaee...π€
Thanks a lot for the PM...π€I know you just updated today but when is next update???π€
-Laiba