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Maan Ka Haal SS lst prt + epi Pg19 (Page 8)

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oye kab se updating hai yaar.... update to karoAngry

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Part 2

Brijj came and said that the function is over.

Brijj : Maan can I ask you something?ConfusedWinkLOL

Maan : yes.LOLConfused

Brijj: what made you fall for her?Question

 Maan : (dramatically) it's a long story. When she was 7 and me Day Dreaming

Before Maan could complete his sentence Brij shouted in between.

Brijj: KYA??? You loved my sister when she was 7?Confused


Maan : no...mere baat tho sunoo. Its like...LOLLOLLOL

Maan was about to open his mouth again to say about his never-ending love story but Brijj thought it is better to escape now than late.


Brijj : well Maan I don't have time to hear this Mahabharat.. So no need to tell me.LOLLOL


Maan : arre listen yaar. I was not in love that time its just..LOL(B4 completing Brij cut him in)

Brijj saw Sameera walking near by them .

Brijj : Haan Sameera. Meih abi aayi. Maan Sam is calling me, got to go.LOLLOL


Maan : But I didn't hear her calling you..Confused


Brijj : how can you hear? She called me naa.LOLLOL


Maan : but Confused(Confused)


Brijj : no but, I will listen to you later. Now got to go.LOLLOL


Sam heard this conversation and got confused.


Sam : But I didn't call you Brijj bhai.ConfusedLOLLOL


Brijj : chup. Do you have partial amnesia?Angry  just now you called me, now come lets go and do work what Mom assigned before you forget my name.LOLLOLLOL(brijj thinking: Thank You Babaji for saving me from hearing maan's never ending Love story.)


Maan : Hmm... don't worry Brijj I will tell you later.LOLLOLLOL(Brij escaping from Maan)


Brijj : ok Maan.LOLLOL  (Brijj thinking: Babaji save me from this Maan. No wonder Geet runs away from him.)


Sam : Brijj Bhai kaam kya hai?LOL


Brijj : err.. well. I forgot.LOL


Sam : kya??? How can you forget?Angry


Brijj : kyun? Can't I forget? I'm a human. And human sometime forget. Understand you dumb-Sam. I'm going, if I stay with you here, I will become mad. LOL


Poor Sam didn't understand anything and saw Brijj leaving her behind.


Brijj : thank you Babaji. Now I have to be careful of not be in front of Maan. LOLLOLLOL


Maan was walking through the Handa Mansion and saw Geet laughing and talking with Tasha, Sasha, Vicky and Rajji. He was lost in that smile. He loved to see her small cute expressions and gestures. He remembered hoew he used to do something stupid when he is around Geet.


Flashback (one incident)


Maan : 21


Geet : 18


Geet was crying because she was soon to join college and she was scared. Brijj was consoling her and Tito was giving her tissue paper to wipe her tears. Maan was waliking inside Handa Mansion to see Brijj, well actually to meet his princess, Geet. Maan saw Geet crying and asked what is the matter and Tito said the reason behind her cry. Maan went near Geet and started consoling her and said it is not big deal and she will find new friends and said wonderful thinks which made Geet happy. She smiled at him. His heart skipped a beat seeing her smile at him and he was on cloud nine. Big smile


Maan to himself: well done Maan, now she is giving you attention. Grab this opportunity to go closer to her. LOLLOL


Brijj : (thinking) wow, first time Geet listening to Maan. I wish he does not do anything stupid this time.Wink


Maan : But Geet you should be careful.LOL


Geet : kyun?Cry


Maan : Because there may be Ragging. And I don't think anyone can escape from it.LOLLOLLOL


Geet : Raaggiinnng??(Stammers)ROFL


Maan : yes Geet. You should be brave to face it. You should not cry, but should face it.LOL


Maan was advicing Geet as if she is going to World-war. How to fight and be brave was the main ingredient. Maan was telling about ragging, many incidents related and how seniors make fresher's life HELL. Geet was shivering like a leaf. Maan was pleased when he saw Geet listening to him and he continued the stories. ROFL


Brijj : (thinking) this idiot is making her more scared. Hell, no wonder Geet runs away from him. Before he make Geet more scare, I should stop him.ShockedLOLLOL


Brijj :  err...Maan.LOLLOL


Maan : Shut up Brijj. Geet suno... Another incident is that, in our college one Girl got hurt...LOL


Before he could finish his sentence, Geet fainted. Before she falls down, Brijj caught her. It took 3 hours for her to regain her consciousness. She was crying more, Maan came near her to CONSOLE her again but Brijj dragged him from her room.


Maan : Brijj leave me, let me go and console her. She needs me. LOLLOLLOL


Brijj : (thinking) If Maan console Geet again she will next be in ICU. LOLLOLLOL


Brijj : Maan, Dr told she need rest. That means she should be left alone. Come tomorrow.LOLLOL


Maan : but how can I leave her like this?ROFL


Brijj : (thinking) if you didn't leave the Mansion, Geet will leave the world hearing your stupid nonsense.Angry


Brijj : Maan... I told naa. Meet her tomorrow. She needs rest. See she is here and you can talk tomorrow. LOL


Maan : ok. Brijj. I'm leaving. Cry


Brijj : ok bye.Dancing


Maan : but before I leave I must say bye to her or else she will bad naa.LOLLOL


Brijj : NahiiiShocked


Maan : why are you shouting?AngryAngryAngry


Brijj : I will tell her, you go.LOLLOLLOL


Maan : you will say naa. Pakka?LOL


Brijj : haan meri MAA tu chal.Angry


Maan : I'm not Maa, its Maan.LOL


Brijj : haa yaar,. Ab chal naa.LOLLOL


Maan : ok bye.Cry


He left and went to his Mansion. He called Brijj Every 5 mins to enquire about Geet. Poor Brijj never got a minute sleep due to Maan's call. LOL




Flashback end


Sam saw Maan again ogling at Geet and showed it to NT and Dev.


NT : How romantic???Day Dreaming


Dev: what romantic? There is nothing romantic in it. AngryAngry


NT : uff... duffer see how maan bro looks at Geet.LOLLOL


Sam : like Fox looking at Hen.LOLLOLLOL(Ohh Sam calling Geet Chicken?Sam u'll be chicken fry if Maan hears this)LOL


NT : you both are not romantic. You will not understand this. AngryAngryAngry


Dev : well, I don't want to understand this stupidity.Angry


NT : So you think this is stupid?Angry


Dev : yesLOL


NT : You think his feeling is stupid? Angry


Dev : yesLOL


NT : You think love is stupid?Angry


Dev : yes (he was saying yes to everything without hearing properly)LOL


NT : Next you will say I'm stupid to love you.AngryAngryAngry




NT : KYA??? I'm stupid you asshole. Angry


Dev : no, no NT I didn't mean that. I was about to say..LOL




She left from there and Dev following her trying to ease her.LOLLOLLOL


Dev : listen Sweetie.LOLLOL


NT : shut up...Angry



Edited by Ash534 - 04 November 2011 at 11:28am

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
loved it n god plz give maan some sense he is advicing geet or scaring her
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
great part
con't soon
more maaneet scenes please:)
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
love it
love it
oh maan so dumb
amazing update
pls cont soonnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
superb update
Haha Brij running away from Maan as he don't wanna her his ne'ver ending luv story
Maans advice was so stupid::it was lyk he was preparing her 4 a a war lol--& Brij keeping Maan away from Geet
Luvd this line especially: ' if you didn't leave the Mansion, Geet will leave the world hearing your stupid nonsense ROFL
& also dat part wen he sed his names not MAA it's MAAN lol
Oooh Dev got himself stuck now--how is he going 2 fix it now
Cont soon--luv this story
Thx 4 the PM Xx...

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 21 March 2011 at 12:52pm
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
nice .... but i feel bad for Maan .. he loves her to bits and she gets irratated ... poor Maan  LOL... nobody understand his feelings Disapprove ...  

yaar thora Geet ko bhi piyaar ka ehsaas dilao ... 

btw how long is this OS/SS.. ? as in how many parts?

continue soon 


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