OS - GoHam in Switzerland (Final chapter page 6) - Page 7

Posted: 13 years ago
Kaki, that was wonderful how Ahem came to care about Gopi
Lovely chapter. Looking for more OSs from you
Posted: 13 years ago
Sighhhhhh ... that was beautiful,  Shelly ! .... Thank you sooooo much ...


Posted: 13 years ago
Great story Shelly missed your short stories for a long time. Great to see you came back with a bang. Good story loved the part of gopi and ahem in the hotel room together and gopi in the bat tub. It reminded me of pretty women. Loved the part where you take us to the interesting point and then just stop and let us dream of what will happen next between gopi and ahem. Great to see you back missed all your analysis of ahem's thoughts when we would have a sensational episode. Take care and hoping to see more of your short stories. Thanks.
Posted: 13 years ago
What a beautiful  story  - love it - so simple and yet perfect.  what more can I say . Love it Love it.
Posted: 13 years ago
Shelley. Wonderful. Loved that Ahem was taking care of Gopi. About time he did that somewhere. I loved Gopi's line when she said "Shhh we're pretending." So cute. I could totally picture a drowsy Gopi saying that. Maybe even a talli Gopi. LOL ðŸ˜‰

Related Topics

No Related topics found

Topic Info

25 Participants 64 Replies 10923Views

Topic started by ShellJA

Last replied by choti_rani

loader
loader
up-open TOP