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Destiny's Play-LXXXVIII,LXXXIX,XC-129,135,140-27/3 (Page 95)

serialwatcher16 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged

Sameera/Dev's story is Day Dreaming and fun

Thanks for the update

anuandavi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 12:07am | IP Logged
O, so Maan has accepted the jodi before even it is formed. I don't know how Geet will react to it.

And are the babies, PAPA's babies? They simply allowed their mama to rest once their papa told them to. Wow yaar.
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

Wonderful updates...I was initially apprehensive when you started Sameera's story. Truthfully speaking, I didnt like it one bit since my mind is always so full of Maan and Geet...but the way you have turned the story around, I even wait to read Sameera's part of the story now...

Thanks Opti, you are a wonderful writerSmile
I'm glad I could make you love my Sam and her track with Dev. As their love stroy peaks in the coming updates, you'll see more of her and Dev, although I'll also be givin gMaaneet moments.  The confrontation between Geet and Dev  will also come up in an update or two.
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swan20

Sameera-Dev's love story is shaping up really her punches were lethal...LOL

Maan's talk with the babies was so cute...Embarrassed

me waiting to see Arjun's downfall......only hope Maan doesn't get annoyed with Geet when he comes to know she kept the truth from him...

lovely parts.
Thanks swan. Sam's blows must have stung Dev quite a bit considering that she is an expert in martial arts. Arjun's downfall will take time.  It could cause some heartburns when Maan comes to know of the plan which Geet kept hidden from him.
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smallville

Aaaww maan talking to the babies was adorable .... Great update !!
Thanks. Glad you liked my Maan's hard talk to his babies.
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharmake11

all parts were enjoyable
wow love sam & dev love story
cant wait to see when they
confess there love to one another
they deserve it each other
maaneet super love how maan
talk to babies so there mother cn
sleep he so adorable & sweetheart
brilliant update
pls cont soonnnnnnn
Thanks sharmake. they will first have to realise and admit to themselves that they indeed love each other before confessing it to the other. Maan will always take good care of his wife, even it means he will have to warn his babies to keep quiet.
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

Poor Dev! This is the second time he has been beaten up by her!!

Maan's talking to his Petal, Ice and Ribby was very cute.....being pregnant is a task in itself....carrying around triplets must be so tiring. Still a woman goes through it selflessly. That is why it is said that no one can be greater than a mother. 
  Yes, but the first time was just a slap. This was a shower of blows which stung much more.  Yes, it is very tiring to carry around triplets which is why Geet is no longer pursuing her singing or drawing.  There is no replacement for the mother but with an able and caring father, at least things could be smoothened. 

Edited by Opti - 25 March 2011 at 1:23am

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Ilovemsk IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
I loved the baby part
It was damn cute <3
loved the maneet Scenes in the second part.
Plz write more baby stuff xx

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