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Destiny's Play-LXXXVIII,LXXXIX,XC-129,135,140-27/3 (Page 94)

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soapoperasrfun

Now can an update get more perfect than this one?

Nacent stepts towards Arjun's downfall, Sameer and Dev's love story and Maaneet and the babies. How cute. every bit was enjoyable.

Yash is doing everything to teach Arjun a lesson. I am very happy that he took Anwesha and Geet into confidence before he attempted anything. Although we haven;t read much about him, I like Yash Big smile

Sameera the kungfu blackbelt. LOL. Poor Dev, I don;t know how many more times he will get physically abused and how many more times Sameera will have to save him. This is the 2nd time he has been beaten. But even I was shocked when I read the bit where sameera almost ordered him to take off his pants. Awww, she blused thinking about it later. 

I will never get tired saying this. Maan is the best husband ever and will be the greatest dad too. I wish off the 3 atleast one is a boy. He has girlie nicknames for all his kids. Cute ones though, but girlie. 

And I am one of the first few to catch the update Embarrassed

Loving it Opti. 
Thanks Priti.  Yes, Yash is doing his bit to teach Arjun his lesson and he is a patient man, implementing his plan, one step at a time. Sam is quite versatile. Given that Dev gets beaten up often her skills will come handy to protect him I guess. She didn't realise what she was asking him to do when she asked him strip.  Lets see what combination of girls/boys Maaneet end up having. You think all the names are girlie? Hopefully their real names will not sound that way. 

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by millie_maaneet

awesome update
loving the way  u r carrying d story...
both maaneet n dev sameera...
u r really an amazing writer
Thanks millie. Glad you like both the tracks.
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
awesome part! sameera's story is really starting to grow on me..and maan was super cute at the end ahhah! 
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zaara2212

Tongueloved it
Thanks Zaara.
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

oh maan talking to the babies part was cute.....................
thanks preethia

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
wow babies list ening to papa from now itself
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:31pm | IP Logged

Opti , I had tears in my eyes reading Maneet part . It was so beautifully written , am speechless ; words would fall short regards how I felt so would just give you an ovation Clap    Clap    Clap

As for Dev & Sameera , I felt that Dev received his punishment when his wife left him , also when she aborted their baby . In way Dev deserved this ; but still Geet lost her father because of him & she was not evenly remotely anywhere @ fault . Somehow I still cannot forgive Dev ; maybe I 'm biased but I feel this way .

Loved the parts ...
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
LOVELY N AWESOME UPDATE

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