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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by -dia-


lovely part..............loved it!!!

wonderful update!!!

Thanks dia.
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by serialwatcher16


Opti,

Nice godh bharai update. Maan and geet are really sweet.

I want sameera and dev' to have a long engagement period. Just like that. It sounds cute. We already have married couples in maan and geet and adi/pinky. I want an engagement romance for sameera/dev.
Sorry Usha. Did not plan for a long engagement for Sam-Dev because their story was an offshoot of the main Maaneet story. So the central characters will still be Maaneet.  There are some cute moments for them though.
Edited by Opti - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by punjabi.princes


lovely part
con't soon
Thanks
Posted: 13 years ago

Part XC

 

One week later

 

 

It was the eve of Valentine's Day.  Sameera had been busy at work ever since she got back from Bangalore, trying to clear all the pending cases. No matter how tired she felt at the end of the day, she looked forward to spending whatever little was left of the waking hours with Dev, engaging in long conversations with him.  He too seemed equally keen to spend time with her, making her laugh till her belly hurt with his poker face witty comments on the events of that day.  The guy had no qualms making fun of himself.  


For instance that morning she noticed that he came in from outside in his track suit, sweating from head to foot, his hair sticking out like the spines of a porcupine. When asked where he had been he responded that he had hit the gym to develop his body. Sameera was astonished that he would suddenly be conscious of his physique.   When she teased him about it, he smiled wryly and said that not every guy was naturally blessed with a good physique like her good friend Maan. Some guys who are pigeon chested like him needed to work out to tighten and tone up their chest and pectoral muscles. When she still pressed on as to why he suddenly felt the need to build his physique he replied that he had been beaten to a pulp by a nymph-like girl in the not too distant past which only underlined how hopelessly under-toned his body was. So he was only ensuring it is well primed to withstand any future blows that may come his way. Sameera smiled guiltily, reminded of her misplaced valour.

 

That night after they had retired to bed Sameera lay awake for a long time on the bed. Her heart seemed to burst with all the pent up love she had for Dev. She felt she had to let him know how much she loved him and convince him to give a second chance for love in his life. Her feminine intuition told her that he was definitely more than attracted to her. Somehow she felt that his hitting the gym to tone up his body was more to impress her than for anything else. Maybe knowing that she once dated the well-toned Maan whipped up his insecurities. As Geet advised, maybe she needed to make the first move. She needed to assure him that she loved him as he was; nothing can make her love him less. Making up her mind, she went to his room and knocked on his door. Not getting any response, she slowly pushed open the door and realised he was not sleeping in the room.

 

Wondering where he could have gone, she was about to go searching for him when she saw light streaming from the bottom of the closed library door. She went in and found Dev stretched out on one of the chairs, a book on Finance lying on his chest. He had apparently dozed off while reading the book.  Seeing his sleeping face which looked so innocent and vulnerable, she felt her heart strings tugged. She knelt by his side and removed the book from his chest, replacing it with her head. She heard the steady thumping of his heart beat which seemed to reassure her that he was always there for her.  She could not restrain her feelings any longer. She felt the sudden urge to pour her heart out to him even if he was not in a position to hear or respond to her. Maybe it is just as well, she thought. She will practice what she will tell him the next day when he was conscious by saying it all to his unconscious sleeping form.

 

"Dev," she whispered hesitatingly. "I know you are sleeping and may not hear a single word of what I am about to say but I am going to say it nevertheless. I never thought I could ever fall in love with anyone.  I fiercely guarded my independence and considered myself self-sufficient. That was before I met someone like you. In your quiet unobtrusive way you made your way into my heart. I could let my guard down and expose my vulnerabilities to you without feeling ashamed of them, for you never let me feel weak or helpless. I feel more human in your presence, more alive. You cheer me up when I am down. At work you give me complete freedom to operate on my own but I know I can always count on your guidance and wisdom when I need it.  You are always sensitive to people's problems and difficulties. At the same time you are firm when you have to be. No wonder you are so loved by your employees. But I don't want to be just another employee. I want you to love me as a man would love a woman. I want to own your heart as you own mine. Yes, I can be very demanding you know. I am aware that you have been hurt in love. You may be scared to let yourself fall in love again, wary that you will get wounded again. But let me assure you that I will never play with your feelings. I will never hurt you. I may not have much to offer except my undying and passionate love for you.  I am short-tempered, obstinate and willful and may always remain so. I will not promise you that I will change myself for you. I know you would not want me to do that either. Neither do I want you to change anything for me. You don't need to build your physique, for I find you physically attractive as you are. All this may sound very cliched for I am not much of a romantic, but I mean every word I said just now."  

 

She leaned forward and kissed him gently on the lips, feeling their softness and warmth under hers. She hastily withdrew lest he wakes up and retreated to the door. Before she turned off the light she turned to look at his dear face once again and blew him a kiss.

 

After she left the room, he opened his eyes and smiled as his heart sang a happy song. He had heard every single word she said.


Continued here:

Edited by Opti - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
nice update but want more maaneet updates.
Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update 😛
finally Sameera emptied her heart and glad Dev listened to every word
Posted: 13 years ago
good i like sameera she told him every thing wow dev pretending he is sleeping smart boy ...i hope he also tell her soon and marry with her ..thank you for this part
Posted: 13 years ago
i see LOVE IS AIR for some one....i knew dev wud have heard every word and tat is wat has happened...want more Maaneet scenes in next update
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Opti, the love confession was splendid. How cute. Sameera and Dev are soo good. I am so happy for them too.

Geet's godh barai was very cute. Maan is being such a supportive husband. Well, no doubt there.

Humm, the thing I like most about your story is its absolute positivity. I love it how everyone detest hiding things and just work towards sorting things out. When Sameera told Geet about who her boss was, Geet understood so well and had no issues. And she also guessed that Sameera was hopelessly in love with him. That was like awwwwww. And Maan noticed them too. So very cute. These 4 are the best. My fav's too. And hopefully Anwesha and Yash will join the gang soon 😃

Loved both the parts Opti. What better way to start a Sunday morning. A hot cup of coffee and a great story to read. 😍
Posted: 13 years ago

Opti,

That was cho chweet. Sameera confessing and he silently hearing. That was so cute. I knew it and was expecting it and i was smiling way before i read it.

She really thought that he will not wake up with having her head on his chest and kissing him. She is too cute. 

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