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Destiny's Play-LXXXVIII,LXXXIX,XC-129,135,140-27/3 - Page 55

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 77
Is Pradeep too in the game? will Arjun come to know about these soon and is really Maan going for that tender?

part 78
whoa that lady Shukla is really my nerves................big and bad mouth...............and who the hell made her the secretary? poor Sam............the other ladies too supporting that Shukla? dont they know how work could be? dunno how Geet will react to this..................

cont soon.................

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Posted: 13 years ago
Opti quite entertaining. keep writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
aaahhhh!!!!
im all braced up for Arjun's downfall.....

bring it on OPTI......


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This content was originally posted by: ajenn

Part LXXIV
lovely strawberry updates.
10 cartons of strawberry.. yummy yummy.. i luv strawberry..😍
initially i felt sad as she throw up afta seeing d strawberries..
but pity geet.. its hormone change
geet is so lucky gal to get a caring n sweet hubby like maan..

 
Yes, it was the hormone effect and had nothing to do with Maan's painstaking effort ot give her what she desired to have.

Part LXXV
ooh maan. he nvr seems to surprise us
lingerie shopping..that was so cute of him...
i really find it so sweet of an hubby to go shopping wif wife at lingerie dept.
afta all its own hubby.. 'ey would knoe well of choice as well πŸ˜†
sam-dev part was interesting...
its developing vry well..
He could have taken her along but then he didn't have the heart ot wake her up, the reason why he went shopping on his own.

Part LXXVI
tat was a wonderful part.
geet seeking hubby's attention
sensuous foreplay in front mirror ☺️
I luved d sono pic..
When I wrote the original I hunted high and low for a son of a triplet and found this one.

Part LXXVII - Part LXXVIII
wow... great job by
yash-vikram
arjun in digging is own grave now.
waiting for d tender part...
Sam-dev in a hse...πŸ˜ƒ
Any luv in d air??
but wonder wat would maaneet's reaction b if 'ey got to knoe dis.. πŸ˜•
Well when two people are in the same house sparks are bound to fly.


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thanks Shalve
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 All  the parts were good . 

Maan is so caring ; I can't believe he actually went to lingerie shop to buy her stuff . πŸ˜†  

I must admit I am no longer liking but loving Dev - Sameera track . I am liking their convos  & incidents that are bringing them close .

Mission  " Trap Arjun " track is going super interesting . 

To be honest am loving all the tracks ..... special mention to the Maneet intimate part ... πŸ˜³

 
Yep, he did go on his own beause she was asleep and he knew she did need larger sizes given the growing size of her body. Glad my Sam-dev track has caught on. was apprehensive that people may not like it. 
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part 76
wow very lovely part.................Geet's hormones are making her go through so much................but Maan is equally understanding.................but is it allowed to be intimate during this time? the pic is so beautiful.....................

Yes, couples can be intimate during pregancy. Some doctors advise restraint in the first trimester to avoid miscarriages and also closer to the delivery date to avoid infection. Geet was already into the second trimester (fourth month). so it is pretty safe.  Considering that she is carrying triplets, she may not find it comfortable after a certain point because of the size of her stomach.  Edited by Opti - 13 years ago
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This content was originally posted by: 49erFan

What do I say Opti...loved it!  Love how u bring out the passion in these two!  toooooooooooooo hot!!!

Thanks Geeti. To be frank I was feeling the heat while writing this part.
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This content was originally posted by: ammu5

at last  u r planning arjuns downfall very good nxt update fast

Arjun's downfall will take time.
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This content was originally posted by: mrk_1

wow awsome one yaar ..loved it

thanks mrk