FF Mission gone...interesting. UPdated pg 8 - Page 3

MrsCrosby87

@MrsCrosby87

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Posted: 13 years ago

so so so gudd i luv the concept and Mina thank yu, u once again saved us from the cv's unsmooth transition of the hotel room I cannot wait for the next part please continue soon!

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Mina_T

@Mina_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piamist
Mina its a delight reading you FF's....i started late but completed reading both of your previous FF's Dadi's Revenge and Honeymoon retake...are there any other FF's that you wrote...i would love to read them too...i am kind of no nothing abt IF...struggling hard to search FF's ..if there are any other FF's which i missed out, please let me know...i dnt want to miss any...thanks for saving on these weekends....do PM me if you have a PM list. I dnt want to miss any of your updates...

I only have three fics and you are all caught up😊 thank you for your comments, very much appreciated and I am glad you like the fics😉

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465381

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Posted: 13 years ago

You did great job! omg pls continue i want to know what will happen next. Action 😉 Thank you for the PM AND AGAIN GREAT JOB!

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KEEP WRITTING!!\

Chandni?

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Mina_T

@Mina_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: myviewprem
mina you started one more FF

great

you could have just merged it with dadi ff na

anyways its very good.

Are you planning to continue your other FF?

I know i could have merged them, but they are all written such that you could awesome they were all in the same story line, with gaps. As for the other fics nope I don't think I will be continuing them, how were ur exams?

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-anzaeram-

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice ff.......... plz pm me wen u update...........

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Mina_T

@Mina_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_8
wow mina...another ff....😃😃
its amazing...👏👏 so arjuhi in shower again..😳😳 i m thinking what will d reaction of rajveer after seeing arjuhi in shower...😆😆
update soon dear n plz pm me whn u update it...😊

I like messing around with Rajveers head, beacuse he hates arjun sooo much that i naturally love poking fun at him in all my fics😉

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Mina_T

@Mina_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aksh4IF
Minaaaaa!!!🤗...sweets..first things first..cud u plzz PM me if u post upates or new FFs.. i dun wanna miss it n i dun always check the forum.. plz??
ur writings...i just wanna say..if u can put in so much romance n intimacy n passion n heat .. in short..so much besharmi in words..i cant imagine wats in that head of urs!!😉😈😆
and this FF...mind blowing.. i hadn't really thought deeply about the hotel scene in the show.. but ur retake on it gives amazing scope for my imagination.. 🤣.
luved the detailing.. arjun's attire, arohi's thoughts on her husbands dressing sense....the homing device, teh apps...luved it all!! very apt!!👍🏼
but why does she always have rajvir to come n save..but rajvir showing up at room 1104..with arohi n arjun in the shower...me likes...me likes.. !!😈
wasnt it enuff that arohi forced arjun under the sheets..now they r in the shower again!! n arjun pointing out..that hez stripped n shez clothed!!..wont say more there..but i think the opposite version wud have been more realistic 😈
cant wait for more!!

hahaha, this is just the tip of the ice berg for what goes on in my head, i could write so much more besharmi scenes and dialogue...😈.but i have to remember the rules of this place.😉 Kids are present here.
To be honest I had such high hopes for the hotel scene but alas I will have to fulfill my own wishes through my fic lolz.
Yeah Arohi shedding her clothing would have been more realistic, but this is an indian drama, so the girls clothes stays on😲

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome ff yaar!!!!

arohi is too good!!!! this scene is way better than in the serial!!! and the shower scene...***faints*** fantabulous!!!

cant wait for arohi to strip now *wink wink***

btw do pm me when you update...

impatiently waiting yaar!!!!

thx