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ff-milan abhi adhura hai (Page 10)

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged

Next part-9

Divya takes nivi to her room and where vandana {sid mom} is there and  hugs her tightly.. nivi also hugs her tightly and cries a lot… viren comes karan and karan sees him…

vandana: kaisi hai tu, in 5 saalo mey tujhe humari yaad kabhi anhi aayi kya?

Divya: yahi sawaal toh mey isey puchti hu ki kya tujhe humari is pariwaar ki kabhi yaad nahi aayi

Nivi: di, maa aisa mat boliye, in 5 saalo mey mainey aap logo bahut yaad kiya hai…

Vandana: ghar wapas aa jao nivi, yeh ghar tumarey bina adhura hai…hum sab adhurey hai, yeh pariwaar adhura hai..

Nivi sees vandana and divya: yeh nahi ho sakta maa, mainey in 5 saalo sey har raat har din is soch mey gujaar diya ki sab theek ho jaayega kyunki mujhe barosa tha aap sab mujhe bhul kar ek nayi zindagi shuru karengey lakin aisa nahi hai….

Divya: tu kya chahti hai nivi, tuney kabhi apni aur viren ke baarey mey socha hai…apni aur unki haalat dekh…woh  terey bina ji nahi saktey nivi… jitni jaldi ho sakey is baat ko samaj jao, kahi der nah o jaaye…

Nivi cries and sees divya and vandana… and goes out from the room…

Scene shift

Karan sees shilpa…shilpa sees karan.. gautam sees shilpa.. woh apna hath hilaata hai… dono comes out from their senses..  karan sees gautam

Gautam: hmm in sey miley yeh hai humari dost shilpa.. yeh ek bahut pyari , intelligent and smart lawyer hai.. aur humari property waala case yahi dekhngi…

Karan sees shilpa and shilpa is in teary eyes sees karan… karan eyes were also moist and that time.. ..

Karan sees gautam: gautam mainey suna hai ki lawyers sirf dil dukhana jaantey hai…kya yeh sach hai…kya naam bataya tumne…ha…miss shilpa…

Shilpa sees karan and karan and goes from there to bar and he start drinking.. nivedita comes there and find karan drinking and goes to him. Nivi puts her hand on his shoulder…

Nivedita: kya tum theek ho karan?

Karan: mujhe gar jaana hai sunshine lets go home…

They both go home without telling anyone… they reaches home… karan nashey mey tha aur usey hosh nahi tha….

Karan: woh kyu wapas aa gayi sunshine, 5 saalo sey jin zakhmo ko mey chupa raha tha aaj achank sey kyu kurad diya usney… agar wapas hi aana that oh woh gayi kyu thi? Nafrat karta hu usey itni nafrat ki woh sapney mey bi nahi soch sakti…

she puts karan on bed and opens her coat and his shoes and put blanket on her. she makes coffee and sits on couch...

Nivi is in tears and thinks to herself:  karan aur woh bachpan ke dost hai jiska zikar aaj tak nivi ne kisi ke pass nahi kiya tha.. jab usney apney sapno ko pura karney ke baarey mey socha toh woh bina kuch kahey uske sath chalney ke liye tayaar hogya.apney sapno ko pura karney ke liye dono ney ghar chodh diya.. college ke time pe mili thi humhey shilpa. karan hamesha sey usey bahut pyar karta tha lakin kabhi bolney ki himmat nahi hui thi aur nivi usey hamesha kehti ki apney dil ki baat keh dey lakin lakh koshish karney ke baad bi every plans are flop...

Jab shilpa karan ko chodh kar gayi toh mainey ek baar bi usey nahi puch aki shilpa ne aisa kyu kaha kyunki karan ki aankho mey woh dard woh wajah saaf dikhayi dey rahi thi..aur woh wajah jaan kar mey usey aur dukhi nahi karan chati thi..uskey dard ko dekh kar mujhe apna dard bhulna pada. kyunki mey janti thi ki agar mey khush rahungi toh woh khush rahega.. islye mainey apney saari takleefo ke sath samjhota kar liya aur ek mey nivi aur putual sey ban gan gayi karan ki sunshine jo hamesha hasti hai...karan meri sachai jaanta tha viren ke baarey mey kya hua tha merey sath..lakin phir bi woh mera sath de raha tha aur isi terha hum ek dusrey ke saharey ban gaye.. 

Flashback: {canteen scene}

karan and nivi are in canteen and karan is thinking something and nivi knows that he is thinking about shilpa only...

nivi: dekh karan tu kehta hai ki nahi shilpa sey ki u love her yaar...

karan {karan wahi}: yaar tujhe toh pata hai na ki lakh koshish karney ke baad bi meri himat hi nahi padti ki mey usey kuch bolu... usey dekhtey hi mey sab bhul jaata hu...

nivi: ha ha ha yeh dekho 21st century key aashiq... arey sachey aashiq ho toh {nivi stands up from chair waves her arms} keh do shilpa sey she turns back} that I {she shilpa standing in front of her}

shilpa: ki I what...niviedita

nivi {confused sees karan and karan sees here and there}... nivi smilesSmileSmile ahhh ki i want to study in the library... arey shilpa yeh karan bi na exams aa rahey hai aur yeh hai ki padta hi nahi ab tum hi samjhao..mey toh keh rahi thi ki ghar pe bol de apney parents sey ki i wil study in library... kyu karan {nivi winks her eyesWinkWinkWink}

shilpa sees karan and smiles: yeh toh achi baat hai ki karan padna chahta hai.. good karan...{she sees her watch} omg! i am late for the class.. mey baad mey milti hu..got to go bye nivi, bye karan....

karan: shilpa ek min ruko...mujhe tumsey kuch kehna hai...

shilpa: abhi nahi karan baad mey mujhe late ho raha hai {she sees back and then to karan}...

karan: dekho bahut zaruri baat hai...

shilpa: acha ek kaam karo mujhe class ke baad milo.. basketball hall mey ok... got to {she runs and wave her hand]

karan also wave his hand and smiles and puts hand on his heart.. karan comes back to nivi....

nivi: oey hoey dost phir keh aaye apney dil ki baat.. ab toh party honi chahiye.. kyu dosto {she tells to a couple of frnds sitting with them}

one frnd: ha yar baat toh nivi ki sahi hai... party toh honi chahiye aakhir bhabi ko pata hi liya tumney...

karan: abey kahey ki party abhi toh khichdi pakki nahi aur tum khaaney ki baat pehaley hi kar rahey ho...

nivi turns around him: kya.....itni der sey humara bewkoof bana rahey they tum..

karan: kuch kehne ka mauka dogi tab toh kuch kahunga na.... itni der sey toh tum hi boli ja rahi ho... aur mey sun raha hu....

nivi makes faces: kya yaar maja kirkara kar diya...

karan: acha meri baat sun woh mujse shaam ko milegi toh tab keh dunga.. abhi khush...

nivi sees karan: yes yeh hui na baat...is baat pe ek chai {tea} ka pyala ho jaaye..

karan orders a cup of tea...nivi drinks tea..and karan thinks about shilpa and thinks that how she will reacts when she will come to know the truth...


 

 

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
nice updateThumbs Up..........can't wait for another update........
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by edwardcullen19

nice updateThumbs Up..........can't wait for another update........

thanks neetika for your comment dear....
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
once again a good chapter...it's nice to know abt karan's past....and hope nivren unite soon....thanks kaajal.....!!!
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
amazing ff cont soon

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
loved d 2 chapters...looking fwd 4 more flashbacks...

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loved the chapters looking forward for more 

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sana4kinha

once again a good chapter...it's nice to know abt karan's past....and hope nivren unite soon....thanks kaajal.....!!!
 
                                                    thank you so much sana ....
                                      For this lovely comment and ya for reading my ff

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