ff-milan abhi adhura hai - Page 7

Posted: 13 years ago
hey kajal just want to thank you for the lovely update...........nice imagination.............and NivRen lift scene was just awesome........
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Kajal 🤗, loved chapter 6 and 7. Cupid trio is amazing, wow you are going to add another new character, sounds interesting. Can't wait for your next update. 
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by edwardcullen19


hey kajal just want to thank you for the lovely update...........nice imagination.............and NivRen lift scene was just awesome........


thanks edward..........how sweet of u......
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by gmann2010


Hi Kajal 🤗, loved chapter 6 and 7. Cupid trio is amazing, wow you are going to add another new character, sounds interesting. Can't wait for your next update. 

thanks yar.........thoda sa wait karo, bec sabar ka fal mitha hta hai......... but nw u hve to decide k faal khaana hai ya chocolate........
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by stary_kajal




thanks edward..........how sweet of u......

Sorry to interrupt you but my name is Neetika.........my user-id name is edward cullen because it is my all time favorite character played by Robert Pattinson in Twilight
Posted: 13 years ago
neetika, i too love robert pattinson!!!!
Posted: 13 years ago
great ff cont soon n plzz pm me on  d next part
Posted: 13 years ago

Here I come back my friends'.

Part-8

Nivi and karan returns to home and nivi is tired and karan is happy that his plan succeed.. nivi went for sleeping.. Viren, sid, gautam and divya with children comes to home' chanchal comes and sees them'abhik and raunaq is sleeping with gautam and sid' divya and gautam took them room' gautam come' chanchal see them'

Chanchal: tum logo ko kuch pata bi hai kal kya hai'

Gautam: hey choti maa, chill?

Chanchal: chill ke bachey kal raunaq ka birthday hai' apni behan ka birthday bhul gaya tu'sharam kar kuch..

Gautam: arey choti maa woh kaisey bhul saktey hai, meri jaan ka birthday hai kal'

Chanchal: jaan waan chodh uskey birthday ki tayaari karni hai'

Sid: chachi don't worry'..raunaq ka birthday hum dhum dham se celebrate karengey'

Divya: ha mey guests to phone karke invite karti hu''..

Gautam: caters ko phone karta hu'.

Chanchal: mey decoration waley ko phone karti hu'

Gautam jaaney lagta hai aur sid usey haath pakad kar rokta hai'.gautam sees sid and sid smiles'sid tells gautam to call karan'.gautam calls karan'.

Karan: hello dude bolo''.kaisey ho?

Gautam: I am fine yaar'acha kal meri jaan ka birthday hai tumhey aur sunshine matlab nivi ko birthday pe lekar aana hai''.

Karan: jaan kaun jaan?

Gautam: abbey itney din sey dost hai aur tujhe yeh bi nahi pata ki meri jaan kaun hai'arey baba ranauq aur kaun'.

Karan: okay that sweet angel'..ok hum aa jaayengey'

Gautam hangs on the phone and smiles to sid and says "yup kaam hogaya"' Sid smiles' here karan comes to nivi and sits there'.nivedita sees karan and smiles..She knows that he wants to say something'

Nivedita: kya baat hai karan kuch kehna chahtey ho kya?

Karan: sunshine who kale k party hai'.kya tum merey sath chalogi'

Nivedita: ha lakin kiski party hai?

Karan: woh viren key aha party hai sid ney invite kiya hai..

Nivedita: mey waha nahi jaungi karan, aur wajah tum jantey ho achey sey'

Karan: dekho sunshine kab tak in sab cheezo sey bhaagti rahogi, ek din toh face karni padegi na'aur ismey us choti si bacchii ki kya galti hai'.gauatm ki kya galti hai'acha unke baarey na socho par atleast apni behan divya, abhik aur sid ke liye chalo yaar'.please..

Nivedita sees karan and nodes her head''karan smiles'.

PARTY TIME:

All are ready for the party, chanchal and jawahar are welcoming them'Divya is looking very beautiful in green saree'sid in black suit' abhik in small black suit, raunaq {ashnoor kaur}in pink frauk' Guests are arriving, but sid and gautam are waiting for nivi and karan' Viren comes {wow gosh he is dark brown suit muaah viren}' viren sees both of them' he comes to them..

viren: bhaiya saarey guests toh aa chukey hai aap log kiska wait kar rahey hai..

gautam: just relax big bro...hum apney kuch khaas dosto ka wait kar rahey hai..

viren: khaas dost?????????????

sid: uske kehney ka matlab hai woh london sey lawyer aaney waali thi na shilpa uska hi wait kar rahey hai...waisey bi jaldi kya hai viren...

viren: ok bhaiya mey raunaq ke pass jaata hu...

here nivi and karan comes... chanchal and jawahar are surprised to see both of them.. sid and gautam sees them and comes to them... they come to them...

sid: chachi woh inhey humney invite kiya hai...

chanchal smiles and welcome them...nivi gies a fake smile....nivi comes to raunaq and kisses her and wish her happy birthday...karan also do the same and wishes her happy birthday and give her a gift...chanchal says all people to gather.. raunaq comes with divya..divya sees nivi and smiles....😊....

sid and divya comes to raunaq and they cut cake with her... all of them claps and shower of gliters comes on people and sood family.... party starts now.......

gautam insits viren to sing a song and he sees nivi and smiles... here gautam plays a guitar and come to viren.. viren sing a song...


lagi lagi hai yeh dil ki lagi,                                                         

na samjho isey dilagi, {viren comes to sid and put hands on his shoulder}       

lagi lagi hai yeh dil ki lagi,                                                         

na samjho isey dil lagi,

{here karan also sings the song and takes guitar from gautam}                   

mainey jo chaha tha mil gayi woh khushi.....

lagi hai dil ki lagi                                                                   

na samjho isey dil lagi...{divya sings comes to nivi and hugs from behind}

lagi lagi hai yeh dil ki lagi                                                         

na samjho isey dil lagi {sid picks raunaq  and abhik in his both arms up and sings this song and kiss them on their cheecks}...

gautam tells everyone to have a couple dance on a floor...everyone comes... but karan, nivi, sid, divya, gautam and viren stands there only... camera focus on them as music goes on...

mey toh bada nadaan tha, samjha nahi pyar kya hai,                           

karta raha awaargi, na jaana kaisi wafaa hai 

{viren dance with divya and rolls around nivi...}                                                                  

zanjeer sey koi kabhi dil ko nahi baand paaye                                   

takdeer sey chahat miley, daluat nahi kaam aaye,

{nivi sees viren and comes too karan and dance with him}                                                        


kam na ho umar bhar pyar ki bekhudi..

{here karan sings this dance with nivi}     


lagi lagi hai yeh dil ki lagi,                                                         

na samjho isey dil lagi {nivi sings this and sees karan and dance}                   

lagi lagi hai yeh dil ki lagi                                                           

na samjho isey dil lagi {viren gives divya to sid they dance and viren sings}       


jab pyar ho dil mey basa, janat lagey saara jahaa,                             

sabsey bada dhanwaan woh, jisko miley ulfat yaha                              

{sid goes to viren and hugs him and put his hands on his checks and sings}

jo pyar mey dey zindagi, chahat pey kurbaan ho..                        

mushkil sey woh humdam miley jisey dil ki pehchaan ho                        

{divya comes to viren and put her hand on his arm and sings sees nivi}          


ishq toh hai khuda, ishq hi bandagi 

{karan comes to nivi and take her to viren}

lagi hai yeh dil ki lagi 

na samjho isey dilagi..

{all of them sings together and camera focus on all of them one by one, everyone claps and gets together...}

here someone arrives with a big gift.. a gift is hiding a girl.. She is wearing a sky blue chudidaar kurta and pyjami and open hair... her jhumla can be seen.. she comes and says "happy birthday raunaq".... she kisses raunaq and moves up.. karan is shocked to see that girl and girl also...she is shilpa anand { Dr ridima or you can see her on google}...

everyone gathers to eat food... karan and nivi also have there food... divya tells nivi to come with her... she sees karan and karan nodes his head and smiles...

                                       


                                      





 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
nice update kaajal....thank u so much....it is not less than watching a show..u expalined each bit perfectly....!!!!!!!!thanks once again.........!!! 🤗Edited by sana4kinha - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by sana4kinha


nice update kaajal....thank u so much....it is not less than watching a show..u expalined each bit perfectly....!!!!!!!!thanks once again.........!!! 🤗

thanks sana for your lovely comment dear. i hope you will like my all updates which i will upload soon dear...

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