ff-milan abhi adhura hai - Page 5

Originally posted by: manjusha_92

Plz.....continue soon..

Kajal, loved the last chapter, first meeting of Nivren after 5 years was really emotional. Can't wait to know what happens next. Btw you can call me Ketty.

Originally posted by: gmann2010

Kajal, loved the last chapter, first meeting of Nivren after 5 years was really emotional. Can't wait to know what happens next. Btw you can call me Ketty.

Hi kajal.. I cudnt keep myself away fm ur ff, even though i didnt like d 3rd angle.. Ur ff has become very interesting.. Looking fwd for next part.. :)

Originally posted by: ashred12

Hi kajal.. I cudnt keep myself away fm ur ff, even though i didnt like d 3rd angle.. Ur ff has become very interesting.. Looking fwd for next part.. :)

Wen i read initial part, i thot karan is her new hero.. Its just my pov dat i didnt want any1 between nivren.. :)
but after reading latest part, i understood its not wat i thot it to be :)Edited by ashred12 - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashred12

Wen i read initial part, i thot karan is her new hero.. Its just my pov dat i didnt want any1 between nivren.. :)
but after reading latest part, i understood its not wat i thot it to be :)

                    As promised here you go with the new part😊😊😊

              I am sorry for being soooooo late again

         I will try to work on the next part sooner

 

 

PART-6

 

When nivi woke up the next morning she was confused to hear some noises from downstairs. So she gets up to check what was going on and was almost shocked to see Karan ready in the kitchen and making breakfast for both of them. Seeing her Karan takes a cup of coffee and offers to her.....

 

Karan: good morning

Nivi: what is going on here??...am I dreaming?? (karan smiles)

Karan: should I pinch you? (nivi takes the cup from his hand and sits around the table)

nivi sees karan and have a sip of coffee: karan i wanna say you something....

karan looks at nivi:Agar tum kal raat ke baarey mey kuch kehna chahti ho toh please yaar mey baat bhul chuka hu...aur please aaj naya din hai dont spoil your mood....

nivi smiles: okay....

karan:chalo jaldi karo you dont wanna go to office...

nivi looks at watch: oh gosh i am running late...aaj boss ke sath meeting hai...

nivi runs to bathroom have shower and gets ready...and meanwhile karan is also ready and waiting for nivi to come....she comes and both goes for office in a car...

 

Scene shifts:

karan drops nivi at office and leaves to his work where gautam {kunaal kapoor} and viren is waiting for them...

boss: where were you nivi, we were waiting for you…

nivi: sorry boss, actually woh…

boss: come on lets go now and start work…

Scene shift:

Karan, gautam are discussing their project and viren is thinking something and he is standing in front of window of his cabin…karan sees this and comes to him…

Karan: viren ji kya soch rahey hai aap?

Viren: nothing as usual life ke baarey mey…

Karan: mujhe pata hai ki aap sunshine ke baarey mey soch rahey ho…

Viren: who toh tumari sunshine hai ,meri toh nivi hai…

Karan: aap ne aisa kyu kiya viren ji, uski zindagi ke saarey rang kyu chin liye aapney..

Gautam: hey hey dude what are you saying this and please merey bhaiya kisi ke rang nahi chin saktey…he can never do wrong…

Karan sees viren and smiles and viren lower his eyes down….karan goes from there..gautam founds to be fishy something and sees viren and then karan..

Scene shifts:

Boss tell nivi to take interview of a business personality and it will be live on 

our radio… nivi ask boss that who is our guest. Boss takes viren sood name and 

nivi is shocked to listen this and he is in upset mode and goes out from press 

conference…gautam is in thinking mode and suddenly he had a clash with 

sid..gautam comes to his senses and sees up...Sid smiles... 

gautam:areu badey bhaiya aap, ohh yeh mey kaha hu..

sid: hogaya phir sey shuru teri nataunki, acha yeh bata kya soch raha tha tu...

gautam seer khujaltey huey: bhaiya yeh nivi, sunshine or putal yeh sab ek hi 

ladkhi ke naam hai yaha teen teen alag alag ladhkiya hai...

nivi ka naam suntey hi sid ki aankhoey ke saamney nivi ka hasta chehra saamney 

aa jaata hai and for a min he start thinking about her..Gautam sees this

gautam: yar is nivi ka naam suntey hi sab sochney lagtey hai ya phir gum ho 

jaatey hai..akhir yeh nivi, sunshine ka kya relation hai hum sabsey..."mission

nivi" pata lagana hoga....

gautam: bhaiya... sid bhaiya kya hua kaha kho gaye..

sid:ahh...hm kahi nahi, waisey tum kyu puch rahey ho...

gautam: woh aisey hi you know yeh ladkhi sabko shock treatment de rahi hai..

sid: shock treatment.. ??????????

gautam:arey bhaiya shaukiye mat, sabko shock dekar chali jaati hai na islye...

sid smiles and then worried... gautam goes from there.. sid goes to meet viren...sid comes to viren...

sid:viren yeh mey kya sun raha hu tum nivedita sey miley they...

viren:ji bhaiya woh mujhe nahi pata tha ki woh aur karan dost hai..

sid:lakin batana toh chahiye tha na...

viren:bhaiya mey kya bolta aapko, mujhe us waqt mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaya...

sid: kya samjhana chahtey ho tum, 5 saal aur laga do gey kya samjhney mey.. 

aur nivedita sey apney dil ki baat keh do jo is 5 saalo mey tum usey bolna

chatey ho...

viren: bhaiya lakin yeh kaisey ho sakta hai...aur mey toh ab yeh bi nahi jaanta 

ki woh mujse pyar bi karti hai ki nahi..

sid: pyar karti hai islye toh bhagwan ne tumhey aur usey ek aur mauka diya hai..

warna tum log kabhi nahi mil paata...

viren sees sid and suddenly his phone rings... viren picks up the call...viren

agrees to come... and leaves from there and he opens the door... he didnt

notice that karan is standing there and he comes in...Sid sees karan... sid 

leaves...but karan stops him...

karan: please wait sid i wanna talk to you...

sid:how do you know about me...

karan: nivi told me about you and everyone.. and i am here to take your help...

sid: what help?

karan: to unite nivi and viren forever...5 saal sey mainey nivi ko kabhi bi dil sey

hastey hue nahi dekha, woh aaj bi sirf viren ke liye hi apni zindagi jee rahi hai.

aur mey apni sunshine ko aisey jeetey nahi dekh sakta, mey chahta hu ki woh

khush rahey....pyar khoney ka kya dard hota hai mujse achey sey kaub ja sakta 

hai aur shayad aap bi........?

sid: mey samaj raha hu lakin hum kya kar saktey hai...

karan:merey pass ek plan hai agar aap mera sath they toh shayad mey apni

sunshine aur aap apney bhai ko milwaney mey kamyaab ho jaaye...

sid smiles and worried on face and nodes his head... karan and sid shakehand..

gautam is listening from behind...sid sees him and shocked😲...

 

 

 

 

 

 

hello my name is neetika. Your story is really good and interesting........nice update👏

Nice chapter.. So we r gonna 've cupid pair or trio? 😊