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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



yeah sanya 😆.............well i will post my update after i read deewangi update 😳

deewangi is updated
so me 2 going
will wait ur update priya 
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

it was sooooo much fun i repeated it nearly 5-6 times n she just stomped her foot 
n nw she is crying seeing tht u also luv me n telling tht u r a traitor
n no one luves her

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Posted: 13 years ago
@all I"m back after comment
such rocking update
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Posted: 13 years ago
i knw it was d besttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
it made my nite
n waiting for priya  update n 
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Posted: 13 years ago
a warning to priya n sanya b careful of hinal 2mrw
she is goinggggggggggggg 2 kill u both
nn nw im on stake 
n she is fuming in anger telling tht she is going 2 trouble all her traitors
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Posted: 13 years ago
ello ello hello everyone
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 14: 😛    

Geet reach at car……..n………sit inside

G: chale

P: not so fast……..geet……..giving her smile

G: par kyu……….we got everything……checking to see if they miss anything

P: I knew it…….said all upset

G: what did u know……..all confuse

P: u forgot ur promise……..

G: which promise Pari……..trying to remember

P: aaaaaahhhhhhh……the promise to tell me about what u were doing in store smiling at MR. totally DREAMmmmmmmyyyyyy

Geet goes into flashback remembering her encounter with maan n smile ……..

G: self talk……geet what is wrong with u……..how can u think like tht……par……what par……..HE is OTHER Man…….. ur married remember……….tht too for past 3 yrs (girls I change yrs from 2 to 3 just to avoid confusion n make story realistic)………yeh paap hai geet……..aur waise bhi who toh sadu, akdur, batameez insan tha……..he yell at u…….tum par woh chilaya……tum sab kuch bhulgaye…….how could u GEET……..nahi………meine kuch nahi bhuli………woh woh …….bilkul DUS DANAV tha………yeah…….yeh naam thik hai,………DD…..DUSDANAV………

Pari was waiting for geet to say something………n………show her completely lost…….geet expression was changing from smile to annoyed to guilt to anger n back to annoyed

P: geet……..kaha khogaye

G: hah

P: geet seriously r u OK?..........tum ajeeb behave kyu kar rahi ho?

G: nahi……ha…..mera matlab hai……..im fine

Pari gave her "IFYOUSAYSO" LOOK

P: SO

G: ………..SO....... what?

Pari roll her eyes n remind her about promise again………..geet than tell pari about what happen at caf n why she was at store

P: OMG

 

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Posted: 13 years ago
hiiiiii simi n sanzzzzzz
hw was ur day
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sorry me have to go will come on later though
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 15: 😛

P: OMG

P: its so dreamy'''....n''.......he was also so dreammmmyyyyyyy'''..giving her signature dreamy look😍

G: (she so wants to agree with pari but then remember how rude tht MR.DushtDanav was): r u crazy pari? 😡

P: what 😲

G: woh koi Mr. Dreamy nahi  tha''..woh toh''.woh toh''.........ek number ka akdu, saadu, dus sarwala ravan'......aur''...ha''...bohut bada DUSHTDANAV tha''......... Y not what woh'.GEET Handa par scream kiya''.........'how dare he?

P: toh kya huva''.........woh...... MR. Dreamy hai''........usse sab kuch allow hai'........''again giving her signature dreamy look😍

G: rolls her eyes''.....n'.........'.said to herself who is she arguing with...its Pari!!!!! 🤪

Pari is Arman's baby sister''.......'she was also geet and Vicky classmate''.......actually geet, Vicky, n Pari had same scholarship (included hostel'.......'if choose to live outside they will give hostel fee to student) from Oxford University to do MBA w/architect (its 2 n half yr program) (after u have completed bachelor in business/architect)


Edited by komlika - 13 years ago