New *FF* upd:"LoVE-BaCK TO BAcK":Pt 6 pg8 (Page 4)

shumi. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
 hum log kaagas ke foolun mein khushbu dhund lete hain...OMG                        

Hum aansuon ke saagar mein asha ki kashti chalate hain

 Hum apno mein farishton ko paate hain

 Hum jaise log zindagi ji jate hain

for these 4 lines u deserve Clap Clap Clap Clap. while reading ur ff i felt as if i am watching a shooting! ...first clash of KP wit SA is awesomeBig smile...weldone Star

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Iloveroka IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
                                SOrry Guys for giving such quick updates...
                                          Ok so here's the 3rd part...

                  Next morning at 6:30am

Tannu(yorns and gets up by a sudden noise)--"Di aap itni subah subah ready hoke kahan jaa rahi ho?"
Shubhangi:"Vo aaj press conference haina...Isliye aj jaldi nikal jaungi..."
Tannu:"Par di its jst 6:30...apko toh 9:30 pahunchna haina..."
Shubhangi(to herself)::"ab main ise kaise samjhaun ki main itni jaldi kyon jaa rahi hoon...raat bhar toh soo nahi payi..."
Tannu::"kuch kaha aapne..?"
shubhangi::"nahi...nhi kuch bhi toh nhi...Ok chal bye..main nikalti hoon..."
Tannu::"ok bye di..."

                                On the set At 7 am

"pata nahi vo kab ayega...aega bhi ya nahi...uska naam kya hoga...
  vo set pe kya kar raha tha...ahhh main bhi toh pagal jaise itni jaldi aa gai...pata nhi mughe use dekhne ki itni urge kyon hai..."

                                          At 8AM

                                         Shubhangi sitting in the set...
"Ahhh abhi tak nhi aaya...vo..saare camera men..light man..yahan tak ki makeup man bhi aa gaye...Par vo nahi aaya...Oh GOD please send Him..."

                                                    After sum time...
.She saw sum1 entering from the door.
.He is wearing a blue jeans and a black full sleeved shirt..
..He entered talking on his cell with sum1...As soon as Shubhangi saw that it was He...She got up nd was still...
2boys were carrying a block of bigg glass.
.On one side was Karan busy in the phone..
and On the other side of it ,was Shubhangi...busy looking at him...
.As he walked..She also walked parallel to him..staring at him and smiling..
.She had forgotten everything..Where was she
                                                    Who all were around her
                                                   What was she doing..EVERYTHINg

Jst then..unknowingly she struck with the chaiwala and all the glasses fell down...and broke..and all the Hot tea..fell on her feet...
"aahh aahh aahhh ouch ouch"she cried...
Just then karan saw her nd came running towards her..."Kya hua kya hua"
Chaiwala::::::"arre memsahab...dekhke chalna thana...meri chai gira di ..ab phir se banani hogi"
Karan:::::"shut up...yahan inke pairon mein garam chai gir gai aur tumhe apni padi hai"
Shubhangi's all pain was gone as he touched her feet softly..
"Yahan lagi hai?"he touched and asked
"Nahi...dil pe...!!!!!"She replied
"aa aa a a b k kuch nahi vo haan yahan hi lagi hai"
He took out his hankerchief and Softly gently rubbed her feet with that...
While he was doing that...Shubhangi again got a time to gaze at him closely...
Again there was----Ye zindagi jo hai naachti toh..kyon bediyon main
                                  hain tere paon...preet ki dhun par...
"Ab thik lag raha hai...??"
"haan..bahaut acha lag raha hai...Thanks..."
"You're welcome..."

Suddenly sum1 from back called him"Sirr.."
Karan::"Haan aa raha hoon...Ok take care...bye"

After sum time Tannu came to the set::and saw shubhangi uttering sumthing to herself"Ok take care bye"
                                "Ok take care bye"

Tann:::::"di ye aap kya badbada rahi ho akele mein..?thodi der mein press conference shuru hone wali hain naa..."
Shubhangi::"a nhi..kuch nhi...haan jst abhi hone wali hai...
                      Tannu..pata nhi mughe kya ho gaya hai..."

Tannu:"Di aap itni jaldi bina kuch khaye ayi haina...shayad isliye...lijiye juice pijiye..."
She took the glass from her...and took a first sip.."
Just then she heard from back::"Shubhangi inse milo yehi Hain Karan..
Urf..Robbie Sabarwal...Jo tumhare opposite main lead role main hain"

She was very eager to knw who he was...as soon as she turned...She saw Karan...She was soo much shocked to knw that it was he...
That She spatted all the juice in her mouth on his shirt......
"yakk!!!!!"Said Karan
"phhh ..I m soo sorry...Sorry sorry sorry...sorry...I spoiled ur shirt I m very sorry"She rubbed his shirt...to make it clean...She hesitated...
"Okok its Ok Its Ok"
"nahi its not OK..maine apki shirt kharab kar di..mughe ise thik karne dijiye..."While she rubbed  his shirt with her dupatta
"Oh no apke shirt ke andar bhi gile ho gaya hai..please apna shirt kholiye.."
Karan"what!!!!!are u mad.."
Shubhangi"haan please apne buttons kholiye..."
She argued with him to open his shirt
"nahi aap shirt kholiye varna main ise phaad dungi"
Karan"Are u crazzy...No"
So she held his collar tightly and tore his shirt...
Everyone on the set were dumbstruck...
Karan felt embarassed and he was looking around.Everyone were laughing at him...While Shubhangi was cleaning his body with her dupatta...Forgetting that evryone were seeing them...
"Bas Bas ho gaya...Clean ho gaya?"asked Karan...
"haan ho ho gaya.."Said shubhangi with a sigh of relief
Then Karan ran as fast as he cud with his hands over his shoulders..(to save his izzat).to his makeup bus...
Then Shubhangi realized that everyone was looking at her and smiling .She also FINALLY felt embarrased and ran to her dressing room...

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-Swetha- IF-Addictz

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
awww.. such a nice update by u pujaClap
i loved the roka{karan-shubhangi} part a lotBlushingHeart

thanks for the PMHug

waitin for the nxt part...

Angelmrjn Groupbie

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Awsm part puja...when shub spilld juice on KP's shirt,i thot he wil give shub a tight slap.but he is so sweet and carng yaar.Arre shubu...kabi tho dil ko kabu mai raka karo (i knw its imposble,coz u fel in luv wid KP.tho hosh ud jayega hi na?..fir b...).nahi tho patha nahi mera bechara karan ko kya kya bugthna padega...he..he.gud goin puja...carry on...
Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Oye Puja Really Nice Part, shubhangi Tore his shirt...LOL
and he was in blue jeans and black shirt...Day Dreaming
and shubhangi's act was so so halariousLOL
and Karan from there to safe this Izzat...LOL
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
its a beautiful ff.So romantic.good 2 c d characters Shubangi & Karan Patel ,not Robbie kasturi.its d diff.plz pm me wen u update
ArhiSarunholic Senior Member

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
wow puja great part i love it exp karan
Gunjan. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 3:37am | IP Logged

again an awesome part puja..

omg...i'm loving it sooo much...
d way shubhz keeps waiting for him...d way she gazes at him n ofcourse d way she tore his shirt is sooo cute...i could imagine all dis really...amazing part...
shubhz tore his shirt in front of everyone only to clean his bare chest..oh wow...Day Dreaming
n d best part was:
Then Karan ran as fast as he cud with his hands over his shoulders..(to save his izzat).to his makeup bus...LOLLOL

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