New *FF* upd:"LoVE-BaCK TO BAcK":Pt 6 pg8 - Page 2

Posted: 12 years ago
exactly marjaan..
pehli mulakat is something to wait for..n mera prediction is ki usse thapad zaroor padega...right puja???
Posted: 12 years ago
oye now u r FF writer..wow
Nice start,,
continue soon

Posted: 12 years ago

wow...what a start jaanu! great👏...completely new and freah idea😃...jist love it...after reading ur ff all my sweet old memories which were taking its last breath became alive and freah... i want to say u r a ⭐️

Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow puja what a lovely ff i love the character and part 1 is great
you used there real names is too good shubangi character as a bubly person is very nice karan's role was good
cont soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by RoKafan4eva


ayee hayee😉..
mast hai yaar..
d concept is so fresh n so nice⭐️..it's awesome dear..really...main toh shubhangi pe marr gayi yaar..kya character hai...
"main marr javan gudh kha ke"😆😆  Yeah actually Hum ye line bahahut baar bolte hainaa...
very nice yaar..awesome,fantastic,fabulous...
plz next update jaldi okk..
 d 1st part was so interesting yaar that i can't wait any longer for d next😳...
KP ka toh zyada pata nahin chala😕..but shubhangi's character is too gud..loved her happy go lucky nature😉...
mind-blowinggg.. 
Hmm I m jst going to update now...chalo acchaa hai tum thik toh laga...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by RoKafan4eva


exactly marjaan..
pehli mulakat is something to wait for..n mera prediction is ki usse thapad zaroor padega...right puja???

Sorry Gunjan is baar Main apne Karan ko jhapad nhi khane dungi...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Angelmrjn


Puja...its too gud part yaar...u put deir real name on dem...wat an idea yaar...?.i thnk u r writng deir lyf story thru ur ff.cary on...am waitn 4 nxt part.jaldi kar...i cant wait 2 c hw wil deir 1st meetng..kahi karan ko b thapad tho nahi padega na lol...

No no No yaar Is baar ayesa nhi hoga
thoda ajib hoga...next part padhnaaa...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by shumi.


wow...what a start jaanu! great👏...completely new and freah idea😃...jist love it...after reading ur ff all my sweet old memories which were taking its last breath became alive and freah... i want to say u r a ⭐️


Awww thanks yaarrr...
I m glad I brought back those Old memories...'
Never want to loose u shumi di...please remain here in the kasturi forum...
Thanks bt If  I m a star then u r a superstar!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by robbiekasturi


wow wow puja what a lovely ff i love the character and part 1 is great
you used there real names is too good shubangi character as a bubly person is very nice karan's role was good
cont soon

Thanks yaar
do read the next part!!!
Posted: 12 years ago

Ok Guys here's the 2nd part...

 

Its The first Day of shooting and Shubhangi Enters The set with Tannu...

Shubhangi:"wow kya set hai yaar...Har taraf lights cameras...And saari                   attention mugh par...Main TV pe aane wali hoon...Mughe toh                   abhi bhi yakeen nhi hota..."

     Tannu:"Di aap shooting karne wale ho...ab toh yakeen kar lo..."

SW(script writer):"Haan MAdamm...Madam...ye hain apki script..isko ache se yaad kar lo..pehla scene acha nhi hua toh ekta madam ka gusaa...apko pata nhi hai"

shubhangi:"baap re ye sab...mughe itna lamba line bolna hai...

                 hum log kaagas ke foolun mein khushbu dhund lete hain...OMG                        what a line...Kitni impossible baat haina...lagta hai kaagaz ke phulon mein                                                perfume lagate hain

                    Hum aansuon ke saagar mein asha ki kashti chalate hain

                     kitni centi line hain tannu...BTW what is meant by kashti??

                            Hum apno mein farishton ko paate hain

                                     Kitni pure hindi haina...

                                    Hum jaise log zindagi ji jate hain

                            Kyon bhai baki log nhi ji pate hain kya??

               Tannu kitne complicated lines hain..Ajj toh meri Vat lagne wali hai..

Tannu:"Koi nhi Di..ap kar loge.."

 

Now shubhangi starts ratofying her dialogues.."kashti dhundh lete hain

                                                               khasti...oh sorry kashti dhund lete hain

                                                              hum aaa a a a a a a kya tha...ansu                                                                               ansuon mein what?haan aasha ki...

                                                              aasha ki aasha ki aasha ki what???????"

 

Just when she was roaming and learning her dialogues..her slips due to sum water on the ground...while Karan..who was jst passing from there ,sees her and then runs towards her and slips with her..They both roll down the floor with each other...holding each other...they stop with Shubhangi over Karan...

Shubhangi was Looking at him with full open eyes...She very very slowly blinked her eyes..sumthing was happening in her heart...it was beating rapidly...

The bagroung music was"Ga ma pa rere ni sa...nannana...Mitwaaa

                                     .Jipvan dagar mein prem                                         nagar mein, aaya nazar mein jab se koi hai..."

Shubhangi was lost in his eyes..She had lost her senses...Is taraf ye haal tha...

Suddenly Karan said"Asha Ki Kashti chala dete hain"

Shubhangi looking deeply into his eyes still nt in her senses:"haan chal gai chal gai"

 Everyone in the set were started laughing at her word...

Suddenly Shubhangi realized the world around her and also that she was over Karan...

So she managed to get up..while Karan also got up nd hit his shirt to make it dirt free...and muttered"ye ladki bilkul pagal hai.."

 

Shubhangi was still...standing looking at him like his deewani...Her head was tilted..a little smile was there on her face gazing at him...Looking at his everything..He was wearing a white shirt with a popoye mark on it..and a light blue jeans on it..and a

 Le Rosh watch on his left hand..Everything...

Tannu:"Di diii kahan kho gaye???chaliye 1st scene ka shot nhi dena hai kya?"

Shubhang:"Haan haann..tannu wo ladka kaun tha Kaun hai?"

Tannu:"mughe kya pata Di...chaliye ab.."

She takes shubhangi to the shooting place while she still smiles in herself...

                                         

Pk take 1

 3 2 1 Cut 

ACTION

Shubhangi looking fixedly at Karan..

And Karan at Shubhangi in ageneral attitude.

Shubhangi utters very slowly looking at Karan 

"Hum loooggg kaaagaz Ke philon meinnn Khushboo dhundh lenge"

 

CUtt

Shubhangi Lenge nhi lete hain OK

Now Take2

Action

Shubhangi---"Hum log Kaagaz main kashti chala denge hain"

Cutt

Shubhangi kya kar rahi ho?Apne character mein ghuso

hum log kaagaz ke phulon mein khushbu dhundh lete hain

Now take3

ACTION(just then Karan recieves a call and goes out)

Shubhangi:"Hum log kaagaz ke phulon mein khushbu dhundh lete hain..

..."

 

OK gud shot...KAL press conference hai..Toh sab yahan 9:30am tak aa jaenge ok...

 

At night----

Shubhangi on her bed thinking about karan..and how they had fallen they had fallen...

Tannu"Haha Shubhangi Di Today u fell...haha"

Shubhhangi"Haan Tannu...Today I really fell...fell in love..."

Tannu"what???apne kya kaha abhi??"

Shubhangi:"a a kuch nhi(HESITATING)kuch bhi toh nahi

main toh ye soch rahi thi ki us ladke ka naam kya hoga.."

Tannu"kyon ..,apko badi diljaspi hai usmein..."

Shubhangi"am am arre nahi..mughe usmein koi diljaspi nahi hai"

Tannu"haan apko usmein diljaspi kyon hogi..."

Shubhangi::"Kyon Kyon nahi ho sakti...Vo smart tha..handsum tha.."

Tannu::"acha aur..."

Shubhangi:"aur vo us white shirt mein kitna acha lag raha tha...

Uske lips ka colour Pink nd red ke bich ka tha...fair tha..."

Tannu(smiling and understanding everything)"acha aur..."

Shubhangi"aur uski ankhen...kitni nashili thi...Main toh uski ankhon mein dub hi gai thi"

Tannu"ACha  really...aur..."

Shubhangi::"aur uska chehra..."

Tannu::"haannn"

Shubhangi ::"Uska chehra..."

Tannu::"haan"

Shubhangi:uska..(SUDDENLY COMING BACK TO HER SENSES)A A uska chehra

Tannu::"Haan"

Shubhangi:"Mughe nhi pata ki kaisa tha...Tannu ..tughe toh main dekhti hoon.."

Tannu:"Haaannn u're gone di...apko bhi ho gaya...U're love stricken"

Then they had a pillow fight in their gleeful moods...

Shubhangi(exhausted)::"bas bas ab so jao..tannu ...mughe neend aa rahi hai"

Tannu::""aaj raat aapko neend aegi??"

Shubhangi:"Tannu bas kar ...Gud night"

Tannu:"Gud night di"

Lights off.but ..sum1's eyes were still open...nt wanting to close...Smiling lips...and eyes wanting to see him again...

 


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