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Chali Aaye Chali Aaye Chali Aaye.. Ayi Ayi Ayi Main Chali Aaye๐
Hmmm tit for tat eyyy.. U got me back for reserving a place on yours... ๐
See now.. I will only update when you *unreserve* ur spot๐๐ *Laughs Evilly*๐
Ok.. To the update... Right from the top.. no not the top but the top top! Like before the update..!! Ahh See now everyone should thank me for making u update early๐
Now to the real update aka Chapter number 1..2...3 yh i mean 3๐..
Awwww She saw a her old Dutta .. his possesiveness for her and his love.. awww he was jealous๐ But everything is fair in love and war๐ Ejjaacttllyyy... He was the one who literally pushed her out of his life.. stoooopid boi i tell you phew๐.. Love is greater than anything else! So he should have chosen her over his career.. things like that come and go.. true love comes only once๐ณ *Sophie's goes in Ali/Baaji dreamland*๐ Ok maybe sometimes love can come twice๐ ok i should stop chatting rubbish๐..
Yaay Abhay going... Is he gonna have an accident? To know more, read ahead sophie๐... I hope when she bid him goodbye, she didnt kiss him๐.. Awww Dutta acting normal... I know he's really hurt and trying to supress all his feelings init๐ญ.. How can someone stay like that infront of someone they love and not break down๐ญ... *Sophie controls her tears*๐.. HA he didnt remember Abhay's name.. Well i cnt blame him, i dnt remember that guy's name as well๐.. I thought it was Aadhi den Aabhi and then it was Abhay... ๐
OMG... OMG...๐ฒ๐ฒ All these years he kept a picture of her?๐ฒ Well there a similar track like this in Ehsaas.. but nuffin to do with wallet.. Ahh u sneaked into my head didnt you?๐๐ ... Im jokin.. my bit is different but has something to do with pictures๐ณ.. Anyway.. that was very sweet of him to keep a pic of them hugging.. he loves her.. he loves her๐ณ..
Awwww he still makes her go weak.. that like my nakku in my story...i so understand her ryt now๐ญ she loves him toooooo๐ณ
Awww D cant control himself.. aw aw aw aw.. but bby u gtta control.. ..YAY lift stopped.. wooohooo lol normally thats a bad thing.. but hey .. they are together and thats great..hum tum ek lift mein bandh ho aur lift stop hojaye๐ Okay that was weird๐...Huggie shuggie *Sophie whistles* Oiii Hoiii... main marjawaaaaaaaan..!! ๐ฒ She asked him??? About the pic??? Hailaaaa๐ฒ Awww he confessed.. he still loves her.. ๐ญ < Khushi ki aansoo๐ญ.. Haww... humein tumse pyar kitna.. yeh hum nahin jaante.. magar jee nahin sakte.. tumhare binaaaa๐..lol.. excuse my bad singing..๐.. She hugged him when he said it?๐ณ Hailaaaaaaaaaa๐.. Yahh she has a point.. but he was stupid back then.. he didnt have a brain.. oops he still doesnt have one but still.. jaane do na yaar.. pyar karta hai tumse๐.. Well she cant say she loves Aa..watever his name is .. cause her heart beats for DSP! ๐.. Aww Neha.. bby .. sweetheart.. you go console whats his name.. because he will need someone soon๐ณ.. Neha is nice.. i like her๐ very sweet girl.. yes .. Dutta loves Nakku.. she got the message.. Wohoo *Sophie opens champaigne*๐... Hailaa๐ฒ Whats his name is back? Already? I thought he was going for some days..weeks..months and will have an accident?๐ Sorry... ๐ณ.. Aww Nakku said Dutta when that guy hugged her๐ฒ.. Zor ka jhatka hai zoro se laga haan laga ๐ bechara Nakku ka x-fiance lol๐ Well.. Yes he is ryt as well.. she still loves Dutta.. she sud go get him๐ณ.. GO GRAB HIM!!!!!๐๐.. What the hell is Dutta doing on a bridge?๐ฒ Suicide????? Hailaaaaaa๐... But Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww the ending was the besttttt!!!!! *jumps with excitement* Omgg.. She told him she told him .. she loves him.. wooo.. They finally got each otherrrr.. *drinks champaigne*๐ I opened my champaigne earlier but was waiting for the end to drink it๐๐..
One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it.
Woooooow .. That is one beautiful quote!! So trueeee.. Goes very well with this FF!.. Ohhh and at the end she met him on the road๐ LOL.. ok i sud shut up๐
See see see.. I wrote some loooong comment... Phew..!! I'm so tired now!! *Vents self* .. Now u hop into my Ehsaas thread... Edit ur reserved spot and write a long comment to make me happy๐..
Okk.. Bye bye.. Ohh before i go... How bout you write an epilogue for this? Like 5 years later? ๐ LOL.. Ok im giving u more work to do lol.. just edit ur spot first ๐...
Ohh before i forget.. This short FF was... Beautifully written.. with a great story and I loved it!!! ๐ณ... Ok bye bye again๐
Edited by Sophia21 - 13 years ago
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