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new ff~U N ME TOGETHER..part 17..pg 35 (Page 5)

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
part~5


meanwhile in khurana.....Maan is redy to go london for his business trip......he comes downstairs nd sees arrangements of party.......he calls their servant nakul and asks whats going on...nakul informs him thats dev is throwing a party tonight......
Maan tell him to call dev...dev comes....

MAAN-dev..tum aj party de rhe ho??may i knw the resn??

DEV-ha bro.....wo frnds boht dino se keh rhe the...boht dino se koi masti nhi hui bro...isilie...bt aap agar kaho to me......

maan-no..its ok dev...bt not any late ni8 party...nd not hard drinks...ok??

DEV-ya bro...sure..i promise...

maan-ok..nw i have to leave.....by...take care....

DEV-by bro.....

in this time geet and pinky reaches khurana mansion........both of them enters in the room...geet was amazed looking at the big mansion...suddenly she collides with someone...she turs her face and see that the person is going...she said...

geet-am xtremly sorry.......

the person ws none other than man...bt he does see geets face as he ws in a call nd hurry...he said....
maan-its ok......(without turning his face...)

and they goes to their respective ways.......

in KM........

dev-tara...all the arrangements are ready??wts about drinks?

NT-ya dev...i hv arrranged that...dont worry...

then dev sees geet and pinky are coming.....geet is waving her hands...nd smiling to him....

dev-hi..geet..hello pinky..am glat to see u here....the party is jst going to begin......

geet-(smiles)hii dev...thanx for the car....nd nice party...

after sometime the party begins.......
there ws loud music everywhere...all the people ws njoying.....dancing......having there drinks....
geet and pinky started to feel akward...looking at girls in short dresses...dancing closely with boys....
suddenly pinky gets a call from her home...her daddy asked her to come back as some relative has come to visit them....

pinky-hey geet...hume jana hoga yaar...ghar me kuch mehmaan aa gye ha...

geet-thik ha pinky..chal...waise bhi yaha ajeeb lag rha ha.....

they goes to dev and geet tell him that they have to go......

dev-this is not fair...party to abhi suru hui ha...abhi tum kahin nhi jaogi...

pinky-but dev...i have to go...its important...

dev--arre yar.....aise kaise...acha thik ha...tum agar keh rhi ho to...but geet abhi nahi ja rhi ha...use me thodi der baad drop kr dunga ghar...

geet-nahi dav...aisa kaise ho skta ha...nahi nahi....

dev--oh...u dont trust me..then thik ha...u can go...plz...

geet-nhi aisa nhi ha...par...acha thik ha...me thodi ruk jati hu...pinky tu ja...meri fikar mat kar....

pinky-r u sure??

dev-ya...she is sure....(smiles..)Angry

so pinky leaves from the party.....leaving geet with dev...

dev-geet...jst jnoy na...ok...go there...talk with tara....nd her friends...am just coming....ok?

geet-ummm....ok.....

she goes to them......

NT-hii geet...come here...u like the party?

geet-ya..its nice...

they stars chatting....talking.....after sometime nayantara offers her a drink...

geet-no no...nayantara..i dont drink....

NT-arre koi hard drink nhi ha...jst soft 1...try it..u will like this....plz...jst 1...

geet-ok..if ur insisting....

nt give thedrink to her and wink at dev who ws watching all this from a corner....Shocked

NT-geet jst 2 min...my frnds are there...amcoming ok??u njoy the drink...

geet-okay....

nt goes to dev and tell him that the job has done.....
after taking few sips geet starts to feel dizzy....suddenly....she ignores and finish the drink..
then she stand up from the chair...but unable to walk....she fells sleepy and tired...she saw dev is coming to her....

geet-dev this drink.....i think....

dev-ya baby...i know....(and hold her from her waist)

geet-leave me dev...wt r u doing...(she tried to protest bt cant do much...as the drink already stars to affect her)

dev-dont worry darling...jast come with me.( drag her to his room..and closes the dorr)

geet-dev wht is this all...?leave me...i have to go home....

dev-ha chali jana...jaldi kise ha...(nd throws her on the bed)

geet-dev..what r u doing.....plzz leave me...ye sab kya kr rhe ho?!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dev-jst shut up.....(he stars to force himself on her.....)

geet tried helplessly to protest...bt she failed....she becomes so week...dev holds her hand and removes her dupatta....geet starts to cry...ask for leave her...but...dev turns his deaf ear....he starts to unzip her kurti...then in a jerk remove it....
geets becomes so week that now she cant even protest...tears of loosing her sole...her virginity...flows form her eyes....
dev removes her dress...then his....and forcefully...roughly starts to play with her body....exploring every parts of her..tasting her...everywhere....kissing her...biting her...finely reaches the climax....
in the meantime...geet becomes unconcious......................




precap---next morning......Shocked


hope u will like this...plzz leave ur beautiful cments....it means a lot from me...Big smile

love u all............

Big smile


Edited by soumimaaneetsou - 20 March 2011 at 3:08am

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged
aaaw.....Poor geet Cry Cry
ughhhhhh...just hate dev nd NT...... Angry
luv ur ff plz add me to ur pm list....

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
this Dev....I wanna kill him.......how could he stoop so damn low......poor Geet....

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lovely update....
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Poor geet
Do continue

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged
nice ff...
OMG poor geet Cry & uhhh this stupid dev Angry
i kept hoping that maan would forget something & come back home to save her Cry
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