new ff~U N ME TOGETHER..part 17..pg 35 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
see wt i has said!
tat stupid dev 🀬
first he ruined her life n now he ran away!
huh! so now maan will have to marry her
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear, i come across of ur ff's, sounds really exciting & interesting😍, please pm me whenever you update😳, please accept me as ur friend in ur buddy list😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow happy that is
not getting married
with jerk ass
poor maan he have
to clean is brother
mess cant wait read
next part  amazing
update pls cont soonnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
till part 9
nice story................
i hate Dev.................
disgusting person.................
hope Maan marries Geet......................
poor Geet coz of that Dev shes in this position..................
cont soon and add me to ur pm list..................
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amaizng
do continue
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART~10

daadi sat there for sometimes....then suddenly something came to her mind......

(dadi's monolog)~~~nahi nahi...hum aisa nahi kar skte....aur maan to kabhi nahi manenge.....aur ye to dev ki galti ha....to saaza maan ko kiyu de hum????
par........us bechari ldki....us geet ki kya glti ha.....agar aaj uski shadi nahi hui...fir to wo zamane ke saamne badnaam ho jayegi............wo bhi sirf dev ki glti k wjah se...........

par........ab hum kya kre....kuch to krna hi hoga..........aise to nahi baith skte.....mohrat bhi beeta ja rha ha.......hey babaji....humari madat kro...........
(monologue ends...)

after some times....daadi wents to maans room....maan was getting ready.....

daadi--maan...hume aapse kuch boht zaruri baat krna ha.........

maan-ha daadi...kahiye na.......itni jijak kiyu rahi ha aap.........

daai-beta...hume aap se ek kasam chaiye.....kye aap apne dadi ki ek kasam denge??

maan-daadi aapko achanak kya ho gya??aap aisa kiyu keh rhi ha?me aapka pota hu...aap jo chahe humse maang skti ha.......

dadi-beta pehle aap hume kasam dijiye.....agar aap ne ye kasam puri nahi ki to humara mara muh dekhenge......

maan-(shouts)daadi...plz aisi bate mat kijiye.....aap mere lie sabkuch ha...me aap ke liye kuch bhi kr skta hu.......plzz....aap ki kasam....kahiye....

daadi--beta....aj shaadi k mandap par dev k jgay aap ko baithna pdega....

maan-kya?????????????/daadi ap ye kye keh rhi ha??aisa kaise ho skta ha???shaadi to dev ki ha...achanak kya ho gya yeh sab?????

daadi-(hum abhi maan ko sab bta denge to woh dev pe boht naraz ho jayenge...or us baat ko le kar pareshan ho jayenge....isse acha ha hum abhi unhe adha sach bta dete ha....bad me unhe sab sach bta denge..........
beta....dev....wo ghar chhod kar chla gya...usne shaadi se mna kr diya...kiyuki wo kisi aur se pyaar krta ha.....ab aap hi hmara bharosa ha...warna society me humari kya izzat rhegi btaiye????...............or use chhodiye,........us masoom ldki ki sochiye.....wo log middle class se belong krte ha...waha shaadi toot jana boht buri bat hoti ha....aisi ldkio ki fir shaadi nhi hoti kbhi.........
ab btaiye..us bechari ki kya glti ha??kiyu use itni badi sazaa milegi??wo bhi tab...jab uski koi glti hi nhi ha.....

maan-par daadi...me.....

daadi-beta aap ne hume kasam di thi.....plz beta..hum aap se reqst kr rhe ha...dono pariwaar ki izzat ab aap ke hatho me ha....ab aap plz muh mat mor lijiye ga.............😭

maan-(me..ye sab kaise...me to us ldki ko jaanta bhi nahi hu....pr mene daadi ko kasam di ha...aur use rkhne ke lie me kuch bhi kr skta hu....)
theek ha daadi....muje manzur ha....par kya unko pta ha k dev ghar chhod kar chla gya ha???

daadi-nahi abhi unhe kuch nahi pta.....par hum unhe bta denge aap fikar mat kijiye...dhoke se shaadi nahi hogi..........

maan-fir theek ha dadima.....

daadithen called daarji and told him the whole story....she though they may refuge to get geet married to maan......but they didnt....actuly they just somehow wanted to get her married............

daarji-nahi ji hume aitraaz nahi ha.....hume to shukar guzar hona chiye maan bete ka......is ldki se kon shaadi krega..isilie dev bhi ghar chhod kr chla gya....wo to maan bete bhaagwan ha jo razi ho gye...aap jldi ayiye hum taiyari kr rhe ha....

geet listened the whole convo....she was shoched..as well as sad....she just wanted to blame her fate....

(geet's monologue)babaji...ab ye maan...dev ka bada bhai...kiyu babaji kiyu??akhir kya likha ha aapne meri kismat me....me to us insaan ki janti tak nhi....pta bhi nhi ki kya ye bhi dev ki trah hi ha ya nhi....par me majboor hu...muje shaadi krni hi hoji.....😭😭😭

babaji......meri madat krna taki me ane wale dukho ko bardash kar sakun.........us insaan kasamna kar saku...uske sath uske biwi bnke reh saku.........(monolouge ends...)



precap~~much awaited shaadi............πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

hope u guys like it....
plzz leave ur cments....
i will update it soon....



love u all............😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update yaar. ...add me too
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved it..

it was short updateπŸ˜›

poor geet how can her own family thinks so low about her.......

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no.............dadi sach na batakar bahut badi galthi kar rahi hain...........jab maan ko patha chalega toh.............cant even imagine his reaction.............
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update..waiting 4 the shadi..