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fathima

@fatzfathi

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG..! i completly agree wit u amlu..🤗 u r tooo good in writin romance...👏😳 awww i didn knew such cute romantic imaginations lies in tat smal head of urs...😛 😳😆 too good dear..loved d OS..😳

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Radhika

@chainreaction.

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 12 years ago

amal, that was amazing, and soo hawttt ☺️

when you gave me the link and said enjoy reading it, i didn't understand why you put the ☺️ emo, but now i understand 😉🤣

i only read the AR one, and riddhima was being shy and ammy was being so cheeky and naughty, lol, they make the perfect couple <3

i never knew you wrote such good scenes of AR romancingg 😲😲

why have you not written anymore?

you are so good at writing, and i think that you really should add more OS's, because its an OS gallery and you only have one 🤣

please please please write moreee like this bacchi, because you are amazing. haha, i know i'm besharam 😳, but what can i do? AR have such good chemistryyy!!

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Deepa

@spvd

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

MG version
wow very romantic...

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Sheena

@sheenaluvskajen

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Okay so I finally read the part. Thank You for telling me about it Amal :)

You are such an amazing writer dear at such an age. Kudos to you :).

That part was just too HOT. I loved it to bits. Dont ever think that just the sensuous/hot parts in a FF gets the readers attracted to it. Believe me there are many people out there who like a mix of both emotional and hot parts ;) .This part was a mixed of both. And seriously the way u expressed Riddhima's feelings in the beginning of the OS - I LOVED IT :|

I surely want to read something more from you :) I am glad i got this link :)

EDITED:

I am a little biased towards AR :D so haven't read the MG version. Throughout the OS i imagined AR as KAJEN :)

Edited by sheenaluvskajen - 12 years ago

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purpleekajenian

@purpleekajenian

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 12 years ago

U knw what? I read this before even, bt i was really new to IF, so i didn't comment on any FF or OS that i read.. I used to search for AR FFs n OSs n read them like a silent reader never even hit the LIKE button😆 I was a real stalker before i joined KAJEN AT😆😆

OMG wat an OS, hailaaa u have written everything so perfectly with ur awesome writing skills👏👏 Nw i can't wait to read the intense scenes of ur FF☺️☺️ This was so hawwwt ☺️ tum bohot besharam cuute bachchii ho😆 I loved every bit of it, lekin itni jaldii khatam bhi hoagayii😆

okeyy koi baath nehyy, u never gonna stop writing naa, i will get to read loads of ur amazing writing through ur FF naa😉

Sorry that i commented on it so late😳

bst wishes with lots of luvv...

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Whats the difference in the intro?🤣

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

I already commented my darling <3 I LOVE THE NAME <3

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abandoned

@abandoned

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X
Whats the difference in the intro?🤣

I beautified it woman..🤓

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Ohhh so the name is changed :P

And you wrote your gonna write different version of your OS's...saw it now :P

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abandoned

@abandoned

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Armu..I know you did..Main OS ki baat nahi kar rahi thi..Main OS gallery ki baat kar rahi thi..Thank You..<3

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