Posted:
12 years ago
RIDA!!!!
i messaged you but you didnt replied!!! why?? if you have changed the number then do forward it to me, or atleast text me once :s
and yes! coming back to the part!
em surprised that you came up with a quick update, soo glad about it, i wanted to reply/comment yesterday but i was too sleepy for that
em really really really happy, that you listened to me and showed shilpa's feeling, after giving you the advice i really did sworn off, thinking that you would have felt bad about me providing you with such info, but i want you to perfect in everyway :D
and you did it splendidly, you showed , how she tries to stop herself, how she force him to stop, and above all you showed, that how much she tries she cant run away from her feeling and the need of him inside her.
i really liked armaan in this part, he wasn't lusting, he is in love, and you showed it :* (muahxx for that) his possessive hold, his way of treating her, he just want her, as in he wants her to be by his side! and he had showed that :)
em loving this fic more and more everyday!
and em loving to comment on it even more than i can think :)
love you girl
message me asap!
mallu :)