BTLOO II ArSh FF link to next thread page 150 :) - Page 64

Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee
luved the part
OMG armaan proposes ridhimaa
wonder whts going to be her answer
thnx for pm
Posted: 12 years ago
nice
but I want to believe armaan
par if he loves shilpa
dont ever make him sleep with anyone else
that hurts to see
nice going ultimately he said it
make him the eternal ashique ang get his girl
Posted: 12 years ago
RIDA!!!!

i messaged you but you didnt replied!!! why?? if you have changed the number then do forward it to me, or atleast text me once :s
and yes! coming back to the part!
em surprised that you came up with a quick update, soo glad about it, i wanted to reply/comment yesterday but i was too sleepy for that
em really really really happy, that you listened to me and showed shilpa's feeling, after giving you the advice i really did sworn off, thinking that you would have felt bad about me providing you with such info, but i want you to perfect in everyway :D
and you did it splendidly, you showed , how she tries to stop herself, how she force him to stop, and above all you showed, that how much she tries she cant run away from her feeling and the need of him inside her.
i really liked armaan in this part, he wasn't lusting, he is in love, and you showed it :* (muahxx for that) his possessive hold, his way of treating her, he just want her, as in he wants her to be by his side! and he had showed that :)
em loving this fic more and more everyday!
and em loving to comment on it even more than i can think :)

love you girl
message me asap!
mallu :)

Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Rida
thanks for updating
Hot update☺️
couch scene was breathtaking
finally Armaan proposed Shilpa<3
I hate Vivek 😡 Love the angry Armaan
precap is interesting
 I want see Shilpa's reaction over Armaan's confession 
continue soon😛
Thanks for PM
 Love 
                    -Pranjali


Edited by -Pranjali- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
RIDA...comment edited on page no.79...
Posted: 12 years ago
Ridu i edit my comment on page 79
Posted: 12 years ago
hey rida
sorry yaar um hell busy wid my work so diff to comment everytime
but i do read ur updates regularly
it was such a hot update
n did i tell u um sooo jealous of ur brain??😆 for coming up with such ideas
saw ur SO CALLED COMMENT on the arsh married ff about this ff
u DARE i repeat U DARE even thinking of ding something to this ff
varna all of us will land up at ur place n kill u not throwing chappal n all on u

aur haan baby plz update ALL ur ff's na especially love will find a way toh u didnt even update apart from the prolouge n promo n ur other ff toh has been ages that uve left it on the cliff hanger


Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by chocolatefreak


UPDATE AFTER ATLEAST 2 WEEKS! 🤣🤣🤣🤣

hawww
 thats so cruel... yaar dun do this.. already tune hum logon ko itna zyada wait karwaya hai... please jaldi upd8 kar na...
Posted: 12 years ago
ooo dt was SEXYYY..hot  😳

loved d confession n loved d obsession... n loved d proposal 😳

vivekkk grrr 😡

ridaaa again u left us at d edge yaar,,,, 😭😛

sooo sry for commenting late...LOVED IT ⭐️
Posted: 12 years ago
wow such a good part! cant wait for the next one!

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