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rida!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
firstly welcome, secondly, i didn't received your message so em going to msg you anyways!
thirdly! i loved the part, you are back with a bang, i love you girl for updating it, i was missing it badly and now em surprise to find the lady writer herself back on IF!
MUAHxx ;)
armaan is soo jealous! omg i feel so bad for him, poor guy loves her alot and i really liked the scene where she herself moved to kiss him , you know, you have always written about armaan kissing her, but you never wrote about her response! do write it next time, otherwise the story will only contain armaan's feeling...this was a bit of guide, if you didn't mind me giving it to you :)
and yes! back to the scene, seriously i really liked the kitchen scene, i felt they were real husband and wife *blush* and then shilpa moving her head upwards to kiss him...WOW i loved it because this was the first time she took a step toward him with her heart feeling and then i made me feel that she have a complete right on armaan, even if she agrees or not :D
i loved the whole thing! as in WHOLE
and i love you the most for writing and coming back!
i'll msg you soon :)
love you
mallu :)
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