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Posted: 13 years ago
VIREN TO NIVI-" I AM REALLY SORRY"
 
 
I lost my LOVE thinking I knew what was best,
Making her suffer so much wasn't part of the rest.

She trusted me with all her heart, soul, and mind,
With me being stupid I threw that all behind.

What did I get out of this, something you ask?
Well nothing really just hate, no trust and what is left of my past.

Now there is no light, no reason to try,
Only thing left is to just cry, cry, and cry.

Stupidity only leaves to loneliness
A friendship now in dust
Revenge is not as sweet as happiness
Agony is not a must
Hate, is all I get in return

I am so sorry please do forgive me.
You know where I'll be in this deadly end
Please come back to me, my true and only best friend...  & MY TRUE LOVE


Here's my poem on viren asking nivi for forgiveness.
 
GUYS, do comment.
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww....it is wonderful...i'm waiting for the day when viren apoligize to nivi...and u did a brilliant job with ur words...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

THANX a lot .

I am Uzaima .joined forum yesterday.
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sana4kinha

Woww....it is wonderful...i'm waiting for the day when viren apoligize to nivi...and u did a brilliant job with ur words...!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey uzaima...wowww beautiful name masha Allah....im aashi....welcome to the forum dear...
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This content was originally posted by: aashiluvskinny

hey uzaima...wowww beautiful name masha Allah....im aashi....welcome to the forum dear...

Thanx alot.aashi
pls do comment on my other posts "living it up with characters" and "amazing bond"
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi uzaima its wonderful....i am feeling sad for viren..hopes viren will get her back soon
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This content was originally posted by: sana4kinha

Woww....it is wonderful...i'm waiting for the day when viren apoligize to nivi...and u did a brilliant job with ur words...!!

thanx a lot. please do comment on my other posts.
 
so many of you are viewing.please do comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx a lot.
 
i am not as gud as u r at writing poems.
thatz why i think i m not getting too many replies n comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
Uzaima its a lovely poem thanks for sharing...😊