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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged

*EDITED*

I owed you a Long Comment for seeing this SOOO Late !! Tashu,You're One Awesome Writer..Chupi Rustam! LOL I'll comment on ALL the parts!
 
Part 1 : This was MAHA-CUTE! Firstly I loved the idea of Riddhima proposing..Its so Different,Yet so Cute<3 Loved their first meeting..LOL Armaan started flirtling from right then! So Armaan-ish! Then then SRK's Mujhse Shaadi karogi thought was Hilarious..She actually thought she was going to play SRK infront of her boyfriend! LOL !! Then her speech was SO Cute..Yeah I admit it was a Litle cheesy but it was true...From the AR sense! Loved this<3
 
Part 2 : Loved this one too...Hugely Adorable<3 Heehheee Loved the bit where he lengthened the kiss and said," Now thats how you kiss someone" Soo ARMAAN ! Then the way she proposed and the line you added there about his expression like with a confused expression as if I had just explained a really complex math problem to him that was unsolvable.  Heeehheee!!! This was HiraliousROFL then that part when he comes back to say sorry! Awww...It took away my heart and led me to a Large Smile :) that part was adorable..Reminded me of the KaJen Cardboard/Silent Convo when Armaan decided to leave! Only this was Happier! Tee-hee! Cuteee!<3
 
Part 3 : This one's the BESSTT of all,I think.Riya is SOO cute,and naughty and mischevious! Armaan pe gayi hai !ROFL LOL LOL She isn't interested in anything except her Mom Dad's Love Life !! ROFL Ussko Love-letters mein interest hai ,Which is very good..Because She is SO like me! The letter was Uber-cute<3 Armaan is Sooo Adorable when he is missing his Basket LOL And Then Armaan's Diary Entry was Awww!! Heehhee the first meet Armaan was SCAARREDDD !! ROFLROFLROFL And Loved the way Miss Riya Mallick was hiding behind the curtain to save herself..AR convo made me smile ! I can imagine Dr.Mallick staring at his wifey! Sorry,Sexy Wifey! Wink Then the way Riya called her Dad 'Babe' was ROFL The look on Armaan's face must've been PRICELESS! Tee-hee! Socho agar Riya hadn't got caught Bechariii Uska Kya hotttaaa ROFL LOOVEEDD this Tashu<3
 
Next Time PM me! ILY <3
Love,
Maitree


Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 23 April 2011 at 6:16am

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
hey,
nice OS!
it was really cute!

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
hey
such a cute os
luvd it
tc
shaaz

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
its nice tashu 
do write more

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
RES
 Finally edited  Shocked LOL
edited shooo late shollyStern Smile koi baat nehi par i edited this week i kept my promise ApproveLOL
tashuuu mindblowing OS  Clap
omkajen AR daughter sharing her  Embarrassedi sooo love the  1st paragraph itself  sooo cute like srk daughter in KKHH Embarrassed but riya off course will be cuter than anjali afterall its my AR daughter Day Dreaming
aww  love the way riya  ging in AR kamre chori chori chupke chupke  LOL
aww i loves this part when riya says papa n his silly names ROFL omg she find basket naam silly DisapproveLOL i love it Day Dreaming 
for a sec after reading armaan letter i was confused why armaan saying babe at the end of his love letter ConfusedROFL thank riya for clearing the confusion LOL
OMG both AR letters were sooo cute Embarrassed but bad gal riya its not reading momma n papa love letters ApproveLOL but its very fun 2 read others love letter Day DreamingROFL
but am still wondering why armaan have bottle cap in his drawer ROFL
tashu love it very very much it was unique compare 2 other OS Clapthrough i dnt read OSs n FFs now LOL
N am happy they caught riya or bechari would see how  naughty her papa is  EmbarrassedLOL

sholly once again for editing sooo late  Unhappy



yuniSmile


Edited by ammyridz600 - 12 May 2011 at 8:31am

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
nice work tashu keep it going!

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Hey tashu <333 long time since we havnt spoken anyway...
Great work and the child is a cutie... :)
Continue soon <333

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