i'll try the same thing on my bf....well that's when i get one in the future..hehhee!!!😆😃
Continue posting such lovely One-shots..and plz do pm me!😊
~~ TiNa ~~
Okay so FINALLY I got tym 2 read ur OS.
OMG CT! I dnt noe where 2 start wid. I lurrrrved every single, tiny-winy bit of ur OS...both parts offcourse. It's a complete mixture of emotions. ANY1 nd I mean ANY1 cn easily connect 2. Dude u jst succeed in shocking me everytym wid smt new!
Nd OMG...da Muski u portrayed in ur OS...wz such a typical 1...it wz SO HER...specially da TV watchin part. Nd I loved Riddhima's internal talking...it wz so CUTE yaar. Cuming 2 AR...I think I have nothing 2 say bout dem...cz I'm already mad bout dem...but u did a FANTASTIC job in sketching their whole character...there ABSOLUTELY wz no difference in dem as compared 2 da 1's v have watched on TV.
All in all...ur BRILLIANT yaar. Jst carry on wid ur OS...cz u have da ability to! Keep it up! ILY!!!
Thank u all soooooo much it means a lot to me!!!!!!! will answer u all soon!!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: ..-Marj-..Another awesome update Tashu!
Lol Ridzi's anger seems hell scary but the way Armaan came back and fixed everything was great!
The card thing again reminded me of Armaan in DMG, though this was made me happy! The scene in the serial made me cry like anything!
Anyways great update! Are you continuing it further? If yes, can't wait!
Originally posted by: dashingtusha13hey, nice OS!
just read both parts!
it was so cute!
awww! armaan is soooo adorable at the end!
luved it!
write more OS!
Originally posted by: Riddssheyyy dear,
nice one
do write more FF
love
Riddss
Originally posted by: PrinniaIt's AWESOME in one word
Loved it
Good job⭐️
Originally posted by: --AN--Wow! This is wonderful! :)
Originally posted by: anu_ishaAwesome part.
plz pm me whenever u write next.
Originally posted by: pujalovesARawesome! 😊
Originally posted by: armaan_tinaawwwww that was shhhooo cute!! i could so clearly imagine the angry Riddhima and the confused+scared Armaan!!!LOL
i'll try the same thing on my bf....well that's when i get one in the future..hehhee!!!LOL😃
Continue posting such lovely One-shots..and plz do pm me!😊
~~ TiNa ~~
Originally posted by: AlmaasK
Okay so FINALLY I got tym 2 read ur OS.
OMG CT! I dnt noe where 2 start wid. I lurrrrved every single, tiny-winy bit of ur OS...both parts offcourse. It's a complete mixture of emotions. ANY1 nd I mean ANY1 cn easily connect 2. Dude u jst succeed in shocking me everytym wid smt new!
Nd OMG...da Muski u portrayed in ur OS...wz such a typical 1...it wz SO HER...specially da TV watchin part. Nd I loved Riddhima's internal talking...it wz so CUTE yaar. Cuming 2 AR...I think I have nothing 2 say bout dem...cz I'm already mad bout dem...but u did a FANTASTIC job in sketching their whole character...there ABSOLUTELY wz no difference in dem as compared 2 da 1's v have watched on TV.
All in all...ur BRILLIANT yaar. Jst carry on wid ur OS...cz u have da ability to! Keep it up! ILY!!!
Originally posted by: shaaz_91hey
awesome os
luvd it
do write more often
tc
shaaz
Originally posted by: Simmy003Okay now that I read the "whole" thing! lol I loved it Tashu! It was so cute! Armaan's such an idiot but yet sooo adorable! But poor Riddhima, he messed up her plans! But, but...Armaan always knows how to make it up to her and the end was reallly really sweet! You should write the wedding day now lol but this was amazing! Loved itt <33
Originally posted by: Sanaya-luv-artiWow!! just read the updt on pg 1 yaar this was yur first try on writing sumthing? ryt? i dint like it at all!! I LUVED IT! and yeh not a fan of AR but the story and dailogues were just so mindblowing that cudnt stop myself to keep reading it is just wonderful yur just an Amazing writer by god!! gr8 job keep it up tune toh mere se bhi acha likha jaan! Mindblasitoing fantastica bhut acha tha i rlly enjoyed it im speechless or kya bollo? Lolzzzz just keep writing more im a fan of yur writing peice 😉
do write more
continue soon!
im a fan of yurz!
keep it up!
Luv Sanaya
Originally posted by: ammyridz600Res
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tashuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu finally i read the half part 2day😆 u knw na its not my galti , mein paas gayi thi yester on KAJEN AT😆 2day before going on AT am trying 2 edit all my RES 😆
now coming 2 this update of yours ,its awesome ya mindbowing👏 i loved it more than the first part😳
i love the way u started it , suspense type 😉
A hug 4 u🤗 for making my muski part of it , she is one my fav character on dmg😳
The flashback was awesome , the way u describe basket inner feelings😳😳😳
oopsssssssss 😲the kiss whom basket gave armaan was unxpected ☺️N armaan as usual chance pe dance😆
wow the proposed part by basket😍 tashuuu beautifully written ya lovely👏👏👏
this line is the best 🤣He looked back at me with a confused expression as if I had just explained a really complex math problem to him that was unsolvable🤣bechara my armaan was confuged🤣
oh but felt sad for ridz , she gather soooo much courage but armaan ruined it 😳
i lobe this one 2 😆😆😆 muski /muski /sorry ridz was watching tv 🤣🤣🤣 typical chatterbox 😆
oye hoyye the board thing was shooooooooo CUTE 😳😳😳
ok i stooped wiz my chapad chapad now😆
tashuuuuuuu it was great 😃 looking foward for yr next OS 🤗
LOADS of LOVES,
Yuni😊
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