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LOST!!! - Viren

mittusingh thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lost - Viren
 
Attitude was my game
Everything was in the fame
All other things were just lame
Now nothing will ever remain the same
 
When you said you will leave
I didnt have a word to say
If I did would you have stayed
 
I hurt you in every way I can
Nothing I did to you was ever sane
You stood by me when things were bad
You searched my soul and brought it to the shore
 
Now that you have gone
My heart cries in pain
 
Lost is my attitude
Lost is my fame
Lost are my dreams
Lost is what I feel
Lost is what I will really be
 
LOST!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!! I'm speechless absolutely amazing, perfect words to suit the situation loved it x
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Posted: 13 years ago
too good Mythri.. Yes, Viren is lost and his expressions today showed that. He was totally lost and alone.. That is what I wrote in my post on the discussion thread..
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Posted: 13 years ago

HERE u r with such a nice poem.😛

wowwww u r so fast n gud at writing poems. really amazed!!!!!!!!!!
 
here are a few lines frm another song of MJ as a reply for ur post.(i m a great fan of MJ)
I imagine viren telling silently these lines  to nivi
 
 
One day in your life
You'll remember the love you found here
You'll remember me somehow
Though you don't need me now
I will stay in your heart
And when things fall apart
You'll remember one day . . .
 
One day in your life
When you find that you're always waiting
For a love we used to share
Just call my name, and I'll be there
 
 
I hope u wud lke
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Posted: 13 years ago
like like...super like!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

THANX A LOT

i am uzaima
one day i will post my self-composed poem.but i m not as fast n superb as u r.
i m so busy in my studies that i hardly get time to compose poems.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simply marvelous Mythri. I am speechless.

Uzaima loved both MJ songs you have mentioned, perfectly fits with current Viren's situation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a poem you wrote its so suit the current situation that Viren is feeling right now when he was looking at the divorce paper in today's episode and the poem that you wrote is telling us how much he really loves Nivi and misses her right now and regretting his action that he did with her even though we all now that he still loves Nivi but he doesn't want to admitted to her because of his guilt and did you guys notice that he was stopping himself from saying that he also needs her in yesterday episode.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mythri!!! 🤗 Wow, this was such a nice poem!! Viren being lost, just beautifully written!! 👏 You are such a brilliant writer. It's always a pleasure reading your posts. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awwwwwwww....thanks payal....and u r such an entusiastic reader...love your comments and posts!! hugs girlie...!!

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