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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey i love this so just tot of sharing it with here
as still there is no reunion nd geet waiting 4 maan
i tnk it will suit them
so hope u all like it too


4rm geet
Udaas ankhon me ek jalan hai
Ya phir yeh aansu ruken ruken hain
Nahi ho tum jo kareeb mere
Magar ho phir bhi yun aas paas
Mere aas paas mere paas paas

4rm geet
Hai dil ke raston pe tera chehraa
Tere palatne ki aas le kar
Me muntazir hun kahin to hoga
Mere aas pass mere paas paas

4rm maan
Mere humrahi suno
Aao chalein chand ke paar
Aisi dunya me kahin door
Jisme na gham na aansun ho
Na aahein ho kahin
Aur kuch ho mera Pyar ho
Tera aas paas mere paas paas

4rm geet
Yaqeen hai yeh mujhko
Ke tum bhi ek din
Chale hi aaoge me jee uthungi
Ke tum jo hoge mere aas paas
Mere aas paas mere paas paas

4rm maan
Kabhi tanha jo hui tum
Kisi jeevan ke safar mein
Meri awaz sunogi
Kahin meri dhakdkan mein
Zindagi mujhko kabhi
Tujhse juda bhi karde
Band ankho ke dareechon mein
Tujhko dekhun tujhe dekhunga
Mere saye ki tarah
Tum tou rahogi har pal mein
Mere aas paas mere paas paas


hope u all like it i love it
Posted: 13 years ago
di its been over 24 hrs since u updated . . . ub to update kardo na . . . pweej . . . spamming is also not working, kaise din aa gaye hain . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayee Rabba!! Holi ki Chooti li hai kya di?
Oh nooo!!!
Posted: 13 years ago
di me naraz  apse. . .
 
geet style throwing stuff here and there and yelling . . . i want an update . . .stomping my foot . . . i want an update . . . i want an update . . . update update update😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please Update this FF, kashish & deeewangi please.
 
its been a long time ;) I m used to your fast updates! :)
Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

mini tm:-


Next:-

Geet cutting onion, capsicum and then maan and muskan came there and maan said do u need any help ?

Geet:- no baas, muskan ko leke bahar jaiye, don't let her come inside the kitchen.

Muskan :- me..in…kya…kar..u..ph…ir..

Maan:- u'll play with me, we will play something , like board game or video game.

Muskan looks happy and said chaliye.

Maan and muskan came out from the kitchen when they see dadi is coming with sameera.

Maan told muskan beta, just go to my room,I'll be there within 10mins. Bring out all video and board games there.

Mk looks un happy when maan said sweet heart, I'l give u lots of chocolate ,

Mk smiles and kissed her dadda's cheek and said ok.

After mk left from there when dadi said y geet insulting sameera , when she just came here to congratulate both of u.

Maan :- first , we don't need her any wish , second it's not geet, it's me , who insult her but as per my thought she is intruder here when me and my wife have some private moments and I don't think any third person will be just come here and I'l see it peace fully.

Sameera:- but…

Maan:- dadi if u done then pls tell ur spl gues to leave from here and don't interfere in my life again.

Sameera start her drama and said sob… one day we engaged maan.

Maan shouts call me Mr Khurana and second hum kabhi engaged nehi the, if u not stop here then I'll do something then u'll just feel repent.

Dadi:- maan , pls behave ur self mana ki oh galati kya hain but uske irade galat nehi the.

Maan:- dadi, I had enough, I have to give time to my wife and daughter so, . and one more thing kiske irada kaise hain oh mujhe samajh ne dijiye. Mein bahut sab ko mauka diya hain mere zindegi meine interfare karne baas aab nehi. Then said if u want then have break fast here but pls first thing say ur spl guest to leave the home before Ill call security here.

Then sameera runs from there and crying still, dadi also left the outhouse when maan going towards his room.Here all this scene noticed by geet.

 

Next:-

Maan entered the room and see his princess looking at all the games but have frown in her face.

Maan sit besides her and take her in his lap and asked what happen to my princess?

Mk looks at her father and said da..dd..a….I…don..'t kn…w this game..ho..w…to..pl…ay?

Maan just kissed her cheeks and said baas itna sa hi baat .ok,I'll teach u. ha.

Mk happily nodded and maan teach her how to ply after some both engrossed in the play when geet called them by nanny. But nanny informed geet that both r not responding .

Geet irritated and asked y?

Nanny:- sahib aur baby r playing games now there.

Geet shook her head and then said ok ,I'll go and u just complete those work.

Nanny nodded her head and then Geet takes food for them and going towards their room.

Geet enter the room and see maan also become kid with mk.she faintly smiles and thinks she wants this to see for long time. A  tears also falls from her eyes.

 

Next:-

Geet enter the room and see maan also become kid with mk.she faintly smiles and thinks she wants this to see for long time. A tears also falls from her eyes.

 Then suddenly remember those 7 yrs and thinks no ,I have to be strong now , can't let my emotions come out again but what emotions , kya mujhe mein aur koi feelings baki hain, nehi ,mere saare feling khatam hogayi hain oh 7 saal baad aaj bhi maan ko kareeb dekh ke, kuch hota hain, par mein sirf khush hoon mere beti aur mere pati khush hain aur mujhe kuch nehi chaiye, mujhe un dono ko milana tha baas, aur kya chaiye.

Suddenly both mk shouts at top of their lungs and said hum jeet gaye.

Geet shocked and surprised andher chain of thought broke and then she said iss tarah koi shout karta hain kya.

Maan :-oh    hum.

Geet then placed the food in side table and said maan eat it now , u have to take mdcne also and then feed mk and said waise iha teen partner kaise do toh aap dono ho teesra kaun.

Maan :-oh hum jara.

Geet:- kya.

Mk:- mama, me…an..d..pa..pa pl…yain….g…to..geth…er…

Maan:-aur doosre taraf koi nehi mein baas just help her to play this game.

Geet rolled her eyes and said hume kal muskan ke school mein jana hoga for parents meeting .

Maan:-ummm.

Geet:- aap aa paoge.

Maan looks at her with hurt face then said humari beti ka imp day hain kal and I'll go there. Don't worry. First come my daughter then else.

Geet:-thnks.

Maan think thnks keheke paraya kar rehe ho geet, par tumhe kya kahu jab meine hi galti kya aur iye din le aaya.

 

 

Next:-

That dya mk show her school book and copies to maan and said da..dda…u'll he..lp me..na…..

Maan:-of course my princess.

Maan said where is ur bag.

Mk starts crying and said oh oh…

Maan placed her in his laps and said sweet heart,kya hua.

Mk :- mer …r…ba..g. kho gay..a….

Geet shouts what but how and when , aapne hume bola kyuon nehi.

Maan:-shh, geet then beta I'll buy a new bag and u'll choose it.ok. Then wipes her tears and said dekha geet, bilkul tumharai tarah ahin haar baat pe roti hain.mama 's daughter ha.

Geet pouted and murmur , meine kab royi , agar koi aapki tarah gussa kare toh koi kya kar sakta hain.

Mk nodded and said ok.

Maan:- jaan, mujhe malum hain tum kya bol rehe ho,

Geet think inn saat saalon mein kya iye mind read karne jaan gaye

Geet:- said u pampering her too much.

Maan smiled and kissed mk's hair and give her a drwaning book and mk sit on her dadda's lap and start drawing.

Then maan said I pamper u also jaan.

Geet:- no u r not, then suddenly stop and said mujhe kuch kaam hain mein study room ja rehi hoon. Hope it'll be fine if I'll use ur study room.

Maan hurt but just said it'll be fine.

After some time maan told nanny to take care of mk and he will be soon.

Mk is bsuy with her drawing .

Maan enter the study room and stand there some times and watching geet .

Geet tunrs and see maan is standing there and looking at her but his face is hurt .

Geet know she done wrong and said I'm sorry maan.

Maan sighed and said first thnks then asked permission in ur house when here everything is only yours then sorry.

Maan faintly smies and said geet, I know, I'm wrong and want to rectify it.I know phir se mujhpe trust karna muskil hain but just give me one chance jaan.one moment u r my old geet and at very next moment u r new geet, iye new geet ko meine nehi janta.mere galti ke saja aapne aapko kyuon de rehe ho geet, y r u punishing ur self when every fault is mine only. U don't want to hear sorry from me but tum khud mujhe sorry, thnks bol rehe ho,. Mujhe se baat karo geet, mujhe bolo tumharai pareshani, don't stay away from me. If u feel hurt when I said sorry then think how I felt after hearing sorry and thanks from u.

Geet tum mujh se jhagra karo, danto, but don't punish ur self,pls I beg u.

Maan come close to geet and hold her shoulder and said look at me, geet,I want to see smile on ur face, I want to hear ur non stop bak bak.I want to see ur anger and throing things on me.I want to hear ur laughter which is like music.

Geet just look at him then softly hugged him and said I need time maan.I don't know  anything, just need time. Pls give me time.

Maan hugged her back and said take ur time darling but don't say sorry, thnks or want permission for anything.I'm yours , iha ke sab kuch tumhara hain. Samjhi.

Geet just nodded and hugged him.

Geet feel something but some where still fear intact. Her heart want to believe maan but brain feared if again something happen but geet is happy after so many yrs maan opened up to her and tell her his feelings .Geet also want to tell and geet decided that she will tell him those  7yrs first .

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Posted: 13 years ago
muskan diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
i will surely complain 2 mk da...dadda if u dnt update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: rsroopali

muskan diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

i will surely complain 2 mk da...dadda if u dnt update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn



rakhi@ very cute update...!!!

maneet hugging and talkng ...loved it..!!!!