"PYAAR KI YE EK NAYI KAHANI"(THE LAST PART) - Page 8

Wndrful part dear.
amazing!!!!!!!!
poor pia....
luv d part dear.
thnx for d pm.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon,nd do pm me dear.
luv u
vritika

it was awesome yar lekin thora slow track hai plz make it a bit fast and more abiya scene

that was nice part👏

Thanks guys.congrats india won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳

PART:10(Vampire Revealed)

RAICHANDS:-
chand:haseena aaj aysa lagraha hain k kuch bohot bura hone wala hain!
HASEENA:haan chand..mujhe bhi kuch aysa feelings ho raha hain!
DROBRIALS:-
PANCHI:vishal choro mujhe
VISHAL:meri baat suno
PANCHI:looking vishal
VISHAL:hum hamesha ek dushrese larte hain..jhagarte hain..kabhibhi thik se humne baat nehi ki...tumne kabhi socha hain kyun?
PANCHI:haan kyunki hum ek dushrese nafraath karte hain
VISHAL:thik hain agar hum ek dushrese nafraat karte hain to jaab hain college nehi aata to tum bekarar kyun ho jati hoon..
PANCHI:ab...ab...
VISHAL:jaab main kisi aur larki k sath hota hoon taab tum jealous kyun hoti hoon..haan bolo......
PANCHI:silent
VISHAL:nehi hain na koi jawab..main bataou kyun?
PANCHI:silent
VISHAL:kyunki jhagar te jhagar te abb aysa hua hain ki hum ek dushre se bina jhagre rehhi nehi sakhte...haan panchi hum ek dushre k bina adhure hain...nehi reh sakhte hum ek dushre se door..kyunki...
PANCHI:kyunki?
VISHAL:(smiles)yea to aab tumhehi dhoondna hain......

HOSTEL:-
PIYA IS CRYING............
PIYA:y God..y......humesha mere sath hi aysa kyun hota hain...pehle mama papa aur aab....pehli baar maine kisi se itna payar kiya aur.....kyun..............
WALKING 2 THE JUNGLE N CRYING:-
ABHAY:piya...tum itni raat ko yahan jungle mein kaya karrehi hoon..tumhe nhei paat raat ko jungle mein ghumna kitna khatar naak hain!😡
PIYA:choro mujhe😡main yahan jungle mein ghumu ya jobhi karu meri marji..tumhe koi haq nehi hain mujhe rook ne ka...
ABHAY:chalo hostle
PIYA:pls abhay mujhe aapni haal mein chor do..jaou yahan se!
ABHAY:dekho barish ho ne wala hain chalo
PIYA:honedo..main nehi jaoungi
ABHAY:maar jaogi!😡
PIYA:to marne do 😭..aur ji kar bhi kaya karo..mama papa ne to pehlehi sath chor diya aur jisse payar kiya......😭
ABHAY:piya!
PIYA:pls abhay mujhe mere haal mein chor do..mujhe nehi cahiye koi sympathy..
ABHAY:keyse chor do tumhe yahan akele
PIYA:kyun abhay..mere sath kaay hain tumhara...mujhse payar to nehi karte na to main agar maar..
ABHAY:shh.

LOOKING EACH OTHER!Embarrassed
ABHAY:aysa kabhi bhi maat kehna...
PIYA:kyun abhay...
ABHAY:bsah..chalo
PIYA:no abhay..tum agar mujhse payar nehi karte to main jo tumhari akhon main mere liye dekhti hoon bo kaya hain abhay...kyun chalo ate hoon haar jagah mujhe bachane...kyun karte hoon meri itni fikar...mujhse payar nehi karte to kaya hain yea saab!
ABHAY:piya..
PIYA:nehi abhay..ajj nehi..aaj tumhe jawab dena hoga...nehi karte mujhe payar abahy?
ABHAY:no
PIYA:don't u love me?
ABHAY:no..no..no
PIYA:no abhay tum jhut bol rehe hoon..u love me abhay
ABHAY:no....
PIYA:u love me abhay...
ABHAY:no..
PIYA:meri taraf dekhke bolo..don't u love me
ABHAY:silent
PIYA:kaay hua abhay..meri akhon mein dekhkar bolo...
ABHAY:nehi keh sakhta ...
PIYA:kyun meri akhon mein dekh kaar kyun yea nehi keh sakhte..HAAN....kyun?????
ABHAY:becoz..becoz..I LOVE U ....................😭
PIYA:abhay.........

ABHAY:paar piya..hum dono kabhi ek nehi ho sakhte...
PIYA:abhay..
ABHAY:haan tum aur mein kabhi ek nehi ho sakhte
PIYA:jaab hum ek dushrese payar karte hain taab kyun?
ABHAY:bash nehi
PIYA:abhay mujhe janna hain kyun????
ABHAY:janna cahti hoon na to chalo mere sath..
PIYA:abhay kahan le jarehe hoon mujhe abhay..
ABHAY:chalo
PIYA:yea kahan le aye hoon mujhe..abhay..bataon...

ABHAY:dekho piya..dekho mere iss sach ko..kahoon aab..kaya kaar paou gi mujhse paayr...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

.............THE END....................
Edited by hreeyaa - 13 years ago

Wao dear amazing nd superb part.
it ws totaly outstanding.
fantastic,amazing.
luvly dear.
u rock.
thnx for d pm.
plz cnt wid nxt updt,i cant w8 to read ur nxt part m eagerly w8ing dear.
so plz do cnt soon nd do pm dear.
luv u
vritika

Omg.. Amazing update Dear.. Vishal-Panchi were Lovely.. Abhiya were Awesome.. So finally he said those 3 Magical words..bt soon gave a bad news., We cant be together.. So Vampire revealed.. Waiting for Piya's reaction.. Continue soon..lol.

wow it a superb updaye dear !! 

hei,
so now panchi will start thinking wat is this feeling that she has for vishal..but wat is this?pia asked n he revealed his secret so soon..didnt expect that..update soon ria..

gr8 update wat wil hapen next wil piya luv abay wil she left him ? so many ques no ans til ur next update luv yar update 

good update👏