Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani

"PYAAR KI YE EK NAYI KAHANI"(THE LAST PART) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
hei ria,
1st part was nice..is abhay a supernatural r normal human being?y shud abhay always show hatred towards pia?continue soon..
luv,
ramani
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 part.. Vishal-Panchi Part was Gr8.. Abhay is rude as always.. n nice going wit Mish-Kabir.. Waiting for d next part.. Thanx for d pm.. lol..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesum start
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Posted: 13 years ago
good beginning๐Ÿ˜†
please update soon ๐Ÿ˜†
and add me to the pm list๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
๐Ÿค—hello frnds.Thanks 4 all the comments n support.here's the 2nd part.hope u all will lyk it also.luv u all๐Ÿ˜Š

PART-2(RAICHANDS SECRET)

COLLEGE:-

PIYA:kabir?y u r looking so sad?kaya hua?
KABIR:nothing piya..
PIYA:no kabir something is wrong tell me.
KABIR:nehi bo misha!
PIYA:oh to yea baat hain...kabir maine tumse pehlebhi kaha tha..y don't u tell her tht u love her..
KABIR:keyse piya?u knw misha...
PIYA:ya i knw bo baki larkio k tarah nehi hain par tum kehke to dekho.kaya patah bo accept karle.
KABIR:ayse keyse?
PIYA:hmmm.oh yah kuch din baad valentines day hain na?
KABIR:haan
PIYA:ya kabir tum valentines day par misha ko propose kar dena n u have 2 do it.
KABIR:yah ok.done.valentines day par main misha ko aapni dil ki baat bol dunga cahe jobhi hoon!
PIYA:ya tht's good.done!

RAICHAND HOUSE:-

CHAND: haseena?
HASEENA:haan chand?
CHAND:where is abhay?
HASEENA:college geya hain
CHAND:ya...its good 4 him...4 us!
HASEENA:haan
CHAND:tum janti hoon na humhe sabse ghulmilkar rehna hoga.yeahi hum sabke liyea acha hain.but abhay!bo thoda rude hain usse yea samajhna hoga...itna gussha humhare liye thik nehi!
HASEENA:ya chand u r right.bo kosis karraha hain!
CHAND:good!


COLLEGE:-

PIYA;maya?
MAYA:oh piya.keysi hoon?
PIYA:haan thik hoon.tum kal kyun nehi ai?
MAYA:bo kal...
ABHAY:tumhari problem kaya hain piya..humesha dusro k life main interfere karti hoon...
PIYA:abhay main to bas..
ABHAY:stop haan...chalo maya!
PANCHI:kaya hua piya?
PIYA:nehi kuch nehi
PANCHI:main dekha...how rude he is na....behen itni cool hain aur bhai...huh!
PIYA:choro panchi...tum bataao kaya hal chal hain?
PANCHI:aur kaya...bo sadu kaya mujhe khush rehne deta hain.
PIYA:koun vishal?๐Ÿ˜†
PANCHI:aur koun!huh!
PIYA:tum dono bhi na๐Ÿ˜†
MISHA: kaya...koun dono?
PIYA: aur koun!๐Ÿ˜†
MISHA:oh tum
miss universe n mr sadu ki baat karrehi hoon๐Ÿ˜†
PANCHI:misha!
MISHA:piya ek gungli kutta aur ek jungli billi jaab ek hota hain taab jo hota hain yea dono ek ek honese bohi hota hai.๐Ÿ˜†
PIYA:๐Ÿ˜†
PANCHI:misha stop haan๐Ÿ˜ก
PIYA:ok stop aab chalo...๐Ÿ˜†


CLASS:-

MAAM:so students kuch din baad valentines day hain.hum issbar kuch haat k karnge.tum saab ka kaya plans k mujhe immediately batana...ok?
STUDENTS:ok maam...
MAAM:oh ek good news hain students!
STUDENTS:kaya maam?
MAAM:kal ek new teacher ayegi....
STUDENTS:new teacher!
MISHA:yea kaya koi good news hain!...
MAAM:haann bo tumlogoki biology class legi.ok students bye
KABIR:biology!
MISHA:eww..

(piya is walking...suddenly she fall)

ABHAY:(catch her)



    
pyaar to hain paar ekraar nehi...kaya abhay k dil mein bhi
   jagega piya k liye aahsah..kaya kabir keh paye k misha ko
   aapni dil ki baat...koun hain  yea neyi teacher...sawal bohot
   haal....
   "PYAAR KI YEA EK NAYI KAHANI"


   ....END OF THE 2ND PART....


Edited by hreeyaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey its nice and really nice collerction of characters
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic dear.
superb,awsm.
luv all d scenes.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon,i jus cant w8 for d nxt updt yar.
plz plz cnt soon n dun 4get to pm me.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 part.. Abhay is being very rude.. Not fair.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm.. lolz..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hei,
watever questions v wish to ask u put it up at the end of ur update..taking our task..wah..kaisa mam hai yaar?asking abt students' plan for valentine's day..in the show mam asks to do research abt love..hope u r trying to say "hum kisi se kam nahin"..anyways its good...keep the college part as lively as it can be thru out unlike the show..continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update and plz do add me to your pm list.