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FF-Aankhon Mein Teri (Part1:Ch.1-15) - Page 89

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome prt,finally sm progress in maaneets relation
luvd it.
happy new yr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO LAXMI

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE
FINALLY THEIR RELATION SEEMS TO BE MOVING FORWARD THOGH AT A SNAIL'S PACE
BUT SO GLAD THAT MAAN HAS ACCEPTED THE BABY AND LOVES TO BE WITH HIM AND DO THINGS FOR HIM. HE GENUINELY CARES FOR THE LITTLE ONE AND THIS GIVES MORE SCOPE FOR THE RELATION TO GET A STEP UP
BUT LIKED THE WAY HE MISSED THEIR PRESENCE FOR THE FIRST TIME IN HIS LIFE
LOVE DADI AND NANI FOR BEING SO SWEET AS TO CALL HER MOTHER OVER FOR A VISIT
GIVE REGULAR UPDATES NOW
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was wonderful :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
good improvement.. Maan is taking care of the baby and has some feelings for Geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update, it was long and wonderful to read... hope to find more updates in my inbox soon... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
A superb chapter Laxmi.. how Maan is slowly(oh so slowly) being made to come out of his shell.. and the chatty , friendly mails that serve more for their friendship and ease with one another than anything.. simply super.

This gradual softening and warming of Maan is most realistic.. makes me long for the day , this lonely isolated man gets what he deserves and returns it in equal measure to those who deserve it too.

I love this story.. please do continue soon .. and wish you a very Happy New Year !

Edited by ninand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww loved it
so maan is started taking care of david n he n geet are also interacting more than before wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update
Maaneet are getting close
Loving that
David is sho cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy New Year dear...

part 14
wow lovely part...
Maan is moving on and David is so cute...
Geet has made Maan get involved with David and theres no resentment in any way...
wow and Maan doesnt stutter with David...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally, there is something developing b/w Maaneet...David is a miracle that Dadi was hoping for which would bring Maaneet closer, loved the update

Happy New Year!!!