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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
The original title is misleading but i loved the episodes written in it.Check the collection of 60 episodes and give feedback.
 
Episodes posted after permission from the original writer who was reluctant to change the title of the topic.
 
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Here it begins:

Shree Ganeshaya Namah:

Maan is in hospital,the little girl child is with Pinky and Adi,the two friends of Geet who are now married couples..

Maan is reluctant to leave Geet's dead body and is in a state of shock....

Doctors call dadi and request her to take Maan back home,its a state of shock for everyone,Adi and Pinky are looking after the girl kid in their house,Pinky's father is also there.

Maan has not shed a single drop of tear,doctors want him to cry but he is not...

Dadi takes Maan home and the final rituals are over for Geet...

"Geet hui sabse parayiiii"

Maan is in his room,he is not with the child,dadi is worried to see Maan's state...

Arjun and Annie arrive,Arjun is a good husband and is now a friend of Maan Singh Khurana...

He suggests dadi to wrap the bussines in Delhi and go to Mumbai permanently so that Geet's memories dont trouble Maan..

Dadi feels it is the right idea and good for the girl child Reashu..

Dadi calls Adi and Pinky with the girl child...

Adi,pinky,Arjun and Annie are in a conversation.

Dont worry fans,you wont see much of AA track later,but I have to show them for few scenes...becasue Arjun will help Maan wrap his bussiness...

The above plot will take two episodes...

Episode 3

Maan has still not shed tears and is still in a state of shock with eyes wide open...

He goes to his room and lies down and suddenly feels something is poking and is beneath his head..

Its the "taveez" which Geet gifted to Maan..

He takes the Taveez and tears roll out..

Here I take you in flash back and all those scenes from the first time Geet got the taaveez to when she gifted him on the first proposal to many others which followed..

This scene will take you back to all Maaneet moments you witnissed....

Long scene which will come before first break and just before the break...

You will see Maan slowly crying and the intensity and the pain of Geet not around drowning him in tears...

The tough and very smiling Maan is shouting and crying for death...becasue he cant live without Geet around...

Dadi,pinky,Adi Sir and AA rush to Maan,the little kid is taken to room by pinky...

Maan is unconcious and is taken to hospital...

Dadi decides to take the suggestion from Arjun and is all set to sell the entire property in Delhi and move to Mumbai...

What next comes here,those interested can wait and as requested,those who are not,can move on


 


Edited by raksha_bakshi - 16 March 2011 at 11:22pm

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Episode 4:

Selling the property is not a joke and will take time,Maan is in hospital...

Here I show Maan unconcious and in his unconcious state of mind he is remembering all those moments he spent with Geet...

Here I take you back in flash back....

Now at this point,I will show you those scenes which were left out by Nissar but now can be used as flashback moment or dream sequence becasue in dream and flash back you dont need story sequence,just have to relate and justify the scene and relate it..to the circumstances...

The idea is to,when scene ends,Maan will regain conciousness and will have tears and will be searching for Geet in the hospital room only to slowly realise she is not alive...

Dadi and Adi sir come in...Maan requests dadi that he wont go back home becasue he wont be able to bear the fact that Geet is not alive and her memories would kill him..

Dadi tries to console and makes Maan understand that Geet is in his heart,his mind and soul,whereever he goes,he will find Geet..Adi Sir request Maan to control himself..

All come back home and Maan is sleeping calmly.the little girl child is crying and wants her mother Geet and dad Maan with her...

Reashu is Dev and Geet's daughter and Dadi is worried about Maaneet( son of Maan and Geet.)..who is with Geet's parents and is a small 3 year old kid...

Offcousre the leap is been taken earlier...

Maan wakes up and goes to out house......

episode ends...



Edited by raksha_bakshi - 16 March 2011 at 11:27pm
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Episode 5:

Maan reaches out house and remembers the first meeting when Geet came to outhouse..

The entire episode is all about Maan and Geet..

The song "Toh phir aao,mujhko rulao,toh phir aao,mujhko satao" from the movie awarapn in the background...song sequence

The entire first half of the new episode dedicated to this scene,with cute memories between Maan and Geet relived...

Just before the break..Maan is showed slowly controlling himself...


With a line

" Laut aao Geet"

In break timings u see a car racing and racing very fast...after the break...

Entersssssssssssssssssssssss

Maansi Nayyar:

Who Maansi Nayyar?

Drashti Dhami as Maansi Nayyar: 21st century girl,born and brought up in Mumbai...

Civil engineer by profession and is a Vaastu specialist as well...

She is a very lively person and beleives in:

"Men havent changed their attitude towards women"

"Work hard,party harder"

She is a social animal,loves to party,is decent,she is succesfull,she is a very dynamic person and she is an identity to recon.

Punjabi girl who is a very lively person but comes from a family with traditional values and respects her family,enjoys being with them...

She thinks her parents have given her freedom to do what she feels is right,but staying within the limits of traditions and family and cultural values and ethics..

She beleives,freedom is meant to be practiced and not abused,by acts which will hurt your family and your close ones...

She belongs to a joint family,where you will find a great joint family environment..

Considering the popularity of Maaneet and new series,star one and gul khan after repeated pleads from Nissar have agreed to invest even more and make GHSP a mega epic series...


But Maansi Nayyar is Venudas Punjabi's friend...?

Now who the hell he is?

Will tell you later...

So this is description of Maansi Nayyar in short,which you will eventually see in future..

Where were we...

Yes...

Maan is slowly controlling himself with a feel in his words..

"Laut aao Geet"

You see a branded and class car,can be anything,Audi,Mercedes,BMW any..one..

Racing on the highway,now just like typical daily soap entry,you wont see a girl waving a handkercheif and throwing unnecessary attitude...

Maansi Nayyar is different,she is tom boyish...

She is in a racing competition with Venudas Punjabi....

But she is in USA and has gone there for some project and bussiness work along with Venu...

Break..and after the break..

The introductory scene will make you feel Maansi is a spoiled personality and is a daughter of some industrialist,but she is not and offcouse she wins the race,with Venu and makes fun of Venu who tries catchy lines like

"Haar kar Jitne waale ko Baazigar kehte hai"

Maansi replies to Venu

"Mujhe woh le jayega,joh mujhse woh teen shabd apneliye bulvaye"

(The one whose personality and attitude forces me to say "I love you")

Episode ends with Maan in one scene in India with tears in his eyes and our Drashti in new avataar as Maansi in other...

Yes,its day in USA and night in India..so you will feel the difference...



Edited by raksha_bakshi - 16 March 2011 at 11:28pm
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Episode 6:

Maan is still in outhouse and calls dadi,lets her know he will be staying in outhouse,becasue he feels good in the outhouse,requests her not to force and object the decision and asks Nakul to get his clothes and other requirements...

Dadi requests Adi to take Reashu to his house,where she can stay with and play with "Kulbeer" Adi and Pinky's son whose petname is "Mirinda" offcouse pinky is such a foodie that after his sons zhand she keeps her petname" Mirinda" as a tribute to those three bald people in Mirinda add...

Dadi goes to out house...

Here Maansi is with Venu...

Venu teases her even " God cant force her to say I love you" so it means she will never ever marry..

Maansi rubbishes off and asks Venu to keep wedding topic away becasue she wants to be as big as Venu...

Driving her own high end car... "Beatle" she wants to gift Beatle to her mom...

Offcouse now you get that Maansi was driving Venu's car and Venu is a son of an American industrialist of Indian origin and loves India becasue his Mom was from India and loves Mumbai,becasue the spirit of the city appeals and

There is someone else in Mumbai which appeals him and forces him to stay there...

Scene in out house:

Dadi Maa is in conversation with Maan and before she could console and make Maan understand...Maan himself says to dadi..

He can never ever imagine and accept that Geet is not around but he feels her presence and no one can make him understand she is not alive...

( Maan's back ground music,tadap tadap ke and the one where ooh ho oho ho in sad tune)
is on in the back ground..

Break...

Dadi feels bad for Maan,she calls Arjun and requests him to make the process of selling the property faster,as it is important...

Dadi..follows Maan and put forths the idea of moving to Mumbai,which Maan objects and is upset that without his consent dadi asked Arjun to proceed with the idea..

Break..

Maansi is with Venu and tells Venu not to worry about her wedding,she knows there is someone who can make her say those three words and she wont be searching for the guy,he has to come infront of her..and he will

Here Maan to dadi:

"Mein Geet ko chodkar kabhi Mumbai nahi jaunga,Jahan Geet basti hai wahi Maan ka astitva hai"

Episode ends with Maan and Maansi together on one screen,like starone always does

Edited by raksha_bakshi - 16 March 2011 at 11:29pm
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Episode 7:

Maan moves out and another moment of flash back comes in with Geet and Maan in flash back,where Geet and Maan are discussing how their life would be without each other and their responsibilities towards the kids...

It is not a scene shot earlier,but you would get to see Geet with Maan,so all those who think they wont get to see Geet,they would get to see Geet with Maan...

It would be the place where Maan and Geet hang out,during their stay in out house,with a zhulla...may be where Maan and Geet had ice cream..

Entire 10 mins conversation and at the end,Maan realising his responsibilities towards Reashu the girl child and the little boy Maaneet...

Just before the break:

Maansi is shown talking to Venu who has arranged a party for her,before she leaves for Mumbai,party with friends and all....

Break..

Post break,party scenes where Maansi is shown partying like a wild animal,for many fans to still feel she is a spoiled character...

At last,it will be a scene where ...

Maan after recollecting the memories of the conversation with Geet in the past,realises moving to Mumbai might be good for him and their kids.

Maansi says I am coming and Maan says " Shayad Mumbai Jaane mein hi bhalayi hai"

Episode ends yet again with Maan in one pic and Maansi in other...



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Episode 8:

Since Maan realises that he cant loose control,he goes back and asks dadi where Reashu is? Dadi tells Maan that she is with Adi and Pinky..

Maan goes to Adi's house: Reashu is crying and is asking for Geet,Pinky's father tries to make her understand that Geet has gone somewhere and will come back in few days.
Pinky too tries to make Reashu understand that Geet will come in few days...

Maan is silently hearing this...as Adi has already opened the door..

A controlled and very stable Maan,with pain of Geet's death decides to say the truth to Reashu and takes her out for an ice cream..

Reashu though Dev's daughter is very close to Maan:

Here I will be writing a scene which will make all of you cry,just like u dud when Maan cried on saturday...

Maan will be making reashu realise that Geet is dead and she will never come back...

( Writing team's toughest job) dialogues not yet decided..but the scene would be Maan making Reashu realise,her Mom is no more,but he would never ever make her feel alone..

Reashu is a kid,but as a girl kid promises Maan she would never ever ask for her Mom Geet...and like a good girl would support Maan..

Here I will be showing a relationship which is very similar to what one shared by Sharukh Khan in Kuch Kuch hota hai with his daughter...

Break:

Maan drops Reashu at Adi's place to spend time with "Mirinda" or kulbeer and as she is close to Pinky,she will feel better with her Pinky Aunty...

Maan returns home and dadi is somewhat pleased to see Maan under control..

In america:

Its morning,( The time difference) Maansi gets up and calls Venu to arrange the meeting earlier as she has some important work to do...before leaving for Mumbai...

break:

Dadi is shown thinking of the need of a second marriage becasue of kids,but with a strong feeling that Maan will never agree to marry again..

Scene ends with dadi wondering if Maan will ever marry again and Maansi in america...two pics..episode ends..


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Episode9:

Well those who feel where will Nissar shoot scenes of America then in India and specially in Mumbai and my city Poona,there are many places which will give a feel of one being in America...

Specially racing scene can be donne on Mumbai Poona highway or Mumbai Banglore Highway...

So the story continues...


The actual entry of Maansi is yet to come,till now she is shown like one who is a spoiled girl and beleives in fun...The meeting is kept a secret...for now to reveal it later...

The episode begins with Maansi and Venu happy with the outcome of the meeting and now Venu asks Maansi why she had asked Venu to arrange the meeting early...

Maansi wants to visit Church and confess something....in the confession box....

She does not reveal this to Venu and visits church before leaving for Mumbai....

Maan returns to out house and is thinking of his interaction with Reashu the child and comes Geet in Maan's imagination...

You cant call this as illogical,becasue Maan loves Geet alot and feels her presence every where...

He is thinking of if he has done right by revealing the truth to Reashu..

Here you get another interaction as Maan and Geet...but it is a kind of what you have seen in Mohabatein..for me it looked stupid..then..but with Maan and Geet I can feel what love is all about..its feeling the presence even when the person is not around..and true love is loving the person even when the other person is no more and would never come back..


Hmmm feeling the pain...where are the nok zhoks..

Well they will come ahead,thoda build up toh ho jane do yaaarooo...

Double Maza zaroor milega...

I wont make u guys cry for long and neither our Maaneet...

Break;

Maan is shown having an interaction with Arjun and agrees to sell the property and move to Mumbai...

he still has to do alot of wrapping work in Delhi,Maan is getting ready to move to Mumbai..

He decides to handover his projects in USA and UK to other firms,Dadi expresses surprise becasue it wasnt required,but Maan expresses that he wants to concentrate more on his kids and give them time and also wants a quality time for himself where he can live in Geet's memories..

Dadi justifies his decision but lets Maan know that slowly he has to come out of Geet"s memory..to which Maan reacts sharply with glare in his eyes...

Break:

Maan calms down and requests dadi and expresses that he understands what she meant,but for him the only treasure and hope he has to continue living is his kids and the memories of Geet..

There is no other hope or reason and the episode ends with

Maan and Maansi in one pic yet again..

Giving fans the excitement when they would confront each other and what would be the reaction of Maan..


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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Episode 10:

Maan tells dadi maa he is going to office to begin with the proceedings of wrapping up the business in Delhi and shifting to Mumbai..

On the way he picks Reashu and drops her to school,and visits Principals office and asks for any references in Mumbai becasue he is planning to move to Mumbai with Reashu...Princi assures Maan she will let him know about it..and consoles Maan..

Maan kisses Reashu and so does Reashu with a smile and Maan smiles too with controlled tears in his eyes...

Maan reaches office,Adi sir and Pinky are there,Romeo,Pandeyji and Manishaa are still there,Tasha and Sasha have left the job way back..

Seeing Maan in office Adi Sir is surprised and as Adi Sir knows..Maan calls Adi in his cabin and instructs him to call a meeting of all HOD's immediately...to begin with the process of wrapping and shifting the office to Mumbai and also asks for details regarding the projects which are on in the Noida and Gurgaon belt,to close them as soon as possible or outsource them or sell them..specifically mentions about projects in UK and US

Adi leaves and comes in peon..with a mug of coffee...

Maan is busy in his file and sees the coffee mug..

Here I will take you to flash back moment when Geet first came to Khurana Constructions...and Sasha cheats her and adds 5 sugar cubes to coffee..

Just before the break Maan asks the peon for sugar cubes...

After the break you will see..

Maan who never had sugar in coffee.. is actually adding sugar cubes to it one by one and with every sugar cube would flash a memory a scene from past.....

And is feeling the moment he had spent with Geet..

And takes sip of coffee which is alot sweeter than he generally drinks...

Break...

Maan looks up and you would find tears in his eyes,but he wont be shedding them for sure,he is strong and he is still strong but expresses his feel in controlled manner..

Adi enters back and scene changes to Maansi..

Maansi on the other hand gets a call from her Mom,where her Mom asks her to check the snap of a boy who is an NRI and is an MBA by profession and wants her to atleast have a look..

Maansi is very career oriented and feels it is not required and tells Mom that she will talk to her after returning back home..

break;

Maan is thinking about how his life is going to be in Mumbai and is thinking about reashu and the kid Maaneet..

Maansi on the other hand is all set to come back to Mumbai as her purpose is over..

The episode ends with Maan thinking how his life would be in Mumbai and Maansi preparing to fly back to Mumbai..

Both the pics..again...

See you next week guys..


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