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Lust/Love? || AR/KaJen OS || For Sahar <3 (Page 5)

ambryn Goldie
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Fantastic.... loved it completely
 
Welcome back...
 
Love,
Ambryn

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
AMAZINNNNNNNNNn Phattyy Clap
I Love the way its written :D
Its like characters reversed with Riddhima being the confident one here...the not so soft one...nd Armaan being the introvert....lol
I loveee the wa u described hw they gt attracted towards each other nd get pulled towards each otherEmbarrassed nd the ahemmm night scene description is allBlushing tehe
I want u tto write more nd more stuff...
keep up the gud work baby Heart

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome os
loved it
mindblowing concept
loved armaan
thanks 4 sharing
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged

One word to describe your OS!! WOWWWWWW I loveeed it :) It was soo gooodd. You really need to write more often! The description and characters and all were soo perfect!!

The concept was good I really enjoyed reading it <3 I think this is the 1st story in which Riddhima and Armaan's characters are switched. But I'm glad you did it, I liked Riddhima's character. The fact that she is confident and not the one who is so shy and simple.

I loved every single bit of this OS! Everything was soo hottt rofl honestly I don't even know what to write because you have written soo beautifully that I can't even express how much I loved this.

It was a shocker for some parts but it was amazingggg!! Armaan being the single father was quite interesting, it actually amazed me.

Overall awesome OS beautifully written and you need to write more often hun! I loved your concept and everything :) :)



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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:05am | IP Logged
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:17am | IP Logged
PHATYYY..that was just awsummmm...luved it absolutely..u r just fantastic writer...and primarily  I luved ridz character...it was different from her usual seedhi saadhi types LOLLL...and AR chemistry romantic ..just tuk my hear away ..do write more dear..its LOVELYYYY:)))))


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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
phatty edited my post on page 2!!!!!!!!!! and will read the os's that u posted the link for ;)


Edited by CT247 - 17 March 2011 at 10:40am

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Hey there beautiful! ;) Finally back to edit my post. :$ 

Firstly, I seriously envy you for how beautifully you write. It's just...amazing. I don't think I can put it into words how well you write, seriously. I know I sound cheesy but IDC I'm being honest. I don't even know if my comment will do any justice to your OS but anyway ~

I was SO into the OS that I didn't realise when it ended. It was just so HOT. :| I didn't want it to end, especially with they way you had written it out, it was so gripping and kept me till the edge of my seat till the very end. I LOVE Ridhima's character in your OS. I was really tired of reading/writing about the oh-so-innocent Ridhima and bad boy Armaan. This was something different, which just added to my interest in the OS. I wouldn't have been able to imagine Ridhima in such a character had you not portrayed her so well. <3

 I seriously loved how they both had a past which sorta drew them closer! The passionate scene was described so well, I had butterflies in my stomach :| LOL. It was so unexpected but I loved it tehe :$ ARmaan's character was just WOW. I love reading about Armaan more than Ridhima in FF's/OS's to be honest..I always look forward to his entrance. It was nice to see how both of them noticed each to such a great extent. It was as if just one sight was enough for them to look forward to their next meeting/interaction. I hope I'm making sense. :$ Anywhooooo, Phatty you did a GREAT job! Seriously, I am in awe of your writing and this is the hundredth time I'm saying it but I DO mean it. =) Pleaseee write more often, we need flawless writers like you! <3 Muaaah!

- Mel. 

PS: I LOVED Armaan and his daughter, I would've loved to see their interaction but it's all good, hehe! I can imagine him as a father! <3


Edited by TheMelody. - 19 March 2011 at 5:51pm

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