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Maaneet FF: Whispering Knolls NEW LINK on Pg141 (Page 122)

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

res

ll edit both the post after reading the second one

Btw love u darling ...umah ..Hug

~*Edit*~

The update was really Enchanting ...specially the dance part!!!

Beautifully penned down ...lovely!!!

wha wha ..kya baat hai ...Maan & TamilLOL ...Btw the song u r hiniting is "Poi solla kudathu kadhli" & I would have loved it more if u used the same word instead of nanbiEmbarrassed.
ahhh i thought nobody would recognize that song i was a bit hesitant to write that dialogue i even thought of attaching a note to it... but i didnt want to overdo it... but thnx for making my day by recognizing it Smile of course he learnt tamil... u know with geet around n her tamil cribbings its not hard to learn LOL for him she is his best mate, friend, guide, well-wisher... he is yet to realize kadhali in her n thats y i am here to make him realize Wink

woh tho Geet ka jadoo hai ...Wink well do that honor ...& I'm tihink arjun ll pop-up in the frame ..to make his day hell for making his ammalu cry ..Btw let it be in sweet way ..Be warned no pain to Maan ..If want lil pain ll goWink
of course arjun will pop-up n i mean this time its going to be WWIII n i dont think arjun would easily forgive maan... so geet will intervene to make sure maan is not hurt in anyway... n tumhe pata hai arjun cannot say no to her Wink

Thats better ...b4 arjun's action ..I need the proper reason y he is blaming Maan???
arre jaan abhi bhi tumhe nahi pata ki kyun arjun is blaming maan Confused
I mean the exact reason ..but I knw y he is blaming him ..so DW 
well that is the exact reason... Big smile

Both needs to ask each-other about their life ...but they are shrugging it off thinking they would ask later.
seeing each other after this long itself is a big thing for them. i dont know if u remember the airport scene that i had written briefly showcases his pain as well as hers. he is losing his best friend n she is loosing her love it is really heart wrenching for both of them... n to be meeting after that long i dont think they would have words to describe each other's absence in their respective lives.. only tears (its both happy n sad tears; happy for they meet again, sad for they hv missed each other for so long) well asking about each other's life has to wait a little.. i want them to live in their own fantasy world they hv built for each other... i hv planned a few past scenes so in the future updates watch out for new charac Wink

I remember that ...so next update would be on past note ...looking forward.
haan ji Wink

ho jiLOL
lol Tongue

ROFL

Maaneet moments were sweet ..starting from dance,fighting over to pay cab fare,dinner,their small talks ...Beautiful!!!

But y Geet has lied in the past that she has moved on with Arjun???I'm not believing that Arjun-Geet are married ...but y she have put the play???
well maan thinks its arjun... wait for geet's explanation she shall clear arjun off but... *mouth zipped*LOL

But ...???? ab kya hai???
vahi toh dekho zara Wink there are going to be more confusions... u know thr is a kahavat if u say one lie u end up saying 1000 more to cover that one lie... r u getting my point Wink

Ofcourse dearWink
good good good Big smile

Thank u ..Thank u ..Thank uTongue
welcum welcum welcum Wink

Let me ask u something ...was their secret marriage??? 

was Maan's marriage was already fixed with someone ...maybe Radhika,issliye Geet left him.

But I'm sure onething with myself that I'm Confused ...I know it would be cleared only with ur update ..so u have to take care of ur self & Get well soon & update it soon.
dont get confused too much... i think in the next few updates of the past with intro of new charac shall clear the picture a little bit...Big smile

a little bit ...Confused so radhika's entry can be expected soon ...ll be waiting for it.
yes definitely... but i want a little more maaneet scene in the past too... i am going to include one scene that is very important for geet... remember in the past she starts to see maan as her friend but when does it turn into love? the scene i am going to write shall show her transition... what say?? Wink

What to say ...just go on with it ...now I'm eagerly waiting.

Hope Maan will find out about Geet's lie soon.
geet is too smart for him dont u think WinkLOL

Do u think so??? well I don't ..coz both are sameWink
haan yeh toh maanna padega hi...Smile
Glad that U got thatWink
haha danks Big smile
U r welcomeTongue

wonderful update!!!
 

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

Beautiful Madhu ...Star(this time not just te update but also UWink
nandri nandri nandri LOL

vanakkam vanakkam vanakkamLOL
LOLLOLLOL

Geet was so elegant ...kya entry mara hai ...pari jaise ...the way u described I thought she has dressed up to blow off his sense ...& U see I was correctEmbarrassed ...poor soul ...can't stop himself from admiring herEmbarrassedLOL ...but he tried to control himselfD'ohLOL ...DW MSK u can do that honor next time ...I'm sure U ll get the chance ...kyu Madhu,chance de donge hena???Wink
ya chance de doongi magar he is MSK afterall... bechara ek baar pyaar kia magar doosri baar karega kya (did i reveal too muchShocked)

actually what u have revealed here???but I'm getting some flashes ...Do u mean to say Maan was in love???
i revealed abt maan Confused haan unhone pyaar kiya Embarrassed
DW ..my mouth zippedLOL
maan-ku premam vannalo vannalo... Wink

vantuchu vantuchuEmbarrassed
koodi seekkaram vannu Wink but there shall be a problem Ouch

Course there ll be problem ..thats y love is divine
haha of course love is divine n that same love shall become the problem...Ouch

OMG ...Geet is checking out himShocked ...Bechari GeetOuch ...even she can't stop herself from drooling over himLOL
of course maan is her first and last love...Embarrassed

woh mujhe bhi pat hai ...but who ll tell that dumbo???
oi kisko dumbo bola Angry oh u mean maan haan sach much mein voh dumbo hi hain LOL

Mere Maan ko ...Btw only I can call him.
LOL u must be kidding rite Tongue of course i can call him too magar its k only u call him coz i shall call him loosu fellow Wink

No I'm serious ...& dare U call him like thatAngry
Cry wah wah wah... he is loosu though LOL

ro mat darling ...challo teek hai ...as u r my darling I granting u permissionWink
Big smile thank u...Hug

I liked their Hide & Seek game ...lekin poor hider ..hargaya seeker ki samnaeLOL 
she lost her heart itself...loosing a game is not a big deal for her Wink

pyar hai ...so everything is fairEmbarrassed
of course everything is fair... but loosing to ur love is sweeter Wink

nothing is more pleasurable than that dearHeart
that is sooo trueee Smile

Hug

I liked his teasing ...cho sweet ...he knows how to play the gameEmbarrassed ...but u made him cried!!!
haan magar tum hamesha maan crying ko complain karti ho bechari geet uski kya Ouch how much pain she is enduring uska bhi toh khayal rakh...

I think u have got a point thereTongue
ha i always do LOL

*LOL ROFL *U r kidding rightWink
ahem ahem of course not OuchLOL

challo ...as u r not well ..I ll go with u his timeWink
ji thnk u Big smile ek minute kyaa Shocked main bimaar hoon isliye chod rahi ho hm! *pouting*

Just kidding ..come on give me ur sweet smileTongue
*peeking from the corner of my eyes* ahem Big smile

loved it ...the way he let out all his emotions of those five years of loneliness was beautiful!!!

so finally Geet realized that pain enduring him is coz of her ...but y she left him in first place ...whether she don't that she is his happiness???
actually even maan hasnt realized she is her ultimate happiness... i mean he knows she was not there during the most times he needed n it has pained him deeply but will he know she is needed even during the best times in his life...

Babaji ...mere Maan ko ..us dumbo ko kuch akal dona???
oi khabardar meri geet ko dumbo kaha toh Angry magar if geet is dumbo her best buddy maan is a bigger dumbo LOL

ROFL ...Geet ko nahi mere Maan ko ...& ur principles can be followed here too ...magar if Maan is dumbo his best buddy Geet is a bigger dumbo LOLROFL
well both are for that matter... she is pagli for keeping her feelings from him n he is a loosu to not see her feelings for him ROFL

BINGOROFL
dank u dank u Embarrassed who shall we make the cupid Embarrassed

U r welcome ...Rocking
rocking??? yeh kaun hai Confused

wonderful update!!!
thnx for the lovely comments my dear kunjuuu maniii luv ya Hug

luv u 2...Hug 

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-

res

ll edit both the post after reading the second one

Btw love u darling ...umah ..Hug

~*Edit*~

The update was really Enchanting ...specially the dance part!!!

Beautifully penned down ...lovely!!!

wha wha ..kya baat hai ...Maan & TamilLOL ...Btw the song u r hiniting is "Poi solla kudathu kadhli" & I would have loved it more if u used the same word instead of nanbiEmbarrassed.
ahhh i thought nobody would recognize that song i was a bit hesitant to write that dialogue i even thought of attaching a note to it... but i didnt want to overdo it... but thnx for making my day by recognizing it Smile of course he learnt tamil... u know with geet around n her tamil cribbings its not hard to learn LOL for him she is his best mate, friend, guide, well-wisher... he is yet to realize kadhali in her n thats y i am here to make him realize Wink

woh tho Geet ka jadoo hai ...Wink well do that honor ...& I'm tihink arjun ll pop-up in the frame ..to make his day hell for making his ammalu cry ..Btw let it be in sweet way ..Be warned no pain to Maan ..If want lil pain ll goWink
of course arjun will pop-up n i mean this time its going to be WWIII n i dont think arjun would easily forgive maan... so geet will intervene to make sure maan is not hurt in anyway... n tumhe pata hai arjun cannot say no to her Wink

Thats better ...b4 arjun's action ..I need the proper reason y he is blaming Maan???
arre jaan abhi bhi tumhe nahi pata ki kyun arjun is blaming maan Confused
I mean the exact reason ..but I knw y he is blaming him ..so DW 
well that is the exact reason... Big smile
that is a lame reason according to meConfused

Both needs to ask each-other about their life ...but they are shrugging it off thinking they would ask later.
seeing each other after this long itself is a big thing for them. i dont know if u remember the airport scene that i had written briefly showcases his pain as well as hers. he is losing his best friend n she is loosing her love it is really heart wrenching for both of them... n to be meeting after that long i dont think they would have words to describe each other's absence in their respective lives.. only tears (its both happy n sad tears; happy for they meet again, sad for they hv missed each other for so long) well asking about each other's life has to wait a little.. i want them to live in their own fantasy world they hv built for each other... i hv planned a few past scenes so in the future updates watch out for new charac Wink

I remember that ...so next update would be on past note ...looking forward.
haan ji Wink

ho jiLOL
lol Tongue

ROFL

Maaneet moments were sweet ..starting from dance,fighting over to pay cab fare,dinner,their small talks ...Beautiful!!!

But y Geet has lied in the past that she has moved on with Arjun???I'm not believing that Arjun-Geet are married ...but y she have put the play???
well maan thinks its arjun... wait for geet's explanation she shall clear arjun off but... *mouth zipped*LOL

But ...???? ab kya hai???
vahi toh dekho zara Wink there are going to be more confusions... u know thr is a kahavat if u say one lie u end up saying 1000 more to cover that one lie... r u getting my point Wink

Ofcourse dearWink
good good good Big smile

Thank u ..Thank u ..Thank uTongue
welcum welcum welcum Wink
Hug
Let me ask u something ...was their secret marriage??? 

was Maan's marriage was already fixed with someone ...maybe Radhika,issliye Geet left him.

But I'm sure onething with myself that I'm Confused ...I know it would be cleared only with ur update ..so u have to take care of ur self & Get well soon & update it soon.
dont get confused too much... i think in the next few updates of the past with intro of new charac shall clear the picture a little bit...Big smile

a little bit ...Confused so radhika's entry can be expected soon ...ll be waiting for it.
yes definitely... but i want a little more maaneet scene in the past too... i am going to include one scene that is very important for geet... remember in the past she starts to see maan as her friend but when does it turn into love? the scene i am going to write shall show her transition... what say?? Wink

What to say ...just go on with it ...now I'm eagerly waiting.

Hope Maan will find out about Geet's lie soon.
geet is too smart for him dont u think WinkLOL

Do u think so??? well I don't ..coz both are sameWink
haan yeh toh maanna padega hi...Smile
Glad that U got thatWink
haha danks Big smile
U r welcomeTongue

wonderful update!!!
 


Edited by -dia- - 13 June 2011 at 9:05am
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
lovely update, thanks for the PM and hope you feel better cuz we need updates again soon. Wink

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
MySpace Get Well Soon Comment - 8
hooray maaneet met
cat dancing
geet stuck to stay by maan side fab
dancing part was sizzling love it
geet taking maan home superb
but me waiting to know why geet
left maan & the reason
fabulous both part
love it core
btw i'll maan meet katrika
i real appreciate for double dhamaka
even though ur sick but yu made us
smile
bow to yu
muah
i luv yu sis

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

res

ll edit both the post after reading the second one

Btw love u darling ...umah ..Hug

~*Edit*~

The update was really Enchanting ...specially the dance part!!!

Beautifully penned down ...lovely!!!

wha wha ..kya baat hai ...Maan & TamilLOL ...Btw the song u r hiniting is "Poi solla kudathu kadhli" & I would have loved it more if u used the same word instead of nanbiEmbarrassed.
ahhh i thought nobody would recognize that song i was a bit hesitant to write that dialogue i even thought of attaching a note to it... but i didnt want to overdo it... but thnx for making my day by recognizing it Smile of course he learnt tamil... u know with geet around n her tamil cribbings its not hard to learn LOL for him she is his best mate, friend, guide, well-wisher... he is yet to realize kadhali in her n thats y i am here to make him realize Wink

woh tho Geet ka jadoo hai ...Wink well do that honor ...& I'm tihink arjun ll pop-up in the frame ..to make his day hell for making his ammalu cry ..Btw let it be in sweet way ..Be warned no pain to Maan ..If want lil pain ll goWink
of course arjun will pop-up n i mean this time its going to be WWIII n i dont think arjun would easily forgive maan... so geet will intervene to make sure maan is not hurt in anyway... n tumhe pata hai arjun cannot say no to her Wink

Thats better ...b4 arjun's action ..I need the proper reason y he is blaming Maan???
arre jaan abhi bhi tumhe nahi pata ki kyun arjun is blaming maan Confused
I mean the exact reason ..but I knw y he is blaming him ..so DW 
well that is the exact reason... Big smile
that is a lame reason according to meConfused
lame Shocked how is it lame???? 

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-

Beautiful Madhu ...Star(this time not just te update but also UWink
nandri nandri nandri LOL

vanakkam vanakkam vanakkamLOL
LOLLOLLOL

Geet was so elegant ...kya entry mara hai ...pari jaise ...the way u described I thought she has dressed up to blow off his sense ...& U see I was correctEmbarrassed ...poor soul ...can't stop himself from admiring herEmbarrassedLOL ...but he tried to control himselfD'ohLOL ...DW MSK u can do that honor next time ...I'm sure U ll get the chance ...kyu Madhu,chance de donge hena???Wink
ya chance de doongi magar he is MSK afterall... bechara ek baar pyaar kia magar doosri baar karega kya (did i reveal too muchShocked)

actually what u have revealed here???but I'm getting some flashes ...Do u mean to say Maan was in love???
i revealed abt maan Confused haan unhone pyaar kiya Embarrassed
DW ..my mouth zippedLOL
maan-ku premam vannalo vannalo... Wink

vantuchu vantuchuEmbarrassed
koodi seekkaram vannu Wink but there shall be a problem Ouch

Course there ll be problem ..thats y love is divine
haha of course love is divine n that same love shall become the problem...Ouch
to make the relation strongerHeart

OMG ...Geet is checking out himShocked ...Bechari GeetOuch ...even she can't stop herself from drooling over himLOL
of course maan is her first and last love...Embarrassed

woh mujhe bhi pat hai ...but who ll tell that dumbo???
oi kisko dumbo bola Angry oh u mean maan haan sach much mein voh dumbo hi hain LOL

Mere Maan ko ...Btw only I can call him.
LOL u must be kidding rite Tongue of course i can call him too magar its k only u call him coz i shall call him loosu fellow Wink

No I'm serious ...& dare U call him like thatAngry
Cry wah wah wah... he is loosu though LOL

ro mat darling ...challo teek hai ...as u r my darling I granting u permissionWink
Big smile thank u...Hug
U r welcomeWink

I liked their Hide & Seek game ...lekin poor hider ..hargaya seeker ki samnaeLOL 
she lost her heart itself...loosing a game is not a big deal for her Wink

pyar hai ...so everything is fairEmbarrassed
of course everything is fair... but loosing to ur love is sweeter Wink

nothing is more pleasurable than that dearHeart
that is sooo trueee Smile

Hug

I liked his teasing ...cho sweet ...he knows how to play the gameEmbarrassed ...but u made him cried!!!
haan magar tum hamesha maan crying ko complain karti ho bechari geet uski kya Ouch how much pain she is enduring uska bhi toh khayal rakh...

I think u have got a point thereTongue
ha i always do LOL

*LOL ROFL *U r kidding rightWink
ahem ahem of course not OuchLOL

challo ...as u r not well ..I ll go with u his timeWink
ji thnk u Big smile ek minute kyaa Shocked main bimaar hoon isliye chod rahi ho hm! *pouting*

Just kidding ..come on give me ur sweet smileTongue
*peeking from the corner of my eyes* ahem Big smile
thats goodLOL

loved it ...the way he let out all his emotions of those five years of loneliness was beautiful!!!

so finally Geet realized that pain enduring him is coz of her ...but y she left him in first place ...whether she don't that she is his happiness???
actually even maan hasnt realized she is her ultimate happiness... i mean he knows she was not there during the most times he needed n it has pained him deeply but will he know she is needed even during the best times in his life...

Babaji ...mere Maan ko ..us dumbo ko kuch akal dona???
oi khabardar meri geet ko dumbo kaha toh Angry magar if geet is dumbo her best buddy maan is a bigger dumbo LOL

ROFL ...Geet ko nahi mere Maan ko ...& ur principles can be followed here too ...magar if Maan is dumbo his best buddy Geet is a bigger dumbo LOLROFL
well both are for that matter... she is pagli for keeping her feelings from him n he is a loosu to not see her feelings for him ROFL

BINGOROFL
dank u dank u Embarrassed who shall we make the cupid Embarrassed

U r welcome ...Rocking
rocking??? yeh kaun hai Confused
tumhari BFWinkLOL

wonderful update!!!
thnx for the lovely comments my dear kunjuuu maniii luv ya Hug

luv u 2...Hug 
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-

res

ll edit both the post after reading the second one

Btw love u darling ...umah ..Hug

~*Edit*~

The update was really Enchanting ...specially the dance part!!!

Beautifully penned down ...lovely!!!

wha wha ..kya baat hai ...Maan & TamilLOL ...Btw the song u r hiniting is "Poi solla kudathu kadhli" & I would have loved it more if u used the same word instead of nanbiEmbarrassed.
ahhh i thought nobody would recognize that song i was a bit hesitant to write that dialogue i even thought of attaching a note to it... but i didnt want to overdo it... but thnx for making my day by recognizing it Smile of course he learnt tamil... u know with geet around n her tamil cribbings its not hard to learn LOL for him she is his best mate, friend, guide, well-wisher... he is yet to realize kadhali in her n thats y i am here to make him realize Wink

woh tho Geet ka jadoo hai ...Wink well do that honor ...& I'm tihink arjun ll pop-up in the frame ..to make his day hell for making his ammalu cry ..Btw let it be in sweet way ..Be warned no pain to Maan ..If want lil pain ll goWink
of course arjun will pop-up n i mean this time its going to be WWIII n i dont think arjun would easily forgive maan... so geet will intervene to make sure maan is not hurt in anyway... n tumhe pata hai arjun cannot say no to her Wink

Thats better ...b4 arjun's action ..I need the proper reason y he is blaming Maan???
arre jaan abhi bhi tumhe nahi pata ki kyun arjun is blaming maan Confused
I mean the exact reason ..but I knw y he is blaming him ..so DW 
well that is the exact reason... Big smile
that is a lame reason according to meConfused
lame Shocked how is it lame???? 

Let me explain ...Arjun can't see Geet in pain ..& think Maan is responsible for that ...so that he might have tried to sort out that ...ya I knw Geet has taken promise not to tell Maan anything ...but still he might have hinted him ...atleast he might have given some clue in past b4 things getting out of control ..& U knw Maan ...how dumbo he is in this type of matterLOL

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