Prediction(new PG 18) ..anyone? - Page 11

all right time for a new prediction

So where is the prediction dear??? busy writing??🤔

dont ask sujju...am feeling like breaking someones head

its a long and foul prediction and i was almost at an end then power cut😡....and that too a 3 minute power cut😡......in 3 min perhaps i could finish it.......grrrrrrrrr.....dhurr....now dont feel like writing fearing the same things might happen again...happened all day today

once am done writing, i will change the pic title, dont worry ..

ohhh....... 3 min power cut...... now that's different.....😲.....

one thing i learn from Sampurn-written RKAB is that anyone can anytime put anything into a romantic story and make it an action -packed one and since the romantic story in PMMKA is just making Sarje quite weak and ad, i actually thought of placing it in different manner.

Story:

Sarje made a plan , a plan to frame Albela. Sarje was still furious that Albela used a girl to put case against Sarje as that made Maruti go agianst Sarje once again and secondly he was angry on Niru for not opening her mouth. He thought of scaring her away with tat circus job but Chandu saved her from that. So, sarje was thinking, if Al can use Niru as a puppet against Sarje, why cant Sarje use the same girl against Al too??

thinking hard, he inserted those new type of fake bullets he bought. in short distance this bullets can pierce through 1/2 inch of body causing damage to skin and some blood vessels but wont be deadly by any chance. By using his own network of slum kids, he managed to get some background info on Niru and chaman. it seems that Chamn is fida with Niru. Good, better for Sarje. Chaman wont hurt that girl then.

his rest of the plan went well , the prostitute, the chase everything. When Sarje saw from a  rooftop  Niru going home with Viswa at evening , he was suddenly at a loss. Shouldn't it be just Niru comin back from her new workplace? why that old man came too? Albela might hurt the old man, if it was only Niru then the plan would have been safe. But it was too late to turn back.now. So sarje , knowing all streets of mumbai brought Albela just to the place where Niru was. rest of the things happened smoothly. And Sarje did his part well when Niru begged for her fathers life. he threw  the gun and was sure that Al will shot him. And he did.

As the bu;llet burned Sarje's skin, he was feeling  pain but he doesnt mind this little pains , in fact he started laughing thinking that now his insiders at police station will Arrest Albela and will use Niru as an witness. And it went just like that. But Sarje was a bit lost when he saw Niru in Ambulance even ...chattering and chanting for him.  Even in hospital , se told so many good words and Sarje was a bit perplexed and also a bit annoyed, is the girl really that naive? Didnt she already see that good things in this world are never given value? he wondered.

Albela was in jail for the moment. But Sarje knew that he can come back anyday soon using political power, after all Al is backed by states woman and children policy minister which is lately given much power and funding but nonw of it ever comes to the women and children who really needs government help to survive. Sarje though once Albela comes out, Nirus life might be in danger since she witnessed against Al. Sarje decided to foloow her and make friendship with her and thus protect her for the time being. After all, at least hearing her lecture in hospital , he was sure that the girl is as naive as chandu made her seem and sarju was feeling bad for using her thus.

Second part will come up later here

Loved it Usma......... hey why don't you write an FF dear........... loved your Yudi's diary so much........ would love to see how you write Sarja FF......


waiting to know what happens in 2nd part.....

i really don't know suddenly i'm a total basket case now that these thoughts are running in my mind Sarja-Niru will be forced to marry due to circumstances created by Albela....... Sarja who already knows NIru is in love with someone...... will come to terms that time that Chandu is the one.......... Niru who will come to stay at Sarja's place will be shocked to see that they are bros......... and here is where the marriage act will start...... where only Sarja-Niru are aware that they are married........ like Sarja will make the family believe that he just wants to protect Niru from Albela....... as it was she who saved him...... family will agree to have Niru & Baba with them.......  Chandu will behave lovey dovey with Niru........ Niru although would love it but would be forced not to as she's married...... Sarja will assure her that once Albela matter is solved...... he will leave her forever & so she can marry Chandu....... thus under the same roof........  misunderstandings start clearing between Sarja-Niru........ and she starts understanding Sarja more....... they become good friends....... finally that day arrives when Sarja has to leave as Albela matter is solved........... that time Niru realises she has fallen for Sarja.........



Now i need to think what happens later..........

well,

ok currently a bit pissed about Niru😡 and so thinking of roundabout ways to avoid a sarje-Niru union at the end

came up with two idea...see if you like any one of them

1) Sarje is severely blamed in the family for Chandus death. Meanwhile, Niru cant go back to sardas home, Albela is hiding from police and may strike Niru anytime. So, sarje puts a deal with his family that he will leave home and will stop all goon works if Sushila and maruti gives shelter to Niru as she was Chandus love. They does so and Sarje leaves accordingly and tries to be good. days goes by. slowly Niru finds that she is pregnant. She has no one to tell that to and tries to commit suicide. Sonali stops her and whole family knows the truth. they are at  a loss how to amend it and goes in search for sarje and Niu goes a bit mental. Amazingly, he completely reformed within the very few months and is on the good side or trying to be a cop to catch hold of Albela. Sarje at first refuses to amrry as he abhors the very idea of being thus related to Niru-his bro chandus girl. but, Niru settles with him that there would be nothing physical. So the day of marriage comes soon when Sarje becomes a cop, but when returning from duty he spots some thief who looks like chandu and sets up with him that he will reform that lad like chandu but in return he has to accept Niru.

number 2 coming up

Nice one Usma..😍😃


Edited by sujji0609 - 12 years ago

ok number 2)

Sarje  wants to help Niru after Chandu dies. But, Niu hates him even more now and says that she can take care of herself. Away she goes. Sarje gets insulted and blamed and slapped by whole family. So, he thinks of helping everyone from being away. slowly he takes care of everyone but doesnt let them know. meanwhile, he also keeps a close eye on Niru without her knowing.

So, when niru feels that she is pregy, he knows too and thinks of ways to save her honour. he doesnt think of marrying her but is in search for grooms for her and slowly tries to be her matchmaker. So, Niru sees random guys coming and prasing her beauty and telling to mary her but once they find out that she is prgy they leave her.

So, at end, Sarje evolves as a good person and wishes to marry her for what she is. Niru is a little hesitant but knows that she has no other way. So, they agree to keep a fake marital relation and Sarje brings Niru to home. Meanwhile, Sarje who is a new cop now, meets a girl who witnessed a murder scene but cant give witness as Sarje finds she is blind.

However, sarje is a bit sympathetic towards her and that girl is of strong character and still identified the criminal with hearing voice, so Sarje respects her as wll. He goes friendly with her while Niru everyday due to pregy mind and confusing mindset keeps irritating Sarje. Sarje tries to find solace by being friendly with that blind girl and comes to know that the girl is no other but NAnda!!!!!!!!!

seems like she is by born blind so nobody wants to marry her and she doesnt want to marry people who are after her money. Thats why her mom went for Chandu as they knew chandu wont cheat with her. After chandu died, Nanda is actually feeling free and being blind, spends her day in making sculptors by using ahnd. Sarje sometimes goes to her and models for sculptors.

Slowly Nanda comes to know that Sarje leaves a complete fake romantic life and his wife doesnt value him at all. nanda falls in love with sarje . Sarje refuses to do anything that can harm Niru or her baby and says a straight no to nanda. However, during giving birth Niru dies and Sarje nanda takes the child as an orphan.

(or maybe Sarje Niru can make a fake divorce like they did  a fake marriage )