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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 48)

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

Hye jo,
this part was just awesome awesome dear.
Loved each n every line of it.
Avi is just too too romantic wondering why arsh said him un romantic.
He He He uske sath kaise romantic hota he does'nt love her at all.
Loved u bought N.P.mam again.
Chotu was also nice and avi's idea was too good.
The complete part was realy like surprise package b'coz it was full of cute & sweet surprises.

Loved avi & arpi convo a lot.

hey Rups thanx for liking it dear,

yap u guessed it right Arshi ke saath romantic kaise hota LOL

aakhir ODB apne dil ki sun ke romance karenge ya confussed mind ki Embarrassed

i m realy glad that u liked this part too 

n really very happy that u guys find it romanticLOL

rest , we will talk tomorrow ,

love ya for such sweet lovely comments dear

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
I unresed mah post on pg 48Smile

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
I edited my post in Pg 39,42,47 finally and i completed editing all the res post D'ohDancingParty

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
 
Yoohoo NehaParty!! Congratulations on completing you first fanfic...sorry, I had not been regular in reading and commenting but the finale was fantabulous and I luvvved all the dialogues between Arpita and AviClapClap...very sweet and naturalBig smile
 
I am so glad that you gave it a happy ending...those are the bestSmile...happy endings, that is.
 
Very well doneClapClapClapClap
 
Thanks for sharing your talent with usSmile
 
 

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Update my Post on page 48Cool

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged

hiee Sugar pie.. Hug

loved the ending..

although You know Im greedy for AviTa romance..you didnt continue with it.. Angry

but still..

loved the entire FF..

my fav part was 'Mesmerizing Night'

I hope you start another FF.. *we will force you Evil Smile*



love you..Muah muah..

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Great precap Neha, it's so adorable that Avi kisses Arpi's tears so each time she cries, she gets a kiss. 

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Neha darling, your final update was excellent. I loved how Avita reunited, their prom night was fabulous and of course everyone will be jealous of their jodi. I loved how Avi took care of Arpi at the hospital and how her parents accepted everything. Arshi changed for the better and found true love. Loved how Avi angered Arpi and then presented her, even I was furious. His gifts are so sweet. Carrying her was the best entry. The garden scene was romantic, especially the proposal and kiss. It reminded me of Twilight's prom, and the Cinderella Story. Thanks for the great conclusion. You wrapped everything up brilliantly.

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